Beyond Critical (Multi-Cross DxD, Rosario Vampire, Ikki Tousen, More)

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0_Jordinio_0

Somehow, life always brings me back to you review box, my great nemesis.

LV 5

Avengtank

read upto chapter 31. The novel is pretty boring. its a DXD world where the powers of MC seems lack luster and not interesting. There is no buildup and climax in the story. Feels very boring to read also with the mixing of different anime feels very unpolished. Mixtures of different powers also feels clanky. Mostly feels like reading a story for muscle headed gym rat. Still gave a 5 star cause u know, if i give criticisms with low start it will get deleted by author.

A self-insert character that is hypocritical and unlikable? Check. A predictable plot, self-insert character bashing and stealing Issei's girls and making him into a cuckold? Check. The MC comes to Kuoh of all places instead of exploring the rest of the world and wasting potential plot ideas? Check. The MC with alpha male domination nonsense? Check. Unreliable updates? Check. The result is a one-star rating. It's a shame that I can't give zero stars.

LV 3

TheDaoOfBullshit

5/5 for some scientific reasons 🥴🥴😏😏 Need more chapters and dont drop this or you know what’s gonna happen next 😃🔪🔪

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Bukaro

What I like the most is that the story begins after the Riser arc, a good netori~ Keep up the good work this looks great potential like your other jobs that I'm already hooked on!

LV 4

skidmark

this is just for those of you that don't now where to read jords stuff go ff.live it's where he posts a lot this has like 100 /200 webnovel chapters on there same with most his books

LV 3

Trouxa_157

One of the best FanFiction writers in the webnovel, unfortunately he is the one who leaves the most unfinished work. Every time Jordino appears, his stories are at the top of the Ranking.

LV 4

dankoku

so it appears I'm yet again reading a novel from this guy. What can I say? Epic.

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Shinomiya_Akira

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DILL_100

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mike_w_0544

In all it's a pretty good book not sure what the updates are like since i just started reading it. But if you like dxd then it should scratch an itch.

LV 12

Seyitan_Odufalu

Author why did you drop your konosuba fic😭😭I’ve been craving it a lot these days

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Bad_news_83

To tell you the truth I still didn’t start reading but I anticipated something good because I had followed a lot of your stories Plus when I see That this fiction is DXD😍 Rosario Vampire,🥺 Testament Of New Sister Devil🥰 I expect something good I hope you don’t disappoint me Especially that you disappear suddenly a lot I hope in the future you make a crossover multiverse fiction about Marvel + Dc+ Harry Potter

LV 13

TaterRumble

One of the only good DXD fics at the moment. Good writing, good pacing, good premise, good creativity and great update stability. Good job bro.

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LV 4

Dreams_Reader01928

This is a very good story, but there are some pothole like the devil not finding they are fighting, but I like how MC had different way then getting reincarnated as devil. I love it thank you for hard work 👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

Kayzer9

It's Jord, quality is guaranteed. 5 stars.

LV 15

ranaltor

I've read some of your other fiction and this one is really good so I just wanted to you know give you five stars and I hope that you keep on posting for this fanfiction