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It is not my cup of tea. I agree a good story can skip ... but not stumble. It seems luke the MC just does random things without explaination through his character or though process. There is also the topic, that the reader is just updated on his new powers but he never realy takes part in the process of learning the Avatars powers and adapting them to his situation. Moreover the beginning was quite clichee. AIn addition to that the time steches arent integrated into the story but just inserted without meaning and realism. thats two and a half stars for me.
I like the idea I've read most of it I know the world is Naruto and it can take many turns but this author is basically nerfing Boruto. I'm gonna drop it sorry.
Novel is ok but the mc is basically the main casts babysitter not my cup of tea
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Please get rid of inconsistent upload tag and start uploading more frequently. P.S. love the novel
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IT HAS GODLY WRITING THAT ONLY GOD HIMSELF CAN WRITE IT. IT SO GOOD ITS BETTER THEN YOUR WAIFU SUCKING YOU OFF AT NIGHT. ALL IN ALL ITS A GREAT STORY WITH A GREAT CONCEPT SO GOOD ITS ON PAR WITH ANOTHER GODLY WRITER OF THE DC TOKYO GHOUL. just kidding lmao just did it for my friend lolz🤭😋😜
Really underrated. The writing quality is good, I like the flow and concept of the story. Haven’t gone far but I can already tell this is a gem. So add it to your library I highly recommend it.
It is not my cup of tea. I agree a good story can skip ... but not stumble. It seems luke the MC just does random things without explaination through his character or though process. There is also the topic, that the reader is just updated on his new powers but he never realy takes part in the process of learning the Avatars powers and adapting them to his situation. Moreover the beginning was quite clichee. AIn addition to that the time steches arent integrated into the story but just inserted without meaning and realism. thats two and a half stars for me.
I like the idea I've read most of it I know the world is Naruto and it can take many turns but this author is basically nerfing Boruto. I'm gonna drop it sorry.
Novel is ok but the mc is basically the main casts babysitter not my cup of tea
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Please get rid of inconsistent upload tag and start uploading more frequently. P.S. love the novel
Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic Great fanfic 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
IT HAS GODLY WRITING THAT ONLY GOD HIMSELF CAN WRITE IT. IT SO GOOD ITS BETTER THEN YOUR WAIFU SUCKING YOU OFF AT NIGHT. ALL IN ALL ITS A GREAT STORY WITH A GREAT CONCEPT SO GOOD ITS ON PAR WITH ANOTHER GODLY WRITER OF THE DC TOKYO GHOUL. just kidding lmao just did it for my friend lolz🤭😋😜
Really underrated. The writing quality is good, I like the flow and concept of the story. Haven’t gone far but I can already tell this is a gem. So add it to your library I highly recommend it.