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The plot is good and the pacing is alright but the grammar needs some serious work. ..............................................................................
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Any news for this author san?? . . . . . . . ....'...........'..................'...............'.....................'.............'................................................... .. ....... . . . . . .
Adoro essa novel, estou ansioso por mais cap, e OBRIGADO MANO😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙
incredible. the story is intersting no boring points, op MC, he doesn't seek an harem, but harem seek him. only bad point is that i'm at chapter 110 and he still hasn't lewd his girls!!! they sleep togheter, but he still hasn't gone all the way!!! just **** them
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I didn't read Doluo Dalu, is it okay for me to read? BananananananananananananananananaNnNNanN nanananananananananananana ananaannanananananananaNNnananNNNnannaananananannanananananannnananNnan
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dunno what to say other than amazing .......................................................................................................
Keep writing ✍️ in my opinion it’s a really nice story, and the overall development is really nice I’m just righting this review to let you know that we really love the writing and to motivate you, keep pumping!! Keep hustling 🔥🔥🔥
grammar is better than a lot on here and updates are stable just overall good hope the author keeps doing this in the future.................................
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Ion give a **** what nobody say this book really a banger if only there where more like this i would feel that the world is coming To An end🧏🏿♂️🌎
I love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it
MORE MORE GIVE ME TO READ This is one of the most interesting stories I’ve read so far keep up the good work author-san Keep up the good work
me encanto esperó la continúen.......... ................................................................................................................................................................................................
The plot is good and the pacing is alright but the grammar needs some serious work. ..............................................................................
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Any news for this author san?? . . . . . . . ....'...........'..................'...............'.....................'.............'................................................... .. ....... . . . . . .
Adoro essa novel, estou ansioso por mais cap, e OBRIGADO MANO😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙
incredible. the story is intersting no boring points, op MC, he doesn't seek an harem, but harem seek him. only bad point is that i'm at chapter 110 and he still hasn't lewd his girls!!! they sleep togheter, but he still hasn't gone all the way!!! just **** them
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I didn't read Doluo Dalu, is it okay for me to read? BananananananananananananananananaNnNNanN nanananananananananananana ananaannanananananananaNNnananNNNnannaananananannanananananannnananNnan
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dunno what to say other than amazing .......................................................................................................
Keep writing ✍️ in my opinion it’s a really nice story, and the overall development is really nice I’m just righting this review to let you know that we really love the writing and to motivate you, keep pumping!! Keep hustling 🔥🔥🔥
grammar is better than a lot on here and updates are stable just overall good hope the author keeps doing this in the future.................................
pervect???? ?¿????¿?????¿??????????????????????????¿??????¿?????????¿????????¿mooreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee
okokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokookokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokookokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokokok
Ion give a **** what nobody say this book really a banger if only there where more like this i would feel that the world is coming To An end🧏🏿♂️🌎
I love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it i love it
MORE MORE GIVE ME TO READ This is one of the most interesting stories I’ve read so far keep up the good work author-san Keep up the good work
me encanto esperó la continúen.......... ................................................................................................................................................................................................