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Really fun and entertaining novel that I hope the author keeps with! ....................................................................................
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So far this story was a great read , and the world bulding was great and immersive , characters are great too. the only problem I have is that while the story is seems to be written in 1st person pov , only usage of "I" and "me" is the only thing that it makes a 1st person pov. what I am saying is , if you replace "I" with "He" you will get a 3rd pov story. the immersion you get while reading the 1st pov isnt there. overall it was a great read.... the onoy thing that was bothering me was the above one. but it doesnt matter cuz you can enjoy it anyway.... good work author san
You should definitely try *The Conqueror's Path* when you get some free time. It's one of the best harem novels out there. The first arc is decent, mainly because the author was still gaining experience, but once you hit the second arc, it gets insanely good. The character development and interactions really shine, and the plot thickens as the story hprogresses. All the harem members are true yanderes, which makes it incredibly fun to watch how the protagonist navigates these intense relationships. They absolutely hate sharing, yet the MC is a master manipulator, with everything under control. It’s both amusing and thrilling to see powerful yandere heroines and goddesses fall into his plans, completely unaware of his schemes. The author excels at giving each character their spotlight, ensuring that every moment feels well-paced and meaningful.
This was my rants because i was frustrated with how the story go but want to keep reading it. MC is one with the calculating mind which wwhat he wants. The problem is his Harem member so crazy that he lies to every single one of them for wooing them and his relationship with them can explode with a little wrong step from him (typical yandere). The other problem is there really isn't much character growth for MC. What i remember he didn't get any stronger, he only get stronger by borrowing the power of goddesses he has relationship with and it only 30 seconds (if i remember it right). This problem exist for ±400 chapter. The story also get repetitive with every convenient stuff he do or had has an explanation he got it in his time skip. From the look of it author will gave a new element and variable to the story in the newest chapter so i was a little interested again
i want more chapters the story seems to be getting interesting again as fast chapters have been boring since they for searching a away to cure her
PEAK NOVEL i have really enjoyed it just have one issue DAMN UPDATES author if you are reading this please try to keep updating regular we all love conquerors path
Contains spoilers + I need someone to spoil. I’m on chapter 200 ish rn, and I’m wondering if he will keep going down the path of lies. I do not see a way that this ends in any way decent. Just wondering if this is still going on in the later chapters.
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Okay world building and story development, but the characters are extremely shallow, and the writing... typos, missing punctuation, just... bad writing. Even the 'edited' chapters are pretty bad. Overall, if you are fine with shallow characters and lesser than MTL-level writing, then sure, enjoy.
Damn the book goodit would be an honor to receive a reply from the author I've got a lot of things I want to discuss with him
2 months since update… I hope your doing good Arthur let us know your still alive plz I am worried that my top 2 favorite Arthur 😭
this story is like the best of the best i really like it but author is lazy as hell in updating it I don't know why
love this story its so intriguing with a nice mc and I did not forget the funniest in the book the [system]😍👌
Good but the Mc and his mothers situation was weird at first because she loved his dad which made Mc feel like a replacement
..... ........................................ .................................................... .........................................................mm mmmm...... This is amazing
Sorry for the inconvenience, author, but could you tell me in advance if all the girls in the love interest category will enter the harem? harem
Author bro............r u alive??..............................................................................................................................
does the writing gets any better? the story seems fine but all the grammatical errors are making it difficult for me to read. I want to give it a try but i don't know if i will be able to make it.
Really fun and entertaining novel that I hope the author keeps with! ....................................................................................
duttxtxddsnbgionseoinioejntoimgiongieugorekjmgegmdjngieoogfmoignroiemgdkgmoegoegmokgmoiemgo l,jptjomrhoergpiogmrfhmpmhorierp[d,rphmordmhdpm,fhmrkd
So far this story was a great read , and the world bulding was great and immersive , characters are great too. the only problem I have is that while the story is seems to be written in 1st person pov , only usage of "I" and "me" is the only thing that it makes a 1st person pov. what I am saying is , if you replace "I" with "He" you will get a 3rd pov story. the immersion you get while reading the 1st pov isnt there. overall it was a great read.... the onoy thing that was bothering me was the above one. but it doesnt matter cuz you can enjoy it anyway.... good work author san
You should definitely try *The Conqueror's Path* when you get some free time. It's one of the best harem novels out there. The first arc is decent, mainly because the author was still gaining experience, but once you hit the second arc, it gets insanely good. The character development and interactions really shine, and the plot thickens as the story hprogresses. All the harem members are true yanderes, which makes it incredibly fun to watch how the protagonist navigates these intense relationships. They absolutely hate sharing, yet the MC is a master manipulator, with everything under control. It’s both amusing and thrilling to see powerful yandere heroines and goddesses fall into his plans, completely unaware of his schemes. The author excels at giving each character their spotlight, ensuring that every moment feels well-paced and meaningful.
This was my rants because i was frustrated with how the story go but want to keep reading it. MC is one with the calculating mind which wwhat he wants. The problem is his Harem member so crazy that he lies to every single one of them for wooing them and his relationship with them can explode with a little wrong step from him (typical yandere). The other problem is there really isn't much character growth for MC. What i remember he didn't get any stronger, he only get stronger by borrowing the power of goddesses he has relationship with and it only 30 seconds (if i remember it right). This problem exist for ±400 chapter. The story also get repetitive with every convenient stuff he do or had has an explanation he got it in his time skip. From the look of it author will gave a new element and variable to the story in the newest chapter so i was a little interested again
i want more chapters the story seems to be getting interesting again as fast chapters have been boring since they for searching a away to cure her
PEAK NOVEL i have really enjoyed it just have one issue DAMN UPDATES author if you are reading this please try to keep updating regular we all love conquerors path
Contains spoilers + I need someone to spoil. I’m on chapter 200 ish rn, and I’m wondering if he will keep going down the path of lies. I do not see a way that this ends in any way decent. Just wondering if this is still going on in the later chapters.
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Okay world building and story development, but the characters are extremely shallow, and the writing... typos, missing punctuation, just... bad writing. Even the 'edited' chapters are pretty bad. Overall, if you are fine with shallow characters and lesser than MTL-level writing, then sure, enjoy.
Damn the book goodit would be an honor to receive a reply from the author I've got a lot of things I want to discuss with him
2 months since update… I hope your doing good Arthur let us know your still alive plz I am worried that my top 2 favorite Arthur 😭
this story is like the best of the best i really like it but author is lazy as hell in updating it I don't know why
love this story its so intriguing with a nice mc and I did not forget the funniest in the book the [system]😍👌
Good but the Mc and his mothers situation was weird at first because she loved his dad which made Mc feel like a replacement
..... ........................................ .................................................... .........................................................mm mmmm...... This is amazing
Sorry for the inconvenience, author, but could you tell me in advance if all the girls in the love interest category will enter the harem? harem
Author bro............r u alive??..............................................................................................................................
does the writing gets any better? the story seems fine but all the grammatical errors are making it difficult for me to read. I want to give it a try but i don't know if i will be able to make it.