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Can people stop puting random reviews. I want actual reviews that help new readers to my novel decide if they want to read. If you havnt read but put a review i will delete. if you put good or random letters i will delete. I want why you like it and what you dislike and where it can be improved. PLEASE KEEP CONSTRUCTIVE
The characters are also well done and fleshed out and the action scenes are also excellent.The kingdom building is pushed which makes the story excellent. The grammar is also well done, just a few errors here and there but they hardly affect the story. As I mention in my reviews, there are stories with horrible grammatical errors that are more popular than this hidden gem and make no mistake, this is a hidden gem.
An amazing story, I can't help but applaud the author. It never seemed cluttered or boring it is exciting from start to finish which is a testament not only to how good the author is at writing and how much effort he put into making this story fascinating.
Basically the generic cultivation novel with a huge weird harem. But mc is taking his time and just enjoying his life so far, no useless tension or drama in the family, or a new degenerate young master to slap every chapter. It says OP in tags, but it's more of a gradual op and an organizational kind of op, not just like author said, a lone wolf op, which is kinda okay, has it's pros and cons. **: written after reading chp 21.
Really Good Novel, Loved it Writing Quality - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Character Design - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 World Background - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I will give 5 for the writing quality and no shit in this novel like beta MC and other stuff.The story has a great start, good plot and interesting characters. I like kingdom building and cultivation novels, the story has good Phase. keep it up author 👍
I really Like the plot and but can you make him a little bit more like issei in wish of the dragons character just a tiny bit then it would be perfect but development first (aloof character)
Hurm, 3.6 star from me. I'm going for lower, but it may make you feel depressed... My opinion is nearly the same as Elder, the one who review before me... The story actually bordering average and boring at start, but after a few chapter it get trash fast... I get it, you want to fvck as much as you want, get thousand harem member as fast as you can, but this is way too.... Hurm, how to say it without hurting you feeling?... A bit too.. Virgin-ish?...
It was good from start at another world to the chapter where appeared 5 no name maid's in his bed. After that there slave seal that can edit memory and kill with a thought and it become trash story really fast. Can read but story lose all importance.
I gave my story what i would give others. Might lack a little on development due to being a bit slow at beginning but it doesnt feel that slow. Is people are going to review, I would like constructive ones. Not random letters or words. i want someone to click on this novel and see constructive points of the good and bads not a mis match of bots for ex.
Can people stop puting random reviews. I want actual reviews that help new readers to my novel decide if they want to read. If you havnt read but put a review i will delete. if you put good or random letters i will delete. I want why you like it and what you dislike and where it can be improved. PLEASE KEEP CONSTRUCTIVE
The characters are also well done and fleshed out and the action scenes are also excellent.The kingdom building is pushed which makes the story excellent. The grammar is also well done, just a few errors here and there but they hardly affect the story. As I mention in my reviews, there are stories with horrible grammatical errors that are more popular than this hidden gem and make no mistake, this is a hidden gem.
An amazing story, I can't help but applaud the author. It never seemed cluttered or boring it is exciting from start to finish which is a testament not only to how good the author is at writing and how much effort he put into making this story fascinating.
Basically the generic cultivation novel with a huge weird harem. But mc is taking his time and just enjoying his life so far, no useless tension or drama in the family, or a new degenerate young master to slap every chapter. It says OP in tags, but it's more of a gradual op and an organizational kind of op, not just like author said, a lone wolf op, which is kinda okay, has it's pros and cons. **: written after reading chp 21.
Really Good Novel, Loved it Writing Quality - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Character Design - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 World Background - 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I will give 5 for the writing quality and no shit in this novel like beta MC and other stuff.The story has a great start, good plot and interesting characters. I like kingdom building and cultivation novels, the story has good Phase. keep it up author 👍
I really Like the plot and but can you make him a little bit more like issei in wish of the dragons character just a tiny bit then it would be perfect but development first (aloof character)
Hurm, 3.6 star from me. I'm going for lower, but it may make you feel depressed... My opinion is nearly the same as Elder, the one who review before me... The story actually bordering average and boring at start, but after a few chapter it get trash fast... I get it, you want to fvck as much as you want, get thousand harem member as fast as you can, but this is way too.... Hurm, how to say it without hurting you feeling?... A bit too.. Virgin-ish?...
It was good from start at another world to the chapter where appeared 5 no name maid's in his bed. After that there slave seal that can edit memory and kill with a thought and it become trash story really fast. Can read but story lose all importance.
I gave my story what i would give others. Might lack a little on development due to being a bit slow at beginning but it doesnt feel that slow. Is people are going to review, I would like constructive ones. Not random letters or words. i want someone to click on this novel and see constructive points of the good and bads not a mis match of bots for ex.