1評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
LV 1
its a new book with a great plot but spelling and editing should be improved and update more often other than that your book is great , keep up the good work
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寫檢討its a new book with a great plot but spelling and editing should be improved and update more often other than that your book is great , keep up the good work
its a new book with a great plot but spelling and editing should be improved and update more often other than that your book is great , keep up the good work