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Back to You | L.S

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Harry and Louis are ex lovers who have to meet up again thanks to their friends' wedding.

Old wounds will open again, memories will come back, secrets will be told...

And maybe there wasn't a reason for their breakup after all...

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This was a really good story! I noticed a few grammar mistakes and it made a really big jump when they kissed in the bathroom. It felt a bit rushed and not thought through very well. other than that it was a great story! Great ideas! I also loved how you switched between POVs and how you were showing the flashbacks. I definitely recommend!

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