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romantis banget...aku cemburu sama Yola... keren banget pokoknya wajib baca deh!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keren novel ini cocok jadi teman di kala senjang... masukkan pustaka deh... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Novel romantis ada action-nya juga keren...salut ke author nya...keren habis deh...cocok jadi bahan bacaan sambil baring-baring atau bersantai ria
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Kisah manis penuh cinta...bikin cemburu pembaca...aku ikut terbawa spt bernostalgia... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Yola gadis baik...aku suka karakternya Orang baik banyak cobaannya [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Ceritanya bagus. Suka banget sama cerita ini. Penasaran banget sih kira-kira Yola akan kehilangan siapa ya? Keren thor ceritanya🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Cerita yang bagus sekali. ditunggu kelanjutannya kaka[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
aku terkesima...tulisan ini di buat dengan penuh hati... penulisnya hebat [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Suka banget sama ceritanya!!!! Setiap adegan uwu-uwu, selalu dibikin terbang huaaa🙊🙉🙈🐵 lanjut terus, semangat thorrr!!!!!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
wah ceritanya selalu menarik, koleksinya pun sdh banyak di setiap novelnya. penulisan yang rapi dan mudah dipahami. Keren [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Semoga Martin bisa menemukan perempuan yang membuatnya lupa dengan Yola dan Yola bisa berkumpul kembali dengan Abdul ......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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romantis banget...aku cemburu sama Yola... keren banget pokoknya wajib baca deh!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
keren novel ini cocok jadi teman di kala senjang... masukkan pustaka deh... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Novel romantis ada action-nya juga keren...salut ke author nya...keren habis deh...cocok jadi bahan bacaan sambil baring-baring atau bersantai ria
揭示劇透 Kisah manis penuh cinta...bikin cemburu pembaca...aku ikut terbawa spt bernostalgia... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 Yola gadis baik...aku suka karakternya Orang baik banyak cobaannya [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 Ceritanya bagus. Suka banget sama cerita ini. Penasaran banget sih kira-kira Yola akan kehilangan siapa ya? Keren thor ceritanya🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Cerita yang bagus sekali. ditunggu kelanjutannya kaka[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
aku terkesima...tulisan ini di buat dengan penuh hati... penulisnya hebat [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 Baru bab satu aja sudah dibikin dag dig dug sama author satu ini, Keren banget ceritanya. Setiap karakter digambarkan sangat kuat sehingga membawa pembaca masuk ke dalam cerita, Good job.. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Suka banget sama ceritanya!!!! Setiap adegan uwu-uwu, selalu dibikin terbang huaaa🙊🙉🙈🐵 lanjut terus, semangat thorrr!!!!!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
wah ceritanya selalu menarik, koleksinya pun sdh banyak di setiap novelnya. penulisan yang rapi dan mudah dipahami. Keren [img=recommend][img=recommend]
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