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Love's Penalties

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The story runs around Jackcy, who betrayed her only love of life, and he came back for revenge on her, his love turns into hate, and he came to break her, but he could not, the story is full of romance, drama, tragedy, and suspense.

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    Amit_Verma_5670

    Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.

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    Doctor_Min

    I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of fact😂. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'💪

    3yr
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    RedCeiling

    A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.

    3yr
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    Mia_2550

    Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... 👌🏻 👌🏻 👌🏻 Great job❤️ this story is commendable 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 You are such a great writer ❤️❤️❤️

    3yr
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    Olivia_2650

    Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! That’s great! Nice work! Excellent! That’s really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy 😍😍😍 Very interesting ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Keep writing 🙈 🙈 🙈

    3yr
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    TheDarkest_Girl

    I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every scene♥♥♥😍😍😍 , awesome work author, keep writing 😘😍

    3yr
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    Mynxiii1

    As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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    Kayleigh_Harkins

    The translation isn’t good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. I’ve felt every emotion the characters have. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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    Rody_Amgad

    The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️ ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤♥️💘💝💖💗💓💞💕💟❣️

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    Chapter 148: LET US HAVE FUN 3 years ago

    卷 1

    1. 1
      I LOST THE CHANCE 3 years ago
    2. 2
      LET US GO 3 years ago
    3. 3
      HE LEFT 3 years ago
    4. 4
      I HURT HER 3 years ago
    5. 5
      I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS 3 years ago
    6. 6
      YOU WILL NOT WORK HERE AGAIN 3 years ago
    7. 7
      I MISSED HER FRAGRANCE 3 years ago
    8. 8
      I STILL CAN NOT FORGIVE HER 3 years ago
    9. 9
      I AM STILL A VIRGIN 3 years ago
    10. 10
      JUST TRUST ME ONCE 3 years ago
    11. 11
      I FELT BROKEN 3 years ago
    12. 12
      SHE IS PREGNANT 3 years ago
    13. 13
      I WILL NOT CRY ANYMORE 3 years ago
    14. 14
      MY HEAD WILL EXPLODE 3 years ago
    15. 15
      SHE IS INNOCENT AS HELL 3 years ago
    16. 16
      HE WILL REGRET 3 years ago
    17. 17
      HE MADE ME FEEL DISGUSTED 3 years ago
    18. 18
      TAKING ADVANTAGE 3 years ago
    19. 19
      HER CRUEL FATE 3 years ago
    20. 20
      HE WILL DIE 3 years ago
    21. 21
      I DO NOT WANT IT 3 years ago
    22. 22
      SHE STILL CARES 3 years ago
    23. 23
      NEVER LET HER GO 3 years ago
    24. 24
      HOW SHE WILL PAY BACK 3 years ago
    25. 25
      JUST WAIT AND WATCH 3 years ago
    26. 26
      NEED TO BE EXTRA CAREFUL 3 years ago
    27. 27
      WHAT SHE WILL DO NOW 3 years ago
    28. 28
      I AM READY 3 years ago
    29. 29
      SHE NEEDS HELP 3 years ago
    30. 30
      SHE IS TENSED 3 years ago
    31. 31
      MAJOR PART OF HIS LIFE 3 years ago
    32. 32
      SHE IS NOT PREGNENT 3 years ago
    33. 33
      BE READY FOR THE EXPLANTION 3 years ago
    34. 34
      THANK GOD 3 years ago
    35. 35
      I AM COMING 3 years ago
    36. 36
      I LOST HER 3 years ago
    37. 37
      SHE WAS NOT THERE 3 years ago
    38. 38
      I WILL FIX EVERYTHING 3 years ago
    39. 39
      I DO THE SAME 3 years ago
    40. 40
      FOR YOU 3 years ago
    41. 41
      I WAS SCARED 3 years ago
    42. 42
      BLUSHING 3 years ago
    43. 43
      CONTROLLING 3 years ago
    44. 44
      FEELING NOT GOOD 3 years ago
    45. 45
      A LITTLE EXCITED 3 years ago
    46. 46
      I GOT HURT 3 years ago
    47. 47
      SCARING ME 3 years ago
    48. 48
      HE IS ANGRY 3 years ago
    49. 49
      I WAS HURT 3 years ago
    50. 50
      HUFFED 3 years ago
    51. 51
      INVESTIGATION 3 years ago
    52. 52
      NOT INTRESTED 3 years ago
    53. 53
      NEW BODYGAURD 3 years ago
    54. 54
      BEING A BITCH 3 years ago
    55. 55
      BEING EXCITED 3 years ago
    56. 56
      SOMETHING IS WRONG 3 years ago
    57. 57
      HELPLESS 3 years ago
    58. 58
      SURPRISE 3 years ago
    59. 59
      HAPPY 3 years ago
    60. 60
      LITTLE INTIMACY 3 years ago
    61. 61
      HOT 3 years ago
    62. 62
      MAKING A LIE 3 years ago
    63. 63
      A SECRET 3 years ago
    64. 64
      HOW DARE HE 3 years ago
    65. 65
      HIDING 3 years ago
    66. 66
      THE CONFESSION 3 years ago
    67. 67
      HAVING FUN 3 years ago
    68. 68
      PEACE 3 years ago
    69. 69
      KIDDING 3 years ago
    70. 70
      HE BLUSHED 3 years ago
    71. 71
      PERFECT MORNING 3 years ago
    72. 72
      SHE IS BACK 3 years ago
    73. 73
      IT IS SUSPICIOUS 3 years ago
    74. 74
      SECRET MISSION 3 years ago
    75. 75
      THEY ARE REAL 3 years ago
    76. 76
      GONNA CAUGHT 3 years ago
    77. 77
      WE ARE SAFE 3 years ago
    78. 78
      SOMETHING WAS WRONG 3 years ago
    79. 79
      WHAT HAPPEND 3 years ago
    80. 80
      NOT SAFE 3 years ago
    81. 81
      I AM WITH YOU 3 years ago
    82. 82
      SPEECHLESS 3 years ago
    83. 83
      HE LEFT 3 years ago
    84. 84
      STOP TEASING 3 years ago
    85. 85
      HURT AGAIN 3 years ago
    86. 86
      ANGRIER 3 years ago
    87. 87
      WANNA CRY 3 years ago
    88. 88
      SO SURE 3 years ago
    89. 89
      DO NOT DESERVE HAPPINESS 3 years ago
    90. 90
      FEAR 3 years ago
    91. 91
      PEACE 3 years ago
    92. 92
      I AM TRAPPED 3 years ago
    93. 93
      PLEASURE 3 years ago
    94. 94
      NOT AGAIN 3 years ago
    95. 95
      I WILL PROTECT 3 years ago
    96. 96
      DO NOT WORRY 3 years ago
    97. 97
      HAPPY 3 years ago
    98. 98
      NEED TO SHIFT 3 years ago
    99. 99
      TIRED 3 years ago
    100. 100
      WE ARE LUCKY 3 years ago
    101. 101
      APOLOGIZE 3 years ago
    102. 102
      LET US GO 3 years ago
    103. 103
      SCARED AGAIN 3 years ago
    104. 104
      PROMISE 3 years ago
    105. 105
      RELAXED 3 years ago
    106. 106
      TEASING 3 years ago
    107. 107
      DO NOT WORRY 3 years ago
    108. 108
      ASKING FOR HELP 3 years ago
    109. 109
      I WILL HELP 3 years ago
    110. 110
      BE CAREFUL 3 years ago
    111. 111
      I AM ANGRY 3 years ago
    112. 112
      I WILL NOT LEAVE 3 years ago
    113. 113
      SHE IS NICE 3 years ago
    114. 114
      WALK 3 years ago
    115. 115
      FEELING GOOD 3 years ago
    116. 116
      HURT HER AGAIN 3 years ago
    117. 117
      JEALOUS 3 years ago
    118. 118
      NOT ALLOWED 3 years ago
    119. 119
      JAMES FOLLY 3 years ago
    120. 120
      WELCOME HOME 3 years ago
    121. 121
      HOLY SHIT 3 years ago
    122. 122
      I AM HERE 3 years ago
    123. 123
      RELAX 3 years ago
    124. 124
      lUCKY 3 years ago
    125. 125
      TEACH US 3 years ago
    126. 126
      RUINED 3 years ago
    127. 127
      NICE GUY 3 years ago
    128. 128
      SCARED 3 years ago
    129. 129
      ONLY OPTION 3 years ago
    130. 130
      WAITING 3 years ago
    131. 131
      I WILL ACCEPT 3 years ago
    132. 132
      I AM READY 3 years ago
    133. 133
      NEW CHAPTER 3 years ago
    134. 134
      CUTE 3 years ago
    135. 135
      PEACE 3 years ago
    136. 136
      ENJOY 3 years ago
    137. 137
      GIFTS 3 years ago
    138. 138
      SPEECHLESS 3 years ago
    139. 139
      UPSET 3 years ago
    140. 140
      NECKLACE 3 years ago
    141. 141
      MADE HER CRY 3 years ago
    142. 142
      HE WAS UPSET TOO 3 years ago
    143. 143
      HAPPY 3 years ago
    144. 144
      THE ONLY CHOICE 3 years ago
    145. 145
      HAPPY NEWS 3 years ago
    146. 146
      HIDING 3 years ago
    147. 147
      POOL 3 years ago
    148. 148
      LET US HAVE FUN 3 years ago