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Really good update schedule, writing quality.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Really like the fast pace you release these chapters. Well the only thing this story lacks is, that he never interacts with his family... I mean, he's gotten a little brother and all, but he has spoken like 4 phrases? Need more interactions with non Canon characters... It Will definitely be interesting. 5 stars because, who am I to judge?
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The story is really fast paced and with original plot not just a do over like most hxh fanfics the mc is smart and has already made plans for how he'll develop tho he is not cold as he has already made friends and is planning to make a team with them hope this review is good for y'all I don't usually write reviews
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Shameless author san here with my self inflating ego. Please read the story. Thank. Bye. I tried my best. Here's filler. Rhjpys6pdtoslgxlhxyldotsog
Gostei muito da historia gostei muito do mc e do cenário 👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Really good update schedule, writing quality.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Really like the fast pace you release these chapters. Well the only thing this story lacks is, that he never interacts with his family... I mean, he's gotten a little brother and all, but he has spoken like 4 phrases? Need more interactions with non Canon characters... It Will definitely be interesting. 5 stars because, who am I to judge?
揭示劇透 The story is really fast paced and with original plot not just a do over like most hxh fanfics the mc is smart and has already made plans for how he'll develop tho he is not cold as he has already made friends and is planning to make a team with them hope this review is good for y'all I don't usually write reviews
揭示劇透 Shameless author san here with my self inflating ego. Please read the story. Thank. Bye. I tried my best. Here's filler. Rhjpys6pdtoslgxlhxyldotsog
Gostei muito da historia gostei muito do mc e do cenário 👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏