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The writing quality in this one is top-tier. The only thing I could fault was the inconsistent writing of dialogue. Sometimes it comes in novel form with the quotation marks, but other times it reads more like a screenplay. Neither one is wrong, but maybe sticking to one would read better. Other than that, I could find very little to fault this story. Very strong prose with a great flow and a diverse vocabulary. The story is quite engrossing with some great fight scenes, colorful characters and a steamy romance too. Only four chapters so far, but the author has covered a lot of ground. Good, captivating stuff. I highly recommend giving this one a go!
Mm yes me likey! :D I think the concept is very neat, and I like how you explained things about their families hehe! Me really like reading royalty stories too, so that's a plus! :3 I also love how each character has different motives and personalities! :D Their interaction with each other is also a pleasure to read, be it the feel-goodsies moments between the FL and ML, or when the royals fight! :3 And another great thing is, I love reading about their feelings and emotions hehehe! Makes it easier for me to empathize for them:D I think it'd be nicer if you tone down the POV switches a bit? :3 Maybe you could do something like, "You won't get away!" Lord X said while brandishing his sword. "Don't disrupt me!" Lord Y yelled as he kept running towards somewhere. But that's totally up to you! :3
This seems to be a great and also promising series. Sure, now it has not many chapters, but an author doesn't be rushed when he is creating a story, because a story takes time, research, and also wild imaginations. And the characters seem to be nice, but there is that dialogue that made me feel quite weird, but some writers are always trying something new every day. Carry on!
I only wish they were more chapters, but I'll wait. already added to my library cause i can see this is going to be a good one. I love how you described each characters pov, please update soon
Woah, that’s one hell of a book. I think till there’s a new chapter, my mind won’t be at rest. I absolutely love it. The writing quality is really good, the characters are relatable too and everything is really good. Can’t wait for more. Good job.
The writing quality in this one is top-tier. The only thing I could fault was the inconsistent writing of dialogue. Sometimes it comes in novel form with the quotation marks, but other times it reads more like a screenplay. Neither one is wrong, but maybe sticking to one would read better. Other than that, I could find very little to fault this story. Very strong prose with a great flow and a diverse vocabulary. The story is quite engrossing with some great fight scenes, colorful characters and a steamy romance too. Only four chapters so far, but the author has covered a lot of ground. Good, captivating stuff. I highly recommend giving this one a go!
Mm yes me likey! :D I think the concept is very neat, and I like how you explained things about their families hehe! Me really like reading royalty stories too, so that's a plus! :3 I also love how each character has different motives and personalities! :D Their interaction with each other is also a pleasure to read, be it the feel-goodsies moments between the FL and ML, or when the royals fight! :3 And another great thing is, I love reading about their feelings and emotions hehehe! Makes it easier for me to empathize for them:D I think it'd be nicer if you tone down the POV switches a bit? :3 Maybe you could do something like, "You won't get away!" Lord X said while brandishing his sword. "Don't disrupt me!" Lord Y yelled as he kept running towards somewhere. But that's totally up to you! :3
This seems to be a great and also promising series. Sure, now it has not many chapters, but an author doesn't be rushed when he is creating a story, because a story takes time, research, and also wild imaginations. And the characters seem to be nice, but there is that dialogue that made me feel quite weird, but some writers are always trying something new every day. Carry on!
I only wish they were more chapters, but I'll wait. already added to my library cause i can see this is going to be a good one. I love how you described each characters pov, please update soon
Woah, that’s one hell of a book. I think till there’s a new chapter, my mind won’t be at rest. I absolutely love it. The writing quality is really good, the characters are relatable too and everything is really good. Can’t wait for more. Good job.