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This is simply amazing. It really highlights the South Side life and the author definitely shows a good understanding of his character and the characters in general! I love this.
great book please dont drop. .. . . .. .. . .. . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . .no me n n no n. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . .. .
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Writing quality, plot development, characters design and development, everything is great. It has only been 6 chapters and i swear that i haven't read the best fanfic in my life till this day. The story is so well thought. It gives enough details for you to know where the story is, planning to go, and what happen just a moment ago. The MC is hustling, he isn't waiting around, he is making moves right now. He has a two girls who he loves and the love him, and the way they end up together, i couldn't find a better way.
its was an awesome story man BUT why did you had to go the jucing up Cain in like 2 seconds? Now he can call the Terminator? Come on keep it real. The show is good enough without all the fantasy. You can go the GTA way if he needs money he can pull heists, do jobs or missions. scamming or street racing. even smuggling. You dont have ruin the story with all of this. Anyways keep up the good work. Good luck
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This is simply amazing. It really highlights the South Side life and the author definitely shows a good understanding of his character and the characters in general! I love this.
great book please dont drop. .. . . .. .. . .. . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . .no me n n no n. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . .. .
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Writing quality, plot development, characters design and development, everything is great. It has only been 6 chapters and i swear that i haven't read the best fanfic in my life till this day. The story is so well thought. It gives enough details for you to know where the story is, planning to go, and what happen just a moment ago. The MC is hustling, he isn't waiting around, he is making moves right now. He has a two girls who he loves and the love him, and the way they end up together, i couldn't find a better way.
its was an awesome story man BUT why did you had to go the jucing up Cain in like 2 seconds? Now he can call the Terminator? Come on keep it real. The show is good enough without all the fantasy. You can go the GTA way if he needs money he can pull heists, do jobs or missions. scamming or street racing. even smuggling. You dont have ruin the story with all of this. Anyways keep up the good work. Good luck
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Can we get more chapters plz❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😎😎😎😎😎😎