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In my opinion it would have been better if he was older than the main cast since it doesn't make much sense for him to be called father at his age but still pretty good first chapter
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I am not perfect nor consistent, but I try my best I hope to inspire other to hopefully make a similar fic. I also hope to update a couple of my other fics that I've been holding off on due to a writer's block so cross your fingers. But for now REJOICE A KOTOMINE KIREI DXD CROSSOVER HAS BEEN MADE.
LV 4 ![Badge]()
In my opinion it would have been better if he was older than the main cast since it doesn't make much sense for him to be called father at his age but still pretty good first chapter
I am not perfect nor consistent, but I try my best I hope to inspire other to hopefully make a similar fic. I also hope to update a couple of my other fics that I've been holding off on due to a writer's block so cross your fingers. But for now REJOICE A KOTOMINE KIREI DXD CROSSOVER HAS BEEN MADE.