/ Magical Realism / Dungeon Overlord System
摘要
Alternate Title: F-Rank Dungeon King
At one point during the history of humanity, things changed drastically. Magic was revealed to have always existed, lying under our eyes but remaining unseen.
While that energy strenghtened humanity, it also brought it's load of calamities in the form of pocket dimensions whose gates opened all over the world. Those dimensions named dungeons were the very spark that created the golden age of humanity, an age in which anyone who could use magic could become anything.
However some people decided that they wanted more power, more money, more everything. Those people were named the Hunters, greedy madmen entering dungeons in search of exciting adventures and tons of treasures.
So now, what happens when one of them just so happens to acquire the greatest treasure of all...A dungeon itself ?
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I gave this a try, I really did. But after finishing the prologue (chapter 17), I just didnt have any interest to continue reading. A lot of stuff at the beginning is so confusing and nothing is explained. It leads to a ton of guess work, and even then its difficult to keep track of stuff. It’s hard to tell if the author just didnt want to explain the stuff and expected it to be understood, or if they were trying to make it sound interesting.
this story has a good start !! ![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i havent read the novel yet although the novel synopsis looks interesting though is it translated novel? 🙂😊😇☺😁☺😁😊😁😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😇🙃😇😇
卷 1 : Genesis
- 1 Prologue 3 years ago
- 2 Like a toddler learning to walk 3 years ago
- 3 Rattling Antlers 3 years ago
- 4 Raging Fire's Excitement 3 years ago
- 5 Corpses dressing up the dining table 3 years ago
- 6 Silencing the future corpse 3 years ago
- 7 Whether you want it, or not 3 years ago
- 8 The Pain of the Strangers 3 years ago
- 9 A dumb brute, not a hero 3 years ago
- 10 The devil in a pinstripe suit already knows. 3 years ago
- 11 The primordial condition, talent 3 years ago
- 12 Remember how we dreamt. 3 years ago
- 13 The Lost Voice of the Sea 3 years ago
- 14 Under the cold tears of the Gods 3 years ago
- 15 The Legendary but Useless Weapon 3 years ago
- 16 Mice and Cats with Guns 3 years ago
- 17 Myth Are Lies ( End of prologue ) 3 years ago
- 18 A Colourful Mentor 3 years ago
- 19 Moose-Serpent-Humanoid Teacher 3 years ago
- 20 London Bridge is Falling Down 3 years ago
- 21 The System 3 years ago
- 22 Jack's Path 3 years ago
- 23 Enter the big fish's ocean ( 1 ) 3 years ago
- 24 Enter the big fish's ocean (2) 3 years ago
- 25 Enter the big fish's ocean (3) 3 years ago
- 26 Dark Tower 3 years ago
- 27 Foes, Woes, Heroes 3 years ago
- 28 Finger pointing 3 years ago
- 29 Path of the Valorous 3 years ago
- 30 Whoever may be the Hunters ( 1 ) 3 years ago
- 31 Hey 3 years ago
- 32 Whoever may be the Hunters (2) 3 years ago
- 33 Whoever may be the Hunters (3) 3 years ago
- 34 Whoever the hunters may be (4) 3 years ago
- 35 The Unspoken 3 years ago
- 36 Danger, Mystery 3 years ago
- 37 Hojosa-Hyung 3 years ago
- 38 Who might you be, Whitie ? 3 years ago
- 39 Rework, again 2 years ago
- 40 Reboot 2 years ago
Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but... Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing. Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers) World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that. Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)