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寫檢討
Honestly, thus far... Assuming that this is the author's first time typing a novel...it is quite good. I'm very delighted by the fact that there is No Love, NO Romance, and NO Harem. Hopefully there are no clingy characters. But nonetheless it is good. I hope you keep on publishing more chapters on a constant rate. Where you the author is still healthy and doesn't have to go Overtime to type. As your health is important, and I'd rather read good chapters released at a relatively modeste pace. Than have like 100 chapters that have no quality at all. Thank you! :)
Honestly, thus far... Assuming that this is the author's first time typing a novel...it is quite good. I'm very delighted by the fact that there is No Love, NO Romance, and NO Harem. Hopefully there are no clingy characters. But nonetheless it is good. I hope you keep on publishing more chapters on a constant rate. Where you the author is still healthy and doesn't have to go Overtime to type. As your health is important, and I'd rather read good chapters released at a relatively modeste pace. Than have like 100 chapters that have no quality at all. Thank you! :)
Please continue the novel it’s too good to drop &:&:£:):£:£:&:&:&;£;)