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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
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ah such a wonderful story. nice characters and good plot. writing style is lovely. sadly the author abandoned it .it's a pity. I hope this story would resume.
Nice writing style...I heard u got exteme stuff so waitng for thr**some and an*l waitng for more chapters waitng for more chapter waiting for more chapters
Great start/hook. There have only been 5 chapters released so far, and I’m left wanting more. So author, please don’t give up yet. And I’m super curious about this “power system” from the description
ah such a wonderful story. nice characters and good plot. writing style is lovely. sadly the author abandoned it .it's a pity. I hope this story would resume.
Nice writing style...I heard u got exteme stuff so waitng for thr**some and an*l waitng for more chapters waitng for more chapter waiting for more chapters
Great start/hook. There have only been 5 chapters released so far, and I’m left wanting more. So author, please don’t give up yet. And I’m super curious about this “power system” from the description