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Very good, but the basic changes did not feel right. Loved the story, though! A fair HP/Twilight, but seems it is more like a part of a series.
This is actually one of the best FF I have ever read. I enjoyed every bit of it seriously great job!!
still one of the best twilight ff . tho forgot or wonder if there was a continuation of this story as it branched out 🤔🤔🤔 anyways, gonna be rereading the author's works. hoping for a new addition to it tho 😁✌️
Great fanfic in the same style as the author’s other completed works. I’ve never been a fan of Twillight, but I enjoyed reading this story. It suffers a little from praising the mc for being so good or kind pretty often, something that is also common in the author’s other works. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this work, and cant wait for the author to write another of this size, either following this version of Harry or something new.
It's a Good Story . I like the story , but it's a bit rushed . Author can expand it and add an another book and I will read it . It could have been better if you add some details and add some interaction between different vampire covens (like with Benjamin) If you want to pass your time than its a Good Choice
The author is an excellent writer, to make me like anything related to the twilight franchise. With so many options I wonder why the this particular crossover? All in all impressive.
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dont mind its only 13 chapters the chapthers are long and very good best fan fic i have read in a long time i wish it continues to update aj
best series of books ever. I've read all the books and happy that I found this author. If you're ever lucky enough to find the books, read all of them in order. you won't regret it.
A great world construction and a great read. I like the way Harry was portrayed and the use of magic. Although there is not much action, this slice of life is good enough.
Honestly gotta say I’m impressed. I was a little doubtful at first but the reviews got me to give it a chance and just by the flow of the story in the first chapter I knew this was different from regular fanfics. HP/TWILIGHT is not something I thought would be good but I’m genuinely impressed and thankful I gave this a read. Great Work author👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thoroughly enjoyed this book and I hope everyone else reads it as an appreciation for Both Original stories the journey that Harry and the rest of The cast take
Seriously i really really loved this man its one of the best ive read im a lil sad that it ended but it was a really good ending it reminded me of a movie ending like it will have a sequel and i really hope it does
love this story it is amazing hope there is more the whole background for harry and where he has been and what he has done one of the best i have read thank you for writing it
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Well thought would be harryx main girls, but anyway story was fun to follow characters are bit dull. Still a lot better than some of the twilight ff
I have a love for this story. now I am just waiting for more. It is a must read.............................................................
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read only up to chapter 2 and it looks like this will be just a canon rehash and harry will just end up with a bunch of. useless human read only up to chapter 2 and it looks like this will be just a canon rehash and harry will just end up with a bunch of. useless human
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well burnable is a very good author most of all you won't have to worry about him dropping his stories ...if he publishes a work he will finish it....now on the story well twilight fandom is full of "yaoi" or dropped works so burnable writing a fanfic on twiligh is refreshing since it will be among the few one that you will find complete and without yaoi in the fandom. Moreover the story is very solid : hp and twilight are mixed together in a believable way so you won't truly find plot holes related to the merging and the creation of the crossover...maybe there are only a couple of things that could truly be improved like how fast the relationships where developed and some comments who made it seems like there could be some netori. But it won't happen nor canon couples will be split (even though I wish Irina and maybe Rosalie could be added to the pairing) but they are small details. In general the story is solid without too many holes and flowing in a natural way and it is respecting the canon timeline and the original sorry and world while at the same time adding new elements and originality
I just found this bad boy, and I'm hooked. I don't care what you do my guy, ride this novel till the wheels fall off. My only regret was not finding this earlier
When I first saw this novel I was a little sceptic about how few chapters it has, O how happy I was to be wrong I just finished chapter one and it felt like I had read 15 chapters from another novel. I just want to say well done author as a speed reader myself this is the type of novel I am looking for.
This is an amazing fanfiction, that is worthy of applause! Incredible writing quality and grammar. Concise and consistent story. Free from needless interaction. Every word carefully placed to deepen character or advance story. One of the most interesting novels I read so far. Hope it won't be dropped
What can I say? A hidden gem of a webnovel, definitely one of the best fan-fics I've ever read, a bit short but never rushed, it has the right balance between drama and comedy and in short I recommend it to everyone.
Very good, but the basic changes did not feel right. Loved the story, though! A fair HP/Twilight, but seems it is more like a part of a series.
This is actually one of the best FF I have ever read. I enjoyed every bit of it seriously great job!!
still one of the best twilight ff . tho forgot or wonder if there was a continuation of this story as it branched out 🤔🤔🤔 anyways, gonna be rereading the author's works. hoping for a new addition to it tho 😁✌️
Great fanfic in the same style as the author’s other completed works. I’ve never been a fan of Twillight, but I enjoyed reading this story. It suffers a little from praising the mc for being so good or kind pretty often, something that is also common in the author’s other works. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this work, and cant wait for the author to write another of this size, either following this version of Harry or something new.
It's a Good Story . I like the story , but it's a bit rushed . Author can expand it and add an another book and I will read it . It could have been better if you add some details and add some interaction between different vampire covens (like with Benjamin) If you want to pass your time than its a Good Choice
The author is an excellent writer, to make me like anything related to the twilight franchise. With so many options I wonder why the this particular crossover? All in all impressive.
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dont mind its only 13 chapters the chapthers are long and very good best fan fic i have read in a long time i wish it continues to update aj
best series of books ever. I've read all the books and happy that I found this author. If you're ever lucky enough to find the books, read all of them in order. you won't regret it.
A great world construction and a great read. I like the way Harry was portrayed and the use of magic. Although there is not much action, this slice of life is good enough.
Honestly gotta say I’m impressed. I was a little doubtful at first but the reviews got me to give it a chance and just by the flow of the story in the first chapter I knew this was different from regular fanfics. HP/TWILIGHT is not something I thought would be good but I’m genuinely impressed and thankful I gave this a read. Great Work author👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Thoroughly enjoyed this book and I hope everyone else reads it as an appreciation for Both Original stories the journey that Harry and the rest of The cast take
Seriously i really really loved this man its one of the best ive read im a lil sad that it ended but it was a really good ending it reminded me of a movie ending like it will have a sequel and i really hope it does
love this story it is amazing hope there is more the whole background for harry and where he has been and what he has done one of the best i have read thank you for writing it
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Well thought would be harryx main girls, but anyway story was fun to follow characters are bit dull. Still a lot better than some of the twilight ff
I have a love for this story. now I am just waiting for more. It is a must read.............................................................
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read only up to chapter 2 and it looks like this will be just a canon rehash and harry will just end up with a bunch of. useless human read only up to chapter 2 and it looks like this will be just a canon rehash and harry will just end up with a bunch of. useless human
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well burnable is a very good author most of all you won't have to worry about him dropping his stories ...if he publishes a work he will finish it....now on the story well twilight fandom is full of "yaoi" or dropped works so burnable writing a fanfic on twiligh is refreshing since it will be among the few one that you will find complete and without yaoi in the fandom. Moreover the story is very solid : hp and twilight are mixed together in a believable way so you won't truly find plot holes related to the merging and the creation of the crossover...maybe there are only a couple of things that could truly be improved like how fast the relationships where developed and some comments who made it seems like there could be some netori. But it won't happen nor canon couples will be split (even though I wish Irina and maybe Rosalie could be added to the pairing) but they are small details. In general the story is solid without too many holes and flowing in a natural way and it is respecting the canon timeline and the original sorry and world while at the same time adding new elements and originality
I just found this bad boy, and I'm hooked. I don't care what you do my guy, ride this novel till the wheels fall off. My only regret was not finding this earlier
When I first saw this novel I was a little sceptic about how few chapters it has, O how happy I was to be wrong I just finished chapter one and it felt like I had read 15 chapters from another novel. I just want to say well done author as a speed reader myself this is the type of novel I am looking for.
This is an amazing fanfiction, that is worthy of applause! Incredible writing quality and grammar. Concise and consistent story. Free from needless interaction. Every word carefully placed to deepen character or advance story. One of the most interesting novels I read so far. Hope it won't be dropped
What can I say? A hidden gem of a webnovel, definitely one of the best fan-fics I've ever read, a bit short but never rushed, it has the right balance between drama and comedy and in short I recommend it to everyone.