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Beautiful grammer and a great story. This story wasn't boring to read as every chapter was great and exquisite in every possible way. Overall, this was a fine peace of work!
this story was okay until author ruined it by adding a bunch of new characters that just took away from the story.
Trash story for some reason the familiar is a beautiful girl the ai is a beautiful girl and its just one of those generic stories where all the girls are beautiful trash author and trash story
As another review stated it’s pretty much 80% OCs with a dash of Marvel characters that pop up now and then. I don’t mind the whole magic cultivation to regain power trope. The thing that brings the story down for me though are these extra OCs from the same world who had previously never even met the MC in their old world. It’s a separate POV of them finding their old teammates and really hasn’t added anything to the main storyline so far.
A rare gem in the FanFic market that shows respect to the origin without squandering it in delusional fantasy. The idea is creative and original that can definitely be considered fresh air when compared to the sea of ROBs and questionable reincarnation or transmigration story's made in the FanFiction industry. I enjoy the different characters that have been used or created and their own story's that add a change of pace to the MCs story. I look forward to see how the author continues to blend this story with that of Marvel and hope they don't drop it as I believe it has a lot more to give its readers.
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Final rating. Multiple transmigrated/reincarnated OCs and they just came out of nowhere and made the story worse than it was, cringe conversations with the mom who just doesnt notice anything different about him, the MC is NERFED HARD, MC just doesnt care about his mom or is just an idiot thats oblivious that she is doing something for him and had to leave but after she is gone the MC realizes something was weird and then just ignores it lol, his Mom is forcing the MC to go to school even though he only has 1year to live(that she knows) Like who in the world would force their kid to go to school that he has never been to just to die lol makes zero sense. Also the random OCs that show up that werent needed at all are terrible. Story could have been decent if it wasnt for the cringe conversations, the unnecessary bunch of transmigrated OCs that arent good at all, the MC being an idiot with his Mom, his Mom forcing him to attened school for the first time even though he is supposed to only hace 1year to live, way to Many OCs in a world that has thousands of characters to choose from..... all in all this story was a waste of time imo but if any of these reasons i listed appeals to you then maybe its for you idk
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Honest to god worst book ive ever read made me cringe everytime the MC spoke and i would lieterally rather kms then read this five stars. [img=fp]
Honestly, best AirBNB i've been to yet. It hits all the marks of a bed and breakfast. Stunning view, stocked minifridge, lovely workers who work with a great smile! Will remember this for years to come, and might write about my experience and have it published by Jeff Kinney and Andy Griffiths. It is honestly that good. If you needed a comparison, the BNB is like...having a childhood food after the longest food (thought of that from ratatouille) or a telltale and landmark book (Diary Of A Wimpy Kid comes to mind). If I had to post a complaint, it would simply be that sometimes there's this fat kid swimming in the pool, who releases this extreme odor, really awful. Apart from that, everything was what I was looking for. I give it 5 stars, and would have anyone travelling the world/looking for a detour, to give this pristine place a stop! You won't regret it (unless the fat kid is there). 5/5 stars, would stop by again!
I really liked the story. The MC is quite likable and the story always leaves me excited for the next chapter. I got banned on the Discord tho for no reason :( But otherwise great work!
All right, here's a more serious review. Honestly, don't expect a lot of Marvel content here. This is about 80% OC and 20% Marvel; it's using the setting of the Marvel universe to create a unique story with its own characters. Of course Marvel characters pop up and so on but so far none of them are predominant. The writing is good enough, not perfect but you know. Give it a shot and see if you like it despite the plethora of different POVs.
when I read the quality is good but the longer I read the feeling when I read this fanfic feels off-putting in slightly bad way when mc started basically ignore his mother when she feel distraught of mc sickness
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I like it so far the grammar is good and the story line is good. My only problem is the amount of money he made and how fast he made it my only suggestion would be to retcon it from the 13billion to something like 100mill even that's not that believable but its better than 13 billion dollars.
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it started very good and interesting. Grammer and writing quality is excelent. Flow of the story is very good its good deal above most things in webnovel. if updating pace continues like this I dont see why this novel doesnt become a hit. Good work author and any beta readers and editors
it's a great fiction....really liked it....though it would've been nice to get daily updates....i can endure the wait due to its quality....so i can understand the time it takes to write and with current situation many personal problems occurs....i hope you update soon🙃🙃
Beautiful grammer and a great story. This story wasn't boring to read as every chapter was great and exquisite in every possible way. Overall, this was a fine peace of work!
this story was okay until author ruined it by adding a bunch of new characters that just took away from the story.
Trash story for some reason the familiar is a beautiful girl the ai is a beautiful girl and its just one of those generic stories where all the girls are beautiful trash author and trash story
As another review stated it’s pretty much 80% OCs with a dash of Marvel characters that pop up now and then. I don’t mind the whole magic cultivation to regain power trope. The thing that brings the story down for me though are these extra OCs from the same world who had previously never even met the MC in their old world. It’s a separate POV of them finding their old teammates and really hasn’t added anything to the main storyline so far.
A rare gem in the FanFic market that shows respect to the origin without squandering it in delusional fantasy. The idea is creative and original that can definitely be considered fresh air when compared to the sea of ROBs and questionable reincarnation or transmigration story's made in the FanFiction industry. I enjoy the different characters that have been used or created and their own story's that add a change of pace to the MCs story. I look forward to see how the author continues to blend this story with that of Marvel and hope they don't drop it as I believe it has a lot more to give its readers.
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Final rating. Multiple transmigrated/reincarnated OCs and they just came out of nowhere and made the story worse than it was, cringe conversations with the mom who just doesnt notice anything different about him, the MC is NERFED HARD, MC just doesnt care about his mom or is just an idiot thats oblivious that she is doing something for him and had to leave but after she is gone the MC realizes something was weird and then just ignores it lol, his Mom is forcing the MC to go to school even though he only has 1year to live(that she knows) Like who in the world would force their kid to go to school that he has never been to just to die lol makes zero sense. Also the random OCs that show up that werent needed at all are terrible. Story could have been decent if it wasnt for the cringe conversations, the unnecessary bunch of transmigrated OCs that arent good at all, the MC being an idiot with his Mom, his Mom forcing him to attened school for the first time even though he is supposed to only hace 1year to live, way to Many OCs in a world that has thousands of characters to choose from..... all in all this story was a waste of time imo but if any of these reasons i listed appeals to you then maybe its for you idk
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Honest to god worst book ive ever read made me cringe everytime the MC spoke and i would lieterally rather kms then read this five stars. [img=fp]
Honestly, best AirBNB i've been to yet. It hits all the marks of a bed and breakfast. Stunning view, stocked minifridge, lovely workers who work with a great smile! Will remember this for years to come, and might write about my experience and have it published by Jeff Kinney and Andy Griffiths. It is honestly that good. If you needed a comparison, the BNB is like...having a childhood food after the longest food (thought of that from ratatouille) or a telltale and landmark book (Diary Of A Wimpy Kid comes to mind). If I had to post a complaint, it would simply be that sometimes there's this fat kid swimming in the pool, who releases this extreme odor, really awful. Apart from that, everything was what I was looking for. I give it 5 stars, and would have anyone travelling the world/looking for a detour, to give this pristine place a stop! You won't regret it (unless the fat kid is there). 5/5 stars, would stop by again!
I really liked the story. The MC is quite likable and the story always leaves me excited for the next chapter. I got banned on the Discord tho for no reason :( But otherwise great work!
All right, here's a more serious review. Honestly, don't expect a lot of Marvel content here. This is about 80% OC and 20% Marvel; it's using the setting of the Marvel universe to create a unique story with its own characters. Of course Marvel characters pop up and so on but so far none of them are predominant. The writing is good enough, not perfect but you know. Give it a shot and see if you like it despite the plethora of different POVs.
when I read the quality is good but the longer I read the feeling when I read this fanfic feels off-putting in slightly bad way when mc started basically ignore his mother when she feel distraught of mc sickness
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I like it so far the grammar is good and the story line is good. My only problem is the amount of money he made and how fast he made it my only suggestion would be to retcon it from the 13billion to something like 100mill even that's not that believable but its better than 13 billion dollars.
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it started very good and interesting. Grammer and writing quality is excelent. Flow of the story is very good its good deal above most things in webnovel. if updating pace continues like this I dont see why this novel doesnt become a hit. Good work author and any beta readers and editors
it's a great fiction....really liked it....though it would've been nice to get daily updates....i can endure the wait due to its quality....so i can understand the time it takes to write and with current situation many personal problems occurs....i hope you update soon🙃🙃