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Short and sweet. Would love a little more of their story, but one can guess a happy ending. 🙉😻🌺🙏🥰☘️🎁. Protecting the baby was kinda cool.
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Lot of typos and improper English. Good story but seemed like it was written like a teenager. Plus characters could have had more depth and story development.
The story from beginning to end was kept me interested . I was not board,the characters were very alive whenever you picked up the book. You didn't have a problem continuing to find your place in the story.
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Book seemed to be rushed. Could have more development and more elaborate ending. A great concept with some work would be an amazing read
Short and sweet. Would love a little more of their story, but one can guess a happy ending. 🙉😻🌺🙏🥰☘️🎁. Protecting the baby was kinda cool.
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Lot of typos and improper English. Good story but seemed like it was written like a teenager. Plus characters could have had more depth and story development.
The story from beginning to end was kept me interested . I was not board,the characters were very alive whenever you picked up the book. You didn't have a problem continuing to find your place in the story.
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Book seemed to be rushed. Could have more development and more elaborate ending. A great concept with some work would be an amazing read