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It's a wonderful book with many unexpected turns. You need a few chapters to get into the story, but after that, I couldn't stop myself from reading. At first Jeremy (ML) seems very unlikeable and I couldn't imagine that he could ever redeem himself, but he isn't the "Monster" I first thought of. He is a really sweet guy who loves Jerlina so much, but is just a bit dumb to realize how he and Jerlina got manipulated by a certain someone (not gonna spoil). It's a story of lot of misunderstandings, but after they got cleared, you're in for a great love story of two people who bring out the best in each other.
I rarely ever write book reviews and just silently support the books but this book is totally worth a review, the author laid such beautiful emphasis on each character making them feel so real. At first you'd think Joel (ML) is really such a monster and you'd think there's no way to redeem him but he is such a beautiful person at heart and the way the author explained to the tiny details on how everyone feels and not just skipping their feelings and the way the explanations on miscarriages, kidnapping and emotional manipulation was explained into detail was so great and the way each character (especially Jerlina(FL/MC)) development was created is sooooo good. My review seems all jumbled up but I just finished reading this novel and it feels like a part of me has just been seperated😭. Anyways BRAVO author you did a great job 😘
oh ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this novel got me all tied to it. Amazing story line, beautiful characters and the writer i really love your work, you are amazing.
well thought out plot that flows well. The language is also very proficient. I would recommend it to readers and lovers of Romance. I cannot wait for the subsequent chapters . keep this up and we willbe waiting .
Honestly not a big review writter here but this book truely deserves more recognition. Such a cute love story exactly my type. This my second most favorite book that I truely love with all my ❤️ out of all (and when I say that I truely mean out of all the 500 novels if not more) I've read till now. It's a master piece. Hats off the author for capturing the reader's hearts. Truely underrated novel.
I had a lot of fun reading this book, thank you so much author, you did great.. I look forward to reading more of your books, I liked that both Jer and Jeremy found the peace and happiness they both deserved..
The plot was really nice. And loved the book and enjoyed it reading. Loved the characters 👌 ❤ .
I truly enjoyed this novel, it brought tears, anger and joy from me. I have started many novels and after half way the author always seems to add something so ridiculous. Most of them make women out to be ignorant and pushovers. I do wish we could have gotten a more detailed description on why Emma hated Jerlina so much. Narcissistic Jealousy is only scratching the surface. Thank you for such a wonderful read!
loved this book well written definitely not what you expected worth the read. wish it was longer since it was so good. you feel connected to the characters and get pulled in.
4,8 stars over 5, this story is GOOD!!!! Ok, this is a well written, well developed, amazingly made love story. Both leads went through some fondamental character development, Jerlina got over her meek submissive habits and took reign over her life, Jeremy is unnaturally caring and he represents the ideal man, caring sensitive hella sexy and considerate. The plot oscillates between thrilling/ action packed and calm almost agonizingly sweet. The writing is smooth and the whole reading experience is so pleasant, I haven't even been reading another book along with it, .and I havent stopped reading since I started it. I loved everything about this forced marriage and about the monster and his prey and you will too.
overall nice start and maintain the story hype[img=recommend] & not stretched the story meaningless. Please write some more mafia love revenge story
I really recommend this book bcz although I found this book late but story and character and plot of this book is brilliant. I literally felt many emotion by reading this and it's not like other books it has its unique plot. I don't actually give review but this book n writer desreves it.💞
I fell in love with this book at the first chapter,...that I had to finish it without stopping. it was like I was missing out something anytime im not reading but... the suspense,turn of events and twist are top-notch 😘😘😘🥰🥳
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Wry good story. It gets a little bit emotional, but it has a sweet ending! I really liked the character development. It has all the emotions![img=recommend]
this story is so well written that even the background plot i can imagine . while readind it the story fells like i am watching this...in this story on one hand ML loves her soo much and on the other FL hate him as much as he loves her...... wow what a combo.....
soooo where is my jeremy?? this is such a feel good book… how the FL evolved and how the ML made her feel she is deeply loved… cant you just wished someone like Jeremy would love and worship you? wishful thinking 🤣🤣🤣 awesome work dear author!! more novels to come 👍👍👍
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I have so much to say… 😊😊 I will start with my first experience of athor Golda’s story.. It is one of her completed story and it’s been around year or more that I have read that book.. from that book I saw how she appreciates her dear readers… she will always reply to our comments or will put like to whatever comments we put in her books.. I rarely saw it from author. And also her writing style… I loved it 😍🥰 Always happy endings 😍😍😘😘 From then on I started to read her books which have completed and oh god I loved them and I was eagerly waiting for her to finish this novel since I only read completed books. Please don’t feel offended since it is my decision not to read IP books as I can’t wait to see what will happen next and will get anxiety.. So i was asking her all the time when will she complete this book and how I can’t wait to read this… 😊😇 And she told me she has completed this book and I have happily stated to read… In the first chapters you will feel so angry, sad, stress and all kind of negative thoughts which exactly how ML and FL ave felt.. but have a faith on our dearest author and read it, you will see how wonderful this novel is… I never want to part with this novel.. ☹️ You said you will update side chapters about their babies and I hope you will 🥰🥰 One of the greatest story, great character development, good grammatics… you name it and all there... ❤️❤️I want to say you never disappoint me author… 💞💞💗💗 And finally I am waiting for your other IP book. Hope you will complete it soon.. If not I am going to bother you everyday 😁😁 Much love ❤️💗💕
I really love this book. This the very first time I am giving a review. This love story had so many twist. The main characters were adorable
OMG It’s completed….!! Wow 🤩😍💞 Congratulations dear author 🎉🎉🎊💝💝 I was waiting for it to be completed you know… Now I can start reading happily 🥰💖💕
A MUST READ!!! It shows the development of various characters and how they find love and strength in tough situations. For me Jerlina would always be an inspiration. She grew a lot. And I wish I could love as Jeremy. He is so lovely and this book has made me cry many times. The author is very smart and gives perfect details about every character. And the ending was very satisfying. I am so glad to follow my fav author Golda. All the best lovely Golda. You'll always have my support.😍❤
Definitely Golda's world on this marvelous book took me on a rollercoaster of emotions that enchanted my mind and soul. ❤️ A marvelous love story that took my heart. Please sweet readers, give a chance to this story, you will not regret it!!!! I am sad that Jeremy and Jerlina's story has ended but at the same happy because our dear Author created a perfect story. Our Golda was super committed to deliver every day marvelous chapters easing our tormented hearts that were waiting for updates. Definitely following her work forever !!! Thanks tons dear Golda!!!! 💯❤️
Omg you had me and hello!! I love this book, so far it is one of my favorite books. It had me wanted more and more felt everything each character was going through. Thank you, hope to read more of your books
Mafia Pitiful FL Kidnapped FL Jerlin gone through a lot As for Jerlin it kidnapping and against the law As for Jerry it's called protection from enemies. Slow blossom of love
Dear Author, I am still eagerly waiting for you to complete this novel to start reading.. 🥺🥺 please🙏🙏🙏🙏 From your annoying loving reader, Chang_mie ☺️☺️
oh yea a yandreee male on a female and a female who doesn't want him kekekekkekekekekeekkeekekekeekekekkeekekekekekekekekekkekekkekekekekeekekek the synopsis itself is attractive it's just makes me want to read it even though I don't usually read any female lead novel
The start is so difficult for the fl, Jerlina, that you wonder if she'll ever get over all the misfortune that happens to her in the first chapters. I liked very much how the feelings and happenings are analysed. The reactions are all realistic, making you feel empathy for Jerlina. A heavy start that promises weak-to-strong progress of the character and makes you wonder if the ml will ever be able to redeem himself. The story makes you so immersed in the reading that you feel what the characters feel. You want Jerlina to have enough happiness to make her forget what all the people around her did.
-Just passing by- (I hope WN creates comment section too cause idk where to write these stuff when I have comments abt the novel, like this) The synopsis attracted me. It seemed like he FL and ML's fate will be miserable. But then when you have experience reading a novel like 'The Genius' First Love' I realize how it isn't as miserable as it sounds. The FL and ML says they love the other, but they keep giving reasons why they can't be together. The reasons so logical/sensible that it's annoying. I can't even argue. The only thing I know is that I regret reading it. That novel is full of heartbreak, I tell you. They dated, married, got kids. In the end... divorce. The reason for divorce isn't because they didn't love each other. Instead, they divorced because between her family and the love of her life, she chose her family. That was the most miserable story I have ever read. I can't believe I read 90% of that novel. But then again, I only persevered reading all those heart breaking experiences because I thought that the FL and ML would figure it out in the end. Be together forever. Happy ever after. The end.---But no there's no rainbows and unicorns there. After all the drama, the conclusion is that FL and ML's suffering wouldn't end unless they cut their connection. *I'm internally crying* And yes, I am here because this novel "Forced marriage: Escaping her Monster" made me remember that cursed couple (I'm still hurting just thinking about it). I think I'll only recover from it once I see an FL and ML I ship ends up together. Which is why my interest in this novel only increased as I read the synopsis. So I guess I'm up to read this novel now...
I normally don't give reviews so early in a story, but oh Lord this one just bewitched my heart!❤️ and we need to support this great Author!!! I found this story by miracle! I like to point that is a well written story, and it's delighting to read it flowing naturally and with no grammar errors. The story plot is so complex, intense, and covers controversial topics like abortion, kidnapping, vengeance, force marriage among others. So far our dear Author has orchestrated all the plot in a way that leads our hearts to a different dimensions making us, the audience, beg and hope for a fast and safe landing! Thank you dear Author for bringing us this great master piece and please do not think to drop it for any reason!! You are an amazing writer!! 💖
It's a wonderful book with many unexpected turns. You need a few chapters to get into the story, but after that, I couldn't stop myself from reading. At first Jeremy (ML) seems very unlikeable and I couldn't imagine that he could ever redeem himself, but he isn't the "Monster" I first thought of. He is a really sweet guy who loves Jerlina so much, but is just a bit dumb to realize how he and Jerlina got manipulated by a certain someone (not gonna spoil). It's a story of lot of misunderstandings, but after they got cleared, you're in for a great love story of two people who bring out the best in each other.
I rarely ever write book reviews and just silently support the books but this book is totally worth a review, the author laid such beautiful emphasis on each character making them feel so real. At first you'd think Joel (ML) is really such a monster and you'd think there's no way to redeem him but he is such a beautiful person at heart and the way the author explained to the tiny details on how everyone feels and not just skipping their feelings and the way the explanations on miscarriages, kidnapping and emotional manipulation was explained into detail was so great and the way each character (especially Jerlina(FL/MC)) development was created is sooooo good. My review seems all jumbled up but I just finished reading this novel and it feels like a part of me has just been seperated😭. Anyways BRAVO author you did a great job 😘
oh ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ this novel got me all tied to it. Amazing story line, beautiful characters and the writer i really love your work, you are amazing.
well thought out plot that flows well. The language is also very proficient. I would recommend it to readers and lovers of Romance. I cannot wait for the subsequent chapters . keep this up and we willbe waiting .
Honestly not a big review writter here but this book truely deserves more recognition. Such a cute love story exactly my type. This my second most favorite book that I truely love with all my ❤️ out of all (and when I say that I truely mean out of all the 500 novels if not more) I've read till now. It's a master piece. Hats off the author for capturing the reader's hearts. Truely underrated novel.
I had a lot of fun reading this book, thank you so much author, you did great.. I look forward to reading more of your books, I liked that both Jer and Jeremy found the peace and happiness they both deserved..
The plot was really nice. And loved the book and enjoyed it reading. Loved the characters 👌 ❤ .
I truly enjoyed this novel, it brought tears, anger and joy from me. I have started many novels and after half way the author always seems to add something so ridiculous. Most of them make women out to be ignorant and pushovers. I do wish we could have gotten a more detailed description on why Emma hated Jerlina so much. Narcissistic Jealousy is only scratching the surface. Thank you for such a wonderful read!
loved this book well written definitely not what you expected worth the read. wish it was longer since it was so good. you feel connected to the characters and get pulled in.
4,8 stars over 5, this story is GOOD!!!! Ok, this is a well written, well developed, amazingly made love story. Both leads went through some fondamental character development, Jerlina got over her meek submissive habits and took reign over her life, Jeremy is unnaturally caring and he represents the ideal man, caring sensitive hella sexy and considerate. The plot oscillates between thrilling/ action packed and calm almost agonizingly sweet. The writing is smooth and the whole reading experience is so pleasant, I haven't even been reading another book along with it, .and I havent stopped reading since I started it. I loved everything about this forced marriage and about the monster and his prey and you will too.
overall nice start and maintain the story hype[img=recommend] & not stretched the story meaningless. Please write some more mafia love revenge story
I really recommend this book bcz although I found this book late but story and character and plot of this book is brilliant. I literally felt many emotion by reading this and it's not like other books it has its unique plot. I don't actually give review but this book n writer desreves it.💞
I fell in love with this book at the first chapter,...that I had to finish it without stopping. it was like I was missing out something anytime im not reading but... the suspense,turn of events and twist are top-notch 😘😘😘🥰🥳
揭示劇透 Wry good story. It gets a little bit emotional, but it has a sweet ending! I really liked the character development. It has all the emotions![img=recommend]
this story is so well written that even the background plot i can imagine . while readind it the story fells like i am watching this...in this story on one hand ML loves her soo much and on the other FL hate him as much as he loves her...... wow what a combo.....
soooo where is my jeremy?? this is such a feel good book… how the FL evolved and how the ML made her feel she is deeply loved… cant you just wished someone like Jeremy would love and worship you? wishful thinking 🤣🤣🤣 awesome work dear author!! more novels to come 👍👍👍
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I have so much to say… 😊😊 I will start with my first experience of athor Golda’s story.. It is one of her completed story and it’s been around year or more that I have read that book.. from that book I saw how she appreciates her dear readers… she will always reply to our comments or will put like to whatever comments we put in her books.. I rarely saw it from author. And also her writing style… I loved it 😍🥰 Always happy endings 😍😍😘😘 From then on I started to read her books which have completed and oh god I loved them and I was eagerly waiting for her to finish this novel since I only read completed books. Please don’t feel offended since it is my decision not to read IP books as I can’t wait to see what will happen next and will get anxiety.. So i was asking her all the time when will she complete this book and how I can’t wait to read this… 😊😇 And she told me she has completed this book and I have happily stated to read… In the first chapters you will feel so angry, sad, stress and all kind of negative thoughts which exactly how ML and FL ave felt.. but have a faith on our dearest author and read it, you will see how wonderful this novel is… I never want to part with this novel.. ☹️ You said you will update side chapters about their babies and I hope you will 🥰🥰 One of the greatest story, great character development, good grammatics… you name it and all there... ❤️❤️I want to say you never disappoint me author… 💞💞💗💗 And finally I am waiting for your other IP book. Hope you will complete it soon.. If not I am going to bother you everyday 😁😁 Much love ❤️💗💕
I really love this book. This the very first time I am giving a review. This love story had so many twist. The main characters were adorable
OMG It’s completed….!! Wow 🤩😍💞 Congratulations dear author 🎉🎉🎊💝💝 I was waiting for it to be completed you know… Now I can start reading happily 🥰💖💕
A MUST READ!!! It shows the development of various characters and how they find love and strength in tough situations. For me Jerlina would always be an inspiration. She grew a lot. And I wish I could love as Jeremy. He is so lovely and this book has made me cry many times. The author is very smart and gives perfect details about every character. And the ending was very satisfying. I am so glad to follow my fav author Golda. All the best lovely Golda. You'll always have my support.😍❤
Definitely Golda's world on this marvelous book took me on a rollercoaster of emotions that enchanted my mind and soul. ❤️ A marvelous love story that took my heart. Please sweet readers, give a chance to this story, you will not regret it!!!! I am sad that Jeremy and Jerlina's story has ended but at the same happy because our dear Author created a perfect story. Our Golda was super committed to deliver every day marvelous chapters easing our tormented hearts that were waiting for updates. Definitely following her work forever !!! Thanks tons dear Golda!!!! 💯❤️
Omg you had me and hello!! I love this book, so far it is one of my favorite books. It had me wanted more and more felt everything each character was going through. Thank you, hope to read more of your books
Mafia Pitiful FL Kidnapped FL Jerlin gone through a lot As for Jerlin it kidnapping and against the law As for Jerry it's called protection from enemies. Slow blossom of love
Dear Author, I am still eagerly waiting for you to complete this novel to start reading.. 🥺🥺 please🙏🙏🙏🙏 From your annoying loving reader, Chang_mie ☺️☺️
oh yea a yandreee male on a female and a female who doesn't want him kekekekkekekekekeekkeekekekeekekekkeekekekekekekekekekkekekkekekekekeekekek the synopsis itself is attractive it's just makes me want to read it even though I don't usually read any female lead novel
The start is so difficult for the fl, Jerlina, that you wonder if she'll ever get over all the misfortune that happens to her in the first chapters. I liked very much how the feelings and happenings are analysed. The reactions are all realistic, making you feel empathy for Jerlina. A heavy start that promises weak-to-strong progress of the character and makes you wonder if the ml will ever be able to redeem himself. The story makes you so immersed in the reading that you feel what the characters feel. You want Jerlina to have enough happiness to make her forget what all the people around her did.
-Just passing by- (I hope WN creates comment section too cause idk where to write these stuff when I have comments abt the novel, like this) The synopsis attracted me. It seemed like he FL and ML's fate will be miserable. But then when you have experience reading a novel like 'The Genius' First Love' I realize how it isn't as miserable as it sounds. The FL and ML says they love the other, but they keep giving reasons why they can't be together. The reasons so logical/sensible that it's annoying. I can't even argue. The only thing I know is that I regret reading it. That novel is full of heartbreak, I tell you. They dated, married, got kids. In the end... divorce. The reason for divorce isn't because they didn't love each other. Instead, they divorced because between her family and the love of her life, she chose her family. That was the most miserable story I have ever read. I can't believe I read 90% of that novel. But then again, I only persevered reading all those heart breaking experiences because I thought that the FL and ML would figure it out in the end. Be together forever. Happy ever after. The end.---But no there's no rainbows and unicorns there. After all the drama, the conclusion is that FL and ML's suffering wouldn't end unless they cut their connection. *I'm internally crying* And yes, I am here because this novel "Forced marriage: Escaping her Monster" made me remember that cursed couple (I'm still hurting just thinking about it). I think I'll only recover from it once I see an FL and ML I ship ends up together. Which is why my interest in this novel only increased as I read the synopsis. So I guess I'm up to read this novel now...
I normally don't give reviews so early in a story, but oh Lord this one just bewitched my heart!❤️ and we need to support this great Author!!! I found this story by miracle! I like to point that is a well written story, and it's delighting to read it flowing naturally and with no grammar errors. The story plot is so complex, intense, and covers controversial topics like abortion, kidnapping, vengeance, force marriage among others. So far our dear Author has orchestrated all the plot in a way that leads our hearts to a different dimensions making us, the audience, beg and hope for a fast and safe landing! Thank you dear Author for bringing us this great master piece and please do not think to drop it for any reason!! You are an amazing writer!! 💖