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After reading ten chaps at once, I can say this is sure one of the best out there when it comes to detective stories. The writing quality was up to my standard and the writing style was superb too! Loved it ❤️ The author was a decent writer by far and was a good novel director. I am impressed as I tend to be easily bored and a picky reader by far. This novel did gave me good reading and a memorable experience. Nice! Keep it up! I am sure you will get what you deserved on December. 😉 Good luck on Spirity! Adaptations, here we go! [img=recommend]
it is pretty good I just wish that the author would make more chapters for us to read but I do know that life may get in the way so please don't rush yourself
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Realmente no veo la novela que recibe tanto apoyo por aqui ...normalmente tendria que tener mas comentarios y piedras de poder pero no es asi ...aunque tiene muy buena calificacion y no hay casi comentarios malos pero no veo donde esta esa novela que tanto apoyo recibe .... Ademas tiene casi 5 estrellas ? Jajajajaja
Im writing this as of chapter 50, where paid chapters just start. The novel had an interesting start, and I was greatly looking forward to watching a detective solve crimes. But the very first mission isnt even over with within 50 chapters. It’s just dragging on and on. A big issue for me is that there is somehow a person that can detect the system and causes the original ‘easy mission’ to spiral out of control. The longer it was going on, the more i could feel my enjoyment and expectations dropping. It was decent while it lasted, but it didnt hook me in enough to want to pay to continue reading it.
I can't understand why this book has so little top fans supporting when the idea is quite novel and intriguing. Then again , people want to run after cliche rather than broadening their horizon. Since I love taking risks with different genres I don't regret choosing this one. I hope people will appreciate author's work and talents. Because she deserves it
A very interesting story with a combination genre, i like it when the mc is a genius detective. The story flow also quite good and interesting, I can even easily imagine the character interaction and action, it hook my interest to read this story more!. O(∩_∩)O
I had to give this one five stars. It is a rarity to find a story that is this great. Whether it's professional or not. The story gets right to it and grabs the readers. There is solid narration, good description, and wonderful grammar in this masterpiece. Job well done and this thriller/mystery drama is not my favorite. But you did such a fantastic job that people who don't love this genre can still enjoy it.
To be honest, I have no complaints with this one. the flow is good and the story progress naturally. The pace is not fast nor slow. it was just enough to grip the readers. The narration is enjoyable. although I had expected MC to act a bit more smart and different (not indifferent) Upon meeting Metu and receiving the system. The encounter and interaction is good and comical. But was just Thinking since he’s a detective, he’ll be deducting smth more in his head. But that’s just my opinion. Overall, I enjoyed it. If you’re looking for a good and fun narration with a mix of crime, then this one’s for you.
The combination of a detective and a system is a very interesting idea in itself and the author made it even more interesting to read. just love the work.. keep going...
What an amazing detective story. The pace, the detail, the storytelling. Everything is executed excellently. Definitely a book to recommend to people looking to learn how to make a good webnovel!!
Very well written! Love the pace, the characters, and that Methu dude. Keep writing please, I would love to read more about Zion :D Well done!
Hey author. I must say you have a good brain otherwise not everyone is capable of making a detective novel interesting. Your synopsis is great enough to make visitors read the book. Hope u keep bringing more chappies!!
A flashy detective story. How refreshing. The descriptions do their job to get a sense of the environment, and the pace has a nice flow. The main character is cheeky enough to be likable.
Really great story. And like you said, I have a thing for detective stories too. The pacing's done pretty smoothly. The plot is interesting and no major grammar errors. Hope to see this keep going!
Just the name is interesting, and when I read the story, I was instantly hooked. The character design is great as well as the world background. Grammar is neat with no spelling mistakes. Reading this makes you appreciate detectives!
Seems quite interesting to me. Detective stories have always fascinated me. I'm having high hopes for this story. I'm sure, it won't disappoint, considering your knack for creating engaging storytelling.
Detective story is one my favorite genre since I grow up with CSI. The best thing in this book is our main protagonist is provided with a system! 😂 I can't wait to see how this story going on. Keep up the good work, author. 👍
The story is going good, the chapters written so far are interesting and I like the concept~
the title is eye-catching making you curious as to what's waiting for you. the book itself is short so far but the chapters written are interesting. I'm excited to see how things will turn out in the future. awesome work so far author🤛🤛👌
The overall concept of the story is quite hooking. Interesting synopsis and even the title itself. First few chapters already have the thrill as well as the build-up. Character design is alright - still has rooms for development, of course. Good pace so far. Not much grammatical errors and whatnot. This might be a fun read! 🙂
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This is a unique novel, and an isekai one! I really like Sherlock Holmes, so this one is a blast! The writing style is smooth. I haven't seen any grammatical errors and the like while reading the chapters! The only thing that I am concerned about is about the introduction part of Mr. Nelson. If you could make it a bit more engaging that will make us readers think throughout the story, that would be great! Like a scene where Nelson will chase down a criminal, and the plan prepared and running inside his head before going to the reincranation/isekai plot. That coudl show the deductive skills of Mr. Nelson/ Sherlock Holmes.
Interesting story, not many grammar mistakes, the flow is smooth. The cover itself lures you in to read the book. Keep up the good work!!!!
Okay I admit I am very much biased because I LOVE SHERLOCK!!! And imagine the system version of what you love! Automatic 5 star. But this story deserves at least 5 star even without any bias as this is a unique take on the system stories! A transmigrated detective working within a system! Simple but superb idea. Writing is advanced level. Vocabulary aligns with the premise of the story. The characters are clearly portrayed and the plot becomes clear pretty quickly. World background is very unique and the system itself is very advanced. I have an inkling this story will go a loooong way and I am here to follow the growth of the story. Thank you, author and keep up the great work!
After reading ten chaps at once, I can say this is sure one of the best out there when it comes to detective stories. The writing quality was up to my standard and the writing style was superb too! Loved it ❤️ The author was a decent writer by far and was a good novel director. I am impressed as I tend to be easily bored and a picky reader by far. This novel did gave me good reading and a memorable experience. Nice! Keep it up! I am sure you will get what you deserved on December. 😉 Good luck on Spirity! Adaptations, here we go! [img=recommend]
it is pretty good I just wish that the author would make more chapters for us to read but I do know that life may get in the way so please don't rush yourself
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Realmente no veo la novela que recibe tanto apoyo por aqui ...normalmente tendria que tener mas comentarios y piedras de poder pero no es asi ...aunque tiene muy buena calificacion y no hay casi comentarios malos pero no veo donde esta esa novela que tanto apoyo recibe .... Ademas tiene casi 5 estrellas ? Jajajajaja
Im writing this as of chapter 50, where paid chapters just start. The novel had an interesting start, and I was greatly looking forward to watching a detective solve crimes. But the very first mission isnt even over with within 50 chapters. It’s just dragging on and on. A big issue for me is that there is somehow a person that can detect the system and causes the original ‘easy mission’ to spiral out of control. The longer it was going on, the more i could feel my enjoyment and expectations dropping. It was decent while it lasted, but it didnt hook me in enough to want to pay to continue reading it.
I can't understand why this book has so little top fans supporting when the idea is quite novel and intriguing. Then again , people want to run after cliche rather than broadening their horizon. Since I love taking risks with different genres I don't regret choosing this one. I hope people will appreciate author's work and talents. Because she deserves it
A very interesting story with a combination genre, i like it when the mc is a genius detective. The story flow also quite good and interesting, I can even easily imagine the character interaction and action, it hook my interest to read this story more!. O(∩_∩)O
I had to give this one five stars. It is a rarity to find a story that is this great. Whether it's professional or not. The story gets right to it and grabs the readers. There is solid narration, good description, and wonderful grammar in this masterpiece. Job well done and this thriller/mystery drama is not my favorite. But you did such a fantastic job that people who don't love this genre can still enjoy it.
To be honest, I have no complaints with this one. the flow is good and the story progress naturally. The pace is not fast nor slow. it was just enough to grip the readers. The narration is enjoyable. although I had expected MC to act a bit more smart and different (not indifferent) Upon meeting Metu and receiving the system. The encounter and interaction is good and comical. But was just Thinking since he’s a detective, he’ll be deducting smth more in his head. But that’s just my opinion. Overall, I enjoyed it. If you’re looking for a good and fun narration with a mix of crime, then this one’s for you.
The combination of a detective and a system is a very interesting idea in itself and the author made it even more interesting to read. just love the work.. keep going...
What an amazing detective story. The pace, the detail, the storytelling. Everything is executed excellently. Definitely a book to recommend to people looking to learn how to make a good webnovel!!
Very well written! Love the pace, the characters, and that Methu dude. Keep writing please, I would love to read more about Zion :D Well done!
Hey author. I must say you have a good brain otherwise not everyone is capable of making a detective novel interesting. Your synopsis is great enough to make visitors read the book. Hope u keep bringing more chappies!!
A flashy detective story. How refreshing. The descriptions do their job to get a sense of the environment, and the pace has a nice flow. The main character is cheeky enough to be likable.
Really great story. And like you said, I have a thing for detective stories too. The pacing's done pretty smoothly. The plot is interesting and no major grammar errors. Hope to see this keep going!
Just the name is interesting, and when I read the story, I was instantly hooked. The character design is great as well as the world background. Grammar is neat with no spelling mistakes. Reading this makes you appreciate detectives!
Seems quite interesting to me. Detective stories have always fascinated me. I'm having high hopes for this story. I'm sure, it won't disappoint, considering your knack for creating engaging storytelling.
Detective story is one my favorite genre since I grow up with CSI. The best thing in this book is our main protagonist is provided with a system! 😂 I can't wait to see how this story going on. Keep up the good work, author. 👍
The story is going good, the chapters written so far are interesting and I like the concept~
the title is eye-catching making you curious as to what's waiting for you. the book itself is short so far but the chapters written are interesting. I'm excited to see how things will turn out in the future. awesome work so far author🤛🤛👌
The overall concept of the story is quite hooking. Interesting synopsis and even the title itself. First few chapters already have the thrill as well as the build-up. Character design is alright - still has rooms for development, of course. Good pace so far. Not much grammatical errors and whatnot. This might be a fun read! 🙂
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This is a unique novel, and an isekai one! I really like Sherlock Holmes, so this one is a blast! The writing style is smooth. I haven't seen any grammatical errors and the like while reading the chapters! The only thing that I am concerned about is about the introduction part of Mr. Nelson. If you could make it a bit more engaging that will make us readers think throughout the story, that would be great! Like a scene where Nelson will chase down a criminal, and the plan prepared and running inside his head before going to the reincranation/isekai plot. That coudl show the deductive skills of Mr. Nelson/ Sherlock Holmes.
Interesting story, not many grammar mistakes, the flow is smooth. The cover itself lures you in to read the book. Keep up the good work!!!!
Okay I admit I am very much biased because I LOVE SHERLOCK!!! And imagine the system version of what you love! Automatic 5 star. But this story deserves at least 5 star even without any bias as this is a unique take on the system stories! A transmigrated detective working within a system! Simple but superb idea. Writing is advanced level. Vocabulary aligns with the premise of the story. The characters are clearly portrayed and the plot becomes clear pretty quickly. World background is very unique and the system itself is very advanced. I have an inkling this story will go a loooong way and I am here to follow the growth of the story. Thank you, author and keep up the great work!