3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
I know it's trash but what do you expect just drop a 5 star and done.😙 (I know it's now good so i will accept every bash you says😣 and used it as a motivation to improved🙃)
What exactly does your synopsis have to do with the story? So the main character believes friends to be useless? I know these people think their family and the people they know as the same it does not limit to only friends. So when you give us that and then immediately he kisses a stranger's ass and including a god's ass. What crack are you on? That drug will wear off soon and you will drop the story as all Authors have. Your story does not make sense even if it is a power trip, think about it. What could being in the grand line give you, if you have everything? You may think it's cool, but it's not. You as a devil fruit user is putting yourself in harm's way and even if you take 10 years to train, that is nothing. I'm not going to waste my time with this story. It's terrible. It's just simply not exciting to read about.
I know it's trash but what do you expect just drop a 5 star and done.😙 (I know it's now good so i will accept every bash you says😣 and used it as a motivation to improved🙃)
What exactly does your synopsis have to do with the story? So the main character believes friends to be useless? I know these people think their family and the people they know as the same it does not limit to only friends. So when you give us that and then immediately he kisses a stranger's ass and including a god's ass. What crack are you on? That drug will wear off soon and you will drop the story as all Authors have. Your story does not make sense even if it is a power trip, think about it. What could being in the grand line give you, if you have everything? You may think it's cool, but it's not. You as a devil fruit user is putting yourself in harm's way and even if you take 10 years to train, that is nothing. I'm not going to waste my time with this story. It's terrible. It's just simply not exciting to read about.