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Coming from a reader who has finished this book, you will definitely enjoy reading it. The characters are amazing and each have their own breath of life. If you get highly attached to characters like me, then it's even better, and you'll be trembling from excitement, anger or anticipation while reading in the main turning point of the story. Enjoy the book, and you won't be disappointed!
Truly an amazing work one of my favorite books of all time as someone who likes the more complicated concepts shown off in this novel the story was amazing up until the end to anyone who is going to read this I would realistically advise not reading the ending and let it come to your own imagination every character in this story including the less important ones feel real and not a piece of 2d cardboard thrown around to boost the mc or block his path his path insurances and interesting and for those that make it to the mid 200s iirc something BIG happens don’t drop the novel I assure you the story picks up and becomes interesting very fast
Grammar and sentence structure is absolutely attrocious. So many run on sentences, capitalizing words after commas, etc. It is clear this person doesnt know how to speak english.
author is a kid..this book is like a wish fulfilment book...no base pure op mc just go over it literally mc becomes OOOOOPPPP without doing anything...he randomly creates spells ... amateur writing...read some good novels..dropped after ch30
It was a good read with a unique progression system.The only dislike I would have is how it ended.
Hellow author can u tell me why mike had advanced sss ranked concept? like for real? I don't understand that chapter. like there is too much going on, like how he get to origin plane?
He's not my ideal character but it's a good Novel overall expect him being boss[img=disgusted] around and a little stupid
Amazing book to read with an amazing storyline and character development. I truly enjoyed reading this book and can’t wait to read the next book. Thank you Author for the amazing book.
The constant seperation of the MC˙s harem seams stupid to me, there are allot of other options to make the MC even more serious.
I do not appreciate the story where lovers divided as well as changing the person memories... Also cultivation realms, worlds, skills are completely messed.... Everything should be simpler to understand and clear to see, In addition there is no need to mention the names of all people MP is meeting, and their pet names and skill names and their progress. There is too much information. It feels like i learning the theory of light in Univercity.... Also unlogical...
This is one of the best. If the MC were evil it'd be perfect! The power system is wonderfully complex, as far as I've seen. The world is interesting and the characters real enough. I gave updating stability 5 stars by default, cause, well, I started reading recently. Again, fingers crossed for an evil MC
Story is bad. Wish I could burn it as the author suggested. This is the tale of a character and his friends. The 'mc' is not unique, his powers are common place, he is not a genius, babysit non stop, travels with a set of people who power up easily like the 'mc'. MC actively makes sure they power up at the same speed as him. Wish I had read reviews before reading 100 plus chapters to come to this realisation. tyrant novel is much better but hopefully it doesn't turn out like this novel in this aspect of babysitting, travelling with non harem members for a long period of time and actively boosting their strength. He's not their master, being a friend in these novels should have its limits which hopefully you understand since with Tyrant you have managed to stay within.
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one of the best novel I have read and yes the story get better and better as time passes and I have read till chapter 500 now and yea the best best part for me is the emotional satisfaction of his strong will and his powers he gets through it
The novel is certainly very good, but i shall address a few points that made me sad about this novel. IT WILL CONTAIN HEAVY SPOILERS, BUT IMO NECESSARY SO THAT THOSE WHO WANT TO READ DO NOT GET DISAPPOINTED BEFORE IT WAS TOO LATE 1st: The protagonist loses his powers a few times throughout the story. 2nd: around chapter 250 of the story, literally everyone forgot about the protagonist due to a few reasons that are spoilers, but because everyone forgot about him, it took him a long time to reunite with them, which was a waste of time because the MC's family got captured soon after by a mighty being to hasten the protagonist's rise to the peak (even forged fake memories of the mighty being killing all his family and friends). 3rd: This novel is a typical ascend through the realms to see a higher peak, which was not even achiavable in the first place since the peak was false. 4th: The WHOLE story and realms, the family of the protagonist, literally EVERYONE was an experiment of a true Mighty Being in the probable true world, which we dont get to see because the novel ended when we discovered that basically everything was false, even the MC's powers, which he lost again... (the only solace is that even if everyone was created by the imagination of a mighty being, the being could transform 7 of the protagonist lovers and friends into 'real' existences, 6 spots went to the Mc's lovers, which there was 1 spot left, which we dont know to who it went, but in my headcannon it went to Mimi). 5th: The ending as i stated is really disappointing, there was honestly no need for such an ending, it would have been more wholesome and better if their world was not a byproduct of someones energy and imagination. It would have been not problem for the Mc to ascend to a new world to start a new journey from scratch with his family and friends, but it was such a let down to say that the entire story was inside a world where everything was simply the imagination of someone. that was all, i hope that someone read this before reading this novel that although is nice, knowing that everything was false made me sad, which i did not like one bit.
I really love the story so far, an planning on finishing it, this book is a 5star read the only reason I haven't given it 5 stars is all the author notes there taking me out of the story
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Again and again Athan losses his powers, also after around 500 chapters, story started rushing. many important points were missed and many things were simply skipped. not to mention, the ending feels like a cliffhanger more than an ending. honestly before around 500 chapters, it was lit, but afterwards it just did a nosedive in the mariana trench
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It was pretty good at first for majority of the time but around chapter 400-finish it became very rushed like the author was tired of writing it. All loose ends were mostly cleared albeit being rushed but all in all it was a pretty decent novel
Terrible, I feel sorry for those who spend their stones on this novel... The novel started at 4/5, then a marathon began, the story was super rushed, became 2.5/5, and the end became -100/5.
It is a fantastic read, but you just have to keep reading to enjoy it because there are some parts that will upset you or not sit right with you. However, the issues are uniquely settled. So, that is why you have to just keep reading to see the bigger picture and to see that is epic tale is truly epic and well worth while.
Although I like the overall concept of the story, the female leads of this novel have finally forced me to drop it. I don't want to post a spoiler about it here, but their behavior and the MCs reaction to it just doesn't make sense at all.
I started reading it this week and I already am at the current chapter of 317. The characters are done really well espcially his wives. i was really surpised how attached i became to his wives and friends as the point wheree the story currently is actually affecting my heart and when i think about what might happen to then it hurts my heart a lot and I dont like it but i do like it and its wierd. I posted a question in the recent chapters on 317 and if the author responds to my reply of the comment and it calms my heart then i will keep reading and buy the privialged every month as i really Enjoy the story but if the answer does not come i will probably have to stop reading until the chapters get past 450 or until the point that i mentioned in my comment to the author i wOnt say it because no spoilers from me. I really dont want to stop reading but my heart is not very strong and i cant handle certain emotions for my healths sake. Great job on the story Mr author ❤️
Coming from a reader who has finished this book, you will definitely enjoy reading it. The characters are amazing and each have their own breath of life. If you get highly attached to characters like me, then it's even better, and you'll be trembling from excitement, anger or anticipation while reading in the main turning point of the story. Enjoy the book, and you won't be disappointed!
Truly an amazing work one of my favorite books of all time as someone who likes the more complicated concepts shown off in this novel the story was amazing up until the end to anyone who is going to read this I would realistically advise not reading the ending and let it come to your own imagination every character in this story including the less important ones feel real and not a piece of 2d cardboard thrown around to boost the mc or block his path his path insurances and interesting and for those that make it to the mid 200s iirc something BIG happens don’t drop the novel I assure you the story picks up and becomes interesting very fast
Grammar and sentence structure is absolutely attrocious. So many run on sentences, capitalizing words after commas, etc. It is clear this person doesnt know how to speak english.
author is a kid..this book is like a wish fulfilment book...no base pure op mc just go over it literally mc becomes OOOOOPPPP without doing anything...he randomly creates spells ... amateur writing...read some good novels..dropped after ch30
It was a good read with a unique progression system.The only dislike I would have is how it ended.
Hellow author can u tell me why mike had advanced sss ranked concept? like for real? I don't understand that chapter. like there is too much going on, like how he get to origin plane?
He's not my ideal character but it's a good Novel overall expect him being boss[img=disgusted] around and a little stupid
Amazing book to read with an amazing storyline and character development. I truly enjoyed reading this book and can’t wait to read the next book. Thank you Author for the amazing book.
The constant seperation of the MC˙s harem seams stupid to me, there are allot of other options to make the MC even more serious.
I do not appreciate the story where lovers divided as well as changing the person memories... Also cultivation realms, worlds, skills are completely messed.... Everything should be simpler to understand and clear to see, In addition there is no need to mention the names of all people MP is meeting, and their pet names and skill names and their progress. There is too much information. It feels like i learning the theory of light in Univercity.... Also unlogical...
This is one of the best. If the MC were evil it'd be perfect! The power system is wonderfully complex, as far as I've seen. The world is interesting and the characters real enough. I gave updating stability 5 stars by default, cause, well, I started reading recently. Again, fingers crossed for an evil MC
Story is bad. Wish I could burn it as the author suggested. This is the tale of a character and his friends. The 'mc' is not unique, his powers are common place, he is not a genius, babysit non stop, travels with a set of people who power up easily like the 'mc'. MC actively makes sure they power up at the same speed as him. Wish I had read reviews before reading 100 plus chapters to come to this realisation. tyrant novel is much better but hopefully it doesn't turn out like this novel in this aspect of babysitting, travelling with non harem members for a long period of time and actively boosting their strength. He's not their master, being a friend in these novels should have its limits which hopefully you understand since with Tyrant you have managed to stay within.
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one of the best novel I have read and yes the story get better and better as time passes and I have read till chapter 500 now and yea the best best part for me is the emotional satisfaction of his strong will and his powers he gets through it
The novel is certainly very good, but i shall address a few points that made me sad about this novel. IT WILL CONTAIN HEAVY SPOILERS, BUT IMO NECESSARY SO THAT THOSE WHO WANT TO READ DO NOT GET DISAPPOINTED BEFORE IT WAS TOO LATE 1st: The protagonist loses his powers a few times throughout the story. 2nd: around chapter 250 of the story, literally everyone forgot about the protagonist due to a few reasons that are spoilers, but because everyone forgot about him, it took him a long time to reunite with them, which was a waste of time because the MC's family got captured soon after by a mighty being to hasten the protagonist's rise to the peak (even forged fake memories of the mighty being killing all his family and friends). 3rd: This novel is a typical ascend through the realms to see a higher peak, which was not even achiavable in the first place since the peak was false. 4th: The WHOLE story and realms, the family of the protagonist, literally EVERYONE was an experiment of a true Mighty Being in the probable true world, which we dont get to see because the novel ended when we discovered that basically everything was false, even the MC's powers, which he lost again... (the only solace is that even if everyone was created by the imagination of a mighty being, the being could transform 7 of the protagonist lovers and friends into 'real' existences, 6 spots went to the Mc's lovers, which there was 1 spot left, which we dont know to who it went, but in my headcannon it went to Mimi). 5th: The ending as i stated is really disappointing, there was honestly no need for such an ending, it would have been more wholesome and better if their world was not a byproduct of someones energy and imagination. It would have been not problem for the Mc to ascend to a new world to start a new journey from scratch with his family and friends, but it was such a let down to say that the entire story was inside a world where everything was simply the imagination of someone. that was all, i hope that someone read this before reading this novel that although is nice, knowing that everything was false made me sad, which i did not like one bit.
I really love the story so far, an planning on finishing it, this book is a 5star read the only reason I haven't given it 5 stars is all the author notes there taking me out of the story
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Again and again Athan losses his powers, also after around 500 chapters, story started rushing. many important points were missed and many things were simply skipped. not to mention, the ending feels like a cliffhanger more than an ending. honestly before around 500 chapters, it was lit, but afterwards it just did a nosedive in the mariana trench
揭示劇透 It was pretty good at first for majority of the time but around chapter 400-finish it became very rushed like the author was tired of writing it. All loose ends were mostly cleared albeit being rushed but all in all it was a pretty decent novel
Terrible, I feel sorry for those who spend their stones on this novel... The novel started at 4/5, then a marathon began, the story was super rushed, became 2.5/5, and the end became -100/5.
It is a fantastic read, but you just have to keep reading to enjoy it because there are some parts that will upset you or not sit right with you. However, the issues are uniquely settled. So, that is why you have to just keep reading to see the bigger picture and to see that is epic tale is truly epic and well worth while.
Although I like the overall concept of the story, the female leads of this novel have finally forced me to drop it. I don't want to post a spoiler about it here, but their behavior and the MCs reaction to it just doesn't make sense at all.
I started reading it this week and I already am at the current chapter of 317. The characters are done really well espcially his wives. i was really surpised how attached i became to his wives and friends as the point wheree the story currently is actually affecting my heart and when i think about what might happen to then it hurts my heart a lot and I dont like it but i do like it and its wierd. I posted a question in the recent chapters on 317 and if the author responds to my reply of the comment and it calms my heart then i will keep reading and buy the privialged every month as i really Enjoy the story but if the answer does not come i will probably have to stop reading until the chapters get past 450 or until the point that i mentioned in my comment to the author i wOnt say it because no spoilers from me. I really dont want to stop reading but my heart is not very strong and i cant handle certain emotions for my healths sake. Great job on the story Mr author ❤️