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The hair white is from MC pathetic. 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
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This fanfic is a direct insult to Gojo's character, mentality, and skills. Gojo of this fanfic is just a brat showing off powers he didn't even earn.
I was expecting a great Gojo Saturo Multiverse adventure. But what I read was Gojo Saturo traveling and staying in each world at least 4 chaps each? Come on man. I wanted to see him develop a nice relationship with ophis and others from diff. worlds too.
10/10 one of the best stories I've ever read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well this story is plot easy and is meant more for your amusement and relaxation than for lenghtly arcs and ton of world-building and such. Story is great but way it is writen have much to desire. Updates are prety constant for this kind of story. Well for story development there is almost no story whatsoever so you don't have to think about it. If you like story heavy fan-fics or novels than this isn't for you Character desing is well as good as it can be since this is an fan-fic so characters aren't designed by author. Unfortunately he couldn't keep complete character of them. World background is like title says multiverse. So you can expect anything from fantasy-caveman world to scifi-starship one. But author is mostly focused on Anime worlds. All in all this story isn't necesarily bad but isn't one of the great ones. Good for just reading it for fun but don't expect anithing amazing from it.
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Honestly not that great of a story (which even the author admitted and gave his own story a 1.5 stars). For all soon to be readers, this is basically a random dude being given the power and appearance of Gojo and chucked into random worlds to prank/mess with/harass/faceslap different characters. The biggest downside is that each world only lasts a couple chapters. It's literally just "hi new world, slap a few people, bye world, on to the next one."
Jumpchains i hate jumpchains. op mc, “attempted comidy” , and uhg jumpchains..................................................................
a very cilckbaity title. Gojo? where? I thought this was a daddy gojo fanfic like that keisuke bleach fanfic. which og character transfered to other anime. but nay. it was a boy, who act like gojo, and fail miserably. Still, should've categorized this as a crackfic tho. Like that druglord merlin or drug addict lelouch. 'cause this gojo always eat candy.
This is incredibly funny and I particularly love the Yandere chapter with “Peace” plz keep doing great as ever and I hope there is more of Yandere Comedy involved from time to time
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I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good
Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 5 The total score 3.6 This story is good, get some Gojo nature, intresting world, and good communication to other character. BUT, the nature of Chara less felt (?), communication between chara lot imposed by the plot, the story is dense, some of the rationality of the chara (like Sirzechs, Kagaya) is missing
Its really good dont just look at the stars its really good and funny I hope the go to naruto..........? ...................................
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Boring, no character development, no conflict, no interesting interactions, nothing. Just a character eating sweets and that's it. If it was a story in Shokugeki no Soma it would fit better with the general theme going on.
It's just a cliche DXD powerfantasy fanfic. Also would recommend just saying in the beginning he knows how to use Gojo's skills cuz he doesn't act or even talk like Gojo.
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writing- for me it's 5 star SD- there is nothing to develop,mc is puppet created by author to be like gojo,and this is parody of dxd fanfic from webnovel. for showing gojo. CD- is it tasty ? full of oc stereotype character (if u read u will know) mc is like paid actor who got gojo role and perform how gojo act. US-don't know, probably it will completed before chap 15? WD- is that important if there is gojo. STORY- reincarnated person with good acting skill, acting as gojo in WN DxD fanfic parody world. you will like it probably as there is gojo demand but low supply of good stories.
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( Written in translator ) This is a review of 5 stars temporaria to receive the response of this comment (so, I will read the work more in depth and come back here to make a fair review). Apparently this is a Dxd without harem, something that is extremely risky to do, because almost always the Author chooses the 'wrong' girl from the point of view of readers, and from that moment on things become terrible. That’s why I’m asking right away, what is the love interest of the Protagonist?(And if honestly, it is a Dxd without romance, that the Author does not show erotic scenes of girls doing sexy poses or development with Romance among other Characters)
Do, please continue this book/novel because i have been waiting for a Gojo Satoru SI in DXD! Please do continue this! Please do continue this ! Please do continue this !Please do continue this !Please do continue this !Please do continue this
I am not a shameless author however I do must say this is fanfic is just a vent for all the ideas I've thought up. If you don't want to read this fic of bullshit then I'd advise to not read and make the experience for other people worse. Feel free to continue to grill me as I'm not really trying to write a fantastic in depth thought out plan for this fan fic. I'm just writing some ideas that pop up in my head usually. So if you don't like it please don't read it. Criticism is welcomed but please do not make aggressive comments. Making comments that try discourage this fic only make you look like a fool in front of those who do enjoy this fic.
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The hair white is from MC pathetic. 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/,.,.,.,.,',',',.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.-'-'-'-','-','-'-'-'-'-'-''-'-'-'-'-''-+!+!+¡+(«(«(;;&«;(+(+(+¡¡+¡+¡++(+(+(+(+(+((+(+(+(++(+(+(+(+(+(+¡+¡+¡+¡+¡/¡¡ ¡/¡+!+!+¡+!/!/!/!//(/&;3;$;$8¡;&/(/
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This fanfic is a direct insult to Gojo's character, mentality, and skills. Gojo of this fanfic is just a brat showing off powers he didn't even earn.
I was expecting a great Gojo Saturo Multiverse adventure. But what I read was Gojo Saturo traveling and staying in each world at least 4 chaps each? Come on man. I wanted to see him develop a nice relationship with ophis and others from diff. worlds too.
10/10 one of the best stories I've ever read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well this story is plot easy and is meant more for your amusement and relaxation than for lenghtly arcs and ton of world-building and such. Story is great but way it is writen have much to desire. Updates are prety constant for this kind of story. Well for story development there is almost no story whatsoever so you don't have to think about it. If you like story heavy fan-fics or novels than this isn't for you Character desing is well as good as it can be since this is an fan-fic so characters aren't designed by author. Unfortunately he couldn't keep complete character of them. World background is like title says multiverse. So you can expect anything from fantasy-caveman world to scifi-starship one. But author is mostly focused on Anime worlds. All in all this story isn't necesarily bad but isn't one of the great ones. Good for just reading it for fun but don't expect anithing amazing from it.
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Honestly not that great of a story (which even the author admitted and gave his own story a 1.5 stars). For all soon to be readers, this is basically a random dude being given the power and appearance of Gojo and chucked into random worlds to prank/mess with/harass/faceslap different characters. The biggest downside is that each world only lasts a couple chapters. It's literally just "hi new world, slap a few people, bye world, on to the next one."
Jumpchains i hate jumpchains. op mc, “attempted comidy” , and uhg jumpchains..................................................................
a very cilckbaity title. Gojo? where? I thought this was a daddy gojo fanfic like that keisuke bleach fanfic. which og character transfered to other anime. but nay. it was a boy, who act like gojo, and fail miserably. Still, should've categorized this as a crackfic tho. Like that druglord merlin or drug addict lelouch. 'cause this gojo always eat candy.
This is incredibly funny and I particularly love the Yandere chapter with “Peace” plz keep doing great as ever and I hope there is more of Yandere Comedy involved from time to time
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I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good I did not read it yet I know it will be good
Writing Quality 3 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 5 The total score 3.6 This story is good, get some Gojo nature, intresting world, and good communication to other character. BUT, the nature of Chara less felt (?), communication between chara lot imposed by the plot, the story is dense, some of the rationality of the chara (like Sirzechs, Kagaya) is missing
Its really good dont just look at the stars its really good and funny I hope the go to naruto..........? ...................................
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Boring, no character development, no conflict, no interesting interactions, nothing. Just a character eating sweets and that's it. If it was a story in Shokugeki no Soma it would fit better with the general theme going on.
It's just a cliche DXD powerfantasy fanfic. Also would recommend just saying in the beginning he knows how to use Gojo's skills cuz he doesn't act or even talk like Gojo.
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writing- for me it's 5 star SD- there is nothing to develop,mc is puppet created by author to be like gojo,and this is parody of dxd fanfic from webnovel. for showing gojo. CD- is it tasty ? full of oc stereotype character (if u read u will know) mc is like paid actor who got gojo role and perform how gojo act. US-don't know, probably it will completed before chap 15? WD- is that important if there is gojo. STORY- reincarnated person with good acting skill, acting as gojo in WN DxD fanfic parody world. you will like it probably as there is gojo demand but low supply of good stories.
揭示劇透 ( Written in translator ) This is a review of 5 stars temporaria to receive the response of this comment (so, I will read the work more in depth and come back here to make a fair review). Apparently this is a Dxd without harem, something that is extremely risky to do, because almost always the Author chooses the 'wrong' girl from the point of view of readers, and from that moment on things become terrible. That’s why I’m asking right away, what is the love interest of the Protagonist?(And if honestly, it is a Dxd without romance, that the Author does not show erotic scenes of girls doing sexy poses or development with Romance among other Characters)
Do, please continue this book/novel because i have been waiting for a Gojo Satoru SI in DXD! Please do continue this! Please do continue this ! Please do continue this !Please do continue this !Please do continue this !Please do continue this
I am not a shameless author however I do must say this is fanfic is just a vent for all the ideas I've thought up. If you don't want to read this fic of bullshit then I'd advise to not read and make the experience for other people worse. Feel free to continue to grill me as I'm not really trying to write a fantastic in depth thought out plan for this fan fic. I'm just writing some ideas that pop up in my head usually. So if you don't like it please don't read it. Criticism is welcomed but please do not make aggressive comments. Making comments that try discourage this fic only make you look like a fool in front of those who do enjoy this fic.