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1 Word "AMAZING". 100/10. I Know This Dude Read "Dragon Prince Yuan" "Ancestral Dragon" Dead Give Away. Love This Fanfic, I Want More Chapter.
quite a good one if u ask me ,like it till now and still looking forward to it Keep Up The Good Work
Atualize A história é muito boa, tem um incrível potencial, não a abandones agora, seria um total desperdício, deverias continuar com ela! [img=atualização]
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the main character accepts a gift from his system that changes his appearance in the middle of a dining hall surrounded by people while no one seems to notice. next his martial spirit he gains from his system can be described really simple number one dragon to ever exist. its honestly disappointing.
Even though he isnt the real author, the story itself is one of the best douluo fanfics. the only bad thing about it is that the author didnt get enough recognition and ended the novel early. he still completed it(thankfully) but abreviated the last arcs in a couple of chapters. still, 10/10 would read again and 11/10 are sad that that it ended so fast.
Pretty basic well mc has op system and he also has Goldly bloodline steals the plot from wulin and steals his relationships bretty basic fanfic its fine not too good not too bad if u wanna read it knock urslefs out.....
ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA
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La serie está genial, solo espero que la lleves hasta el final,†****†*****************†***********†******†**************†***#************†************†***********†**************
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he gained Strengthened comprehension of the system, and a chance to sort a spirit instead of waiting a few minutes or a few hours at most, he's already done the stupidity of sorting before the official awakening, losing the chance to have 2 spirits, and that's right at the beginning from the fanfic already putting together the huge stupidity of mc. google tranlate
This is just plain bad. The author wants to make a strong mc but doesn't want to divert from the canon. So at the end of the day the is just another lad.
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Its a really great Fanfic! Just that the Mc is a bit too OP but welp...................................................................................
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if Dragon god have little bit blood line of ancestral dragon then why Mc do not have elements power . I think system fooling him what I think after reading this
1 Word "AMAZING". 100/10. I Know This Dude Read "Dragon Prince Yuan" "Ancestral Dragon" Dead Give Away. Love This Fanfic, I Want More Chapter.
quite a good one if u ask me ,like it till now and still looking forward to it Keep Up The Good Work
Atualize A história é muito boa, tem um incrível potencial, não a abandones agora, seria um total desperdício, deverias continuar com ela! [img=atualização]
I like the story. Please update moreee. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the main character accepts a gift from his system that changes his appearance in the middle of a dining hall surrounded by people while no one seems to notice. next his martial spirit he gains from his system can be described really simple number one dragon to ever exist. its honestly disappointing.
Even though he isnt the real author, the story itself is one of the best douluo fanfics. the only bad thing about it is that the author didnt get enough recognition and ended the novel early. he still completed it(thankfully) but abreviated the last arcs in a couple of chapters. still, 10/10 would read again and 11/10 are sad that that it ended so fast.
Pretty basic well mc has op system and he also has Goldly bloodline steals the plot from wulin and steals his relationships bretty basic fanfic its fine not too good not too bad if u wanna read it knock urslefs out.....
ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA
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La serie está genial, solo espero que la lleves hasta el final,†****†*****************†***********†******†**************†***#************†************†***********†**************
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he gained Strengthened comprehension of the system, and a chance to sort a spirit instead of waiting a few minutes or a few hours at most, he's already done the stupidity of sorting before the official awakening, losing the chance to have 2 spirits, and that's right at the beginning from the fanfic already putting together the huge stupidity of mc. google tranlate
This is just plain bad. The author wants to make a strong mc but doesn't want to divert from the canon. So at the end of the day the is just another lad.
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Its a really great Fanfic! Just that the Mc is a bit too OP but welp...................................................................................
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if Dragon god have little bit blood line of ancestral dragon then why Mc do not have elements power . I think system fooling him what I think after reading this