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This story is awesome so far, with great main and side characters. I love how everyone's connected in some way and come together like one big family. I like how it doesn't dwell on the drama. There's just enough to keep the plot moving.
author please update I want to know what happens next 🥺 i like your story very much it's interesting and more 😁😍
I want more to read It’s one on my favorite to read 😍😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘😘😘 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I was so lucky I read this for free. It was such a nice story and I am actually looking forward to its ending, though I am not too sure I am able to do so ... But overall I love this story so much! and I would really like to support this. Anyway, Thank you for this wonderful masterpiece, Master 🥰💜💗
Want more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]. . . . .................
yeeessss an update!! after patiently waiting for soo long.... this really made my day... i wonder when the parents will learn that he is pregnant.. cant wait!!
First of all thank you for creating this master piece!! I'm hoping that keiths friends will also find their mates and have their own story... or better yet you can make it into separate stories .. I hope you'll be able to continue working on it.. godbless and take care..
Autor por favor volto e atualizar, nos abençoe com mais capítulos estou ansiosa pelo restante da história por favor, já disse pro favor ?! Hahah 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🥰🥰
Dear author love your work!! I like the how the pacing and the progress of the story. I hope you'll continue to give us a good story. [img=recommend]
I really like it. The characters and plot. I just hope that will focus in mc and ml. Cz, when i distracted with another new character story, i usually lose interest to continue read the story. I'm sorry
This novel is very addictive to read. It is like you just want to read and read and read it. I completed this novel till now in around 6 to 7 hours. Hope it will be updated soon.☺️🤗
Hi thank you for giving us such a wonderful story❤️ I will be patiently wait for the updates .I just know that the waiting will be worth it😊
i had binged read this right before the latest chap was added such a good story and im looking forward to many thing like Alex running into his supposed family
This definitely a must read book it comes to life right ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ From the being im always eager for the next chapters the author is doing a wonderful job for there first time as a writer keep it Up
I love ❤️ this story please continue i check back every day for updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾🥰🥰🥰 great story
I love this book ive finished reading so far just waiting for the updates keep up the good 👍🏾 work 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 cant wait for the next chapters
Oh I wasn't even aware that there are more chapters to come. But I don't mind :-) I just hope everything goes wright with Bean and there will be a happy ending after the happy ending (or I just got that wrong *lol*) Anyway a nicely written story with not the typical Alpha-behavior. And the beginning side-story with Chad and Mattie could get very entertaining :-)
Thank you for this story. I enjoyed reading it. Although I'm not a native englisch speaker I thought the writing quality could have been better but I REALLY liked the storyline! Well done!
You can definitely see this wirter growing in each choater as she releases them. im ansolutely a huge fan of this and excited for the development!
Author, Thank you so much, you bring a wondeful ABO story to life. Is not rush, in the plot... have lovely characters. I love it, really recommend it.
Great book so far couldn't put it down. Has a good character development and the romance is top notch. The up dating could be more consistent but everyone has to adjust to scheduling. Always looking for more.🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩
I really really love this kind of omgaverse stories. I hope it will update constantly with a short period. thank you Arthur for writhing this story.💕💕💕💕💕. fated mate is the best . 👍💯
Awsome book Ddddu to chichi to go yovhkcyoctkxgixgi go hobo lncuocuocuoh ha xhkcgjxbxgjxgjxgixhidhiditdyidhodhidiydhoxyixyicyivyi vyivhochoctichocjochicuocojchovyivhoovmlvho hovyov
I love this story cause the ML are not a trash he is still responsible, the MC is also have a unique personality which make him stand out to me alot this novel also bring alot of roller coaster of a emotion there grammar is also really good overall I really like it can't wait for what this novel will bring in the future
I really love this story tho there are a lot of mispelled words and incomplete setences that make it hard to read (no hate tho) I love everything about it and you are a great writer
I really love your story .It is cute and fluffy. Except for some grammar mistakes here and there, it is incredible . Thank You for your hard work . Hope you update it .
This story is awesome so far, with great main and side characters. I love how everyone's connected in some way and come together like one big family. I like how it doesn't dwell on the drama. There's just enough to keep the plot moving.
author please update I want to know what happens next 🥺 i like your story very much it's interesting and more 😁😍
I want more to read It’s one on my favorite to read 😍😍😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘😘😘 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I was so lucky I read this for free. It was such a nice story and I am actually looking forward to its ending, though I am not too sure I am able to do so ... But overall I love this story so much! and I would really like to support this. Anyway, Thank you for this wonderful masterpiece, Master 🥰💜💗
Want more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]. . . . .................
yeeessss an update!! after patiently waiting for soo long.... this really made my day... i wonder when the parents will learn that he is pregnant.. cant wait!!
First of all thank you for creating this master piece!! I'm hoping that keiths friends will also find their mates and have their own story... or better yet you can make it into separate stories .. I hope you'll be able to continue working on it.. godbless and take care..
Autor por favor volto e atualizar, nos abençoe com mais capítulos estou ansiosa pelo restante da história por favor, já disse pro favor ?! Hahah 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🥰🥰
Dear author love your work!! I like the how the pacing and the progress of the story. I hope you'll continue to give us a good story. [img=recommend]
I really like it. The characters and plot. I just hope that will focus in mc and ml. Cz, when i distracted with another new character story, i usually lose interest to continue read the story. I'm sorry
This novel is very addictive to read. It is like you just want to read and read and read it. I completed this novel till now in around 6 to 7 hours. Hope it will be updated soon.☺️🤗
Hi thank you for giving us such a wonderful story❤️ I will be patiently wait for the updates .I just know that the waiting will be worth it😊
i had binged read this right before the latest chap was added such a good story and im looking forward to many thing like Alex running into his supposed family
This definitely a must read book it comes to life right ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ From the being im always eager for the next chapters the author is doing a wonderful job for there first time as a writer keep it Up
I love ❤️ this story please continue i check back every day for updates ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾🥰🥰🥰 great story
I love this book ive finished reading so far just waiting for the updates keep up the good 👍🏾 work 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 cant wait for the next chapters
Oh I wasn't even aware that there are more chapters to come. But I don't mind :-) I just hope everything goes wright with Bean and there will be a happy ending after the happy ending (or I just got that wrong *lol*) Anyway a nicely written story with not the typical Alpha-behavior. And the beginning side-story with Chad and Mattie could get very entertaining :-)
Thank you for this story. I enjoyed reading it. Although I'm not a native englisch speaker I thought the writing quality could have been better but I REALLY liked the storyline! Well done!
You can definitely see this wirter growing in each choater as she releases them. im ansolutely a huge fan of this and excited for the development!
Author, Thank you so much, you bring a wondeful ABO story to life. Is not rush, in the plot... have lovely characters. I love it, really recommend it.
Great book so far couldn't put it down. Has a good character development and the romance is top notch. The up dating could be more consistent but everyone has to adjust to scheduling. Always looking for more.🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩
I really really love this kind of omgaverse stories. I hope it will update constantly with a short period. thank you Arthur for writhing this story.💕💕💕💕💕. fated mate is the best . 👍💯
Awsome book Ddddu to chichi to go yovhkcyoctkxgixgi go hobo lncuocuocuoh ha xhkcgjxbxgjxgjxgixhidhiditdyidhodhidiydhoxyixyicyivyi vyivhochoctichocjochicuocojchovyivhoovmlvho hovyov
I love this story cause the ML are not a trash he is still responsible, the MC is also have a unique personality which make him stand out to me alot this novel also bring alot of roller coaster of a emotion there grammar is also really good overall I really like it can't wait for what this novel will bring in the future
I really love this story tho there are a lot of mispelled words and incomplete setences that make it hard to read (no hate tho) I love everything about it and you are a great writer
I really love your story .It is cute and fluffy. Except for some grammar mistakes here and there, it is incredible . Thank You for your hard work . Hope you update it .
Is this story finished or did the author leave it undone?