/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Rise of Achilles (One Piece Fanfiction)
摘要
Our MC dies, but instead of going to an after-life he gets a second chance to live his life in the world of One Piece.
Follow him as he makes his dreams come true.
Which is to conquer the vast seas with the strongest crew by his side.
MC will have the appearance of Achilles from the Fate Franchise
-An indomitable spirit that will not crumble under pressure.
-Unparalleled speed and reflexes.
-A master of the spear.
-A charismatic man who can inspire others as well as draw in the ladies.
MC will not have devil fruit powers.
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Is this inspired by Sinbad from Magi?Havent read it yet though, the harem please tone it down though no need for execessive harem
Story is decent but not a fan of a bunch of OCs, especially in the MC’s crew. There are so many One Piece characters to choose from that it makes no sense. Also, the MC is not unique since other Fate characters are also in this story and other anime like Danmachi. Not a fan of other anime characters also in One Piece... not counting the MC.
Hope you actually complete this story and you have my support till the end for I love your writing style and world building
I don’t have patiencet right now I’ll keep this quick and simple all he’s doing is taking luffys place with 2 OC’s not worth the read also grammer needs work
I really want to read this but i just can't untill it gets over the 25-30 chapter mark.
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Great story please update, so will fluffy and his adventures still happen, just without robin, and can you add bea Hancock to the harem [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Terus semangat untuk menulis novel nya jangan patah semangat dari orang yang menjelekkan novel anda kerena lebih susah membuat karya dari pada menilai karya orang lain
It's a great start to a story. Good grammar and a few mistakes, but nothing that takes away from the story. It has great potential to be one of the best one piece fanfics out there. Keep up the good work.
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1: Transmigration 1 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Arrival 1 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Loguetown (Revised) 1 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: Rogers Execution (Revised) 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: The Next Steps 10 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Cat Girl 10 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7: Atalanta 10 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: First Crewmate 10 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: North Blue 10 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Craft Island 10 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Kuroh & Wave 10 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12: A Ship A Shipwright & A Cook 10 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Argonaut Pirates Debut 10 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14: Putting Down A Rabid Dog 10 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Gangplank 9 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Forewarning 9 months ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Instant Transmission 9 months ago
I put five stars just because there is no devil fruit and the MC is not a swordsman. I'm tired of One Piece fanfiction with the same fruits or swordsmen. The situation is especially sad with hand-to-hand combat, they eat mythical zoans in 90% of cases. It's sad when there is a Garp who was on equal footing with Roger. For some reason, I have not seen more than one fanfiction where the powers from the Anime and Manga "Toriko" were used, One Piece is the perfect world for the power that depends on food.