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i like the story very much and the atmosphere around MC’s friends and her. i am sad about a certain characters . He was a good big brother for mc
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This novel has bad grammar, I don't feel invested in the world, the MC, despite it being in their state that they are unlucky af becomes a literal demigod while still being a baby.
bad start and bad reasoning the mc looks like a fr*king idiot and out of nowhere knowledge like how did she find out that?
Requires downloading app but even after downloading still can’t read so it’s stuck as locked from chapter 45 on. Don’t waste your time. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140.
I think this is a great story and I really want to read more! Some spelling errors in the chapters but it doesn’t take away from the meaning so overall well written. Some things are very detailed and others are left open to add mystery and drive a hunger for reading the next chapters. I hope the author writes more chapters soon, such a gem of a novel.
liked it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...no loved it.
More more more more more more more more more more more more😡😤 Author give us more. I loved this book and the mc. She is so flipping cute and funny. And I love Sameal. I was never bored. Also side note- author in ch 98 it says she’s still 9 even though it says that 5 years have passed. She is 14 right?!?
No ofense but i dont realy want to read it and it keeps geting my rekomed for you ..........................................................
Pretty exciting in the beginning but towards chapter 5 and onward very slow development main character has a very very low luck stat and that just puts her in suicidal situations which doesn't do anything for her cuz human beings need a level of stability and then challenge the more stable they're footing is metaphorically speaking the higher the challenge rating they can get that's why nobody ever challenges a level 40 boss when you're still level five you'll get insane loot for it but you only have one life so it's the equivalent of expecting the play bloodborne or demon souls like game as if you're playing an RPG which means your character will die infinitely you'll get so frustrated that you'll just bang your controller against something and break it you'll give up just sit there and become one of the background characters because that character Ned let's call him Ned Ned does not have any stable footing and he'll only be as stable as a level 1 character and he's fighting level 80 characters now it's only thanks to bloodborne and demon souls mechanics and how he continuously keeps on trying over and over and over and over and over that even allows you to figure out anything now if you apply superhuman abilities on top of that you're going to have to have more than repeat over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over there's a level or amount of repetition you could do before you get frustrated and want to bang your head against the wall and say that this is a bad job you have to think about that balance only reason why this scientist lady is even doing the things she's doing it's cuz she's so used to her bad luck that she figured out a way to barely survive like a cockroach while the God that sent her into that reality is wanting her to thrive what it should have done was look at her lucky levels and go okay I'm going to argument that as well because obviously her luck level is so low even her decision-making flipping processing is wrong even in decision making receive a eureka moment you need some level of luck at least neutral currently this character this female scientist has extremely low luck I mean if there's a buoyancy level above water where it's zero below will offer water it's in the negatives she's at the bottom of Marietta trench let's just say that.
i like it very much, silver blood relly good o think the author need to update more hahahah im italian[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Starts badly, continues with random plot stuff without sense and up to what I've read (chapter 62) it doesn't get better. ....
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I love this story. It's a very good story for people who like calm protagonist. I think it's one of my favorite library novel. Golden ticket for you!
Morana became the small baby in new world...being daugter of prestigious family, who was kidnaped by crazy scoentist. Although Morana looks like cute baby (child) she has terrying skills and stupid system ^^ (this novel shows clearly who is boss and servant) After 9 years in laboratory with scientist she escaped a dominated the realm
I'm really enjoying the novel. I love the characters, background, story development, and progression. the only thing that I don't like is that they aren't uploading that consistently or that much.
First of all, I quite like this story, it's enjoyable. But I do think it has problems that take off reading quality... and some shenanigans are rly generic. I was writing almost an essay here, but to sum it up; MC is a Mary Sue... but it's kinda like a step further cause she always have the advantage, some even badly explained. Even bad things that happen to her is to benefit her, like being so unlucky that it ony affect others, getting blind to get 2 new ways to see stuff, meeting a strong enemy to not be rly an enemy... I dont feel there's a challenge for her, there's no apparent struggle, stuff badly explained just exist so she can flex, even being contradictory. So, the plot seems to be interesting and going somewhere? There's the curiosity about the mystery of the characters, but the journey there seems kinda lacking.
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Just added this to my library and read the first chapter! The synopsis attract me and the book cover, dont even mention it! Its very attractive, will continue to read till the end 🤧
I wanna read moreeeeeeeee.!!!!! please update it🥺🥺... I am hooked by this novel..give me moreeeeeeeee.👉👈🥺. I love the characters and their stories. please update ittt......!!!!
Понравилась новелла, но половина платные главы.Я типо пришёл читать, а не бомжом стать.Гг своим характером нравится(Самуэль тоже топчик).Мне становится интересно, а когда Морана раскажет Самуэлю что она это-она?
It's goodㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Writing quality (with the exception of grammatical errors) is very good which is why it's 4/5. Updating is stable but it's not as good as others' stability which I am used to. World background is complete but not the kind that would make you imagine of another "real" world. If I'm going to make a comparison, I'd say that so far, it's like a mixture of hunger games, it's not easy to be a man (I'm not sure about the title), and others. I'm usually lazy so whatever.
I love how the story progresses and the MC is honestly amazing she is deeply affected by what happens to her all the while acting as if it meant nothing. I can't wait till the point she starts regaining all her emotions so I can see what she really feels about the experiments. The only major problem I have with this book is I never know when it will be updated I honestly want to see the end of this story but updates are inconsistent and all I can do is hope that the Arthur doesn't just stop updating one day.
Really good story. Love the characters and world building. The Maincharacter is (in my opinion) very unique. Please keep the good work up. A lot of fun to read.
J'adore cette série le seul probkeme est le rythme des chapitre sinon conteur comme sa 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I never understood if in the end she took revenge from the guy who tortured her for 8 years or if he would take revenge at some point .....................
Nice novel .................................................................................... Nice novel Nice novel Nice novel Nice novel
So far at chap 60, this is an amazing story that would fit right into your tastes if you enjoyed nanomancer or Apotheosis of a demon. I love how unlike Nanomancer, the plot here is not dRagged on and each chapter is very interesting-you will never skip a chapter to save time. Although this Is about leveling up, we can feel the how well the Story is developed due to the lurking plot underneath the carpet. Very excited for moarrrrrrr QwQ and cant wait for the other books in the trilogy to get more chapters.
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reading this book makes me feel like I was watching anime, and I can't help but wish there is an anime version it is absolutely perfect, at least from the few chapters I have read
i like the story very much and the atmosphere around MC’s friends and her. i am sad about a certain characters . He was a good big brother for mc
揭示劇透 This novel has bad grammar, I don't feel invested in the world, the MC, despite it being in their state that they are unlucky af becomes a literal demigod while still being a baby.
bad start and bad reasoning the mc looks like a fr*king idiot and out of nowhere knowledge like how did she find out that?
Requires downloading app but even after downloading still can’t read so it’s stuck as locked from chapter 45 on. Don’t waste your time. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140. Review can’t be less than 140.
I think this is a great story and I really want to read more! Some spelling errors in the chapters but it doesn’t take away from the meaning so overall well written. Some things are very detailed and others are left open to add mystery and drive a hunger for reading the next chapters. I hope the author writes more chapters soon, such a gem of a novel.
liked it👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...no loved it.
More more more more more more more more more more more more😡😤 Author give us more. I loved this book and the mc. She is so flipping cute and funny. And I love Sameal. I was never bored. Also side note- author in ch 98 it says she’s still 9 even though it says that 5 years have passed. She is 14 right?!?
No ofense but i dont realy want to read it and it keeps geting my rekomed for you ..........................................................
Pretty exciting in the beginning but towards chapter 5 and onward very slow development main character has a very very low luck stat and that just puts her in suicidal situations which doesn't do anything for her cuz human beings need a level of stability and then challenge the more stable they're footing is metaphorically speaking the higher the challenge rating they can get that's why nobody ever challenges a level 40 boss when you're still level five you'll get insane loot for it but you only have one life so it's the equivalent of expecting the play bloodborne or demon souls like game as if you're playing an RPG which means your character will die infinitely you'll get so frustrated that you'll just bang your controller against something and break it you'll give up just sit there and become one of the background characters because that character Ned let's call him Ned Ned does not have any stable footing and he'll only be as stable as a level 1 character and he's fighting level 80 characters now it's only thanks to bloodborne and demon souls mechanics and how he continuously keeps on trying over and over and over and over and over that even allows you to figure out anything now if you apply superhuman abilities on top of that you're going to have to have more than repeat over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over there's a level or amount of repetition you could do before you get frustrated and want to bang your head against the wall and say that this is a bad job you have to think about that balance only reason why this scientist lady is even doing the things she's doing it's cuz she's so used to her bad luck that she figured out a way to barely survive like a cockroach while the God that sent her into that reality is wanting her to thrive what it should have done was look at her lucky levels and go okay I'm going to argument that as well because obviously her luck level is so low even her decision-making flipping processing is wrong even in decision making receive a eureka moment you need some level of luck at least neutral currently this character this female scientist has extremely low luck I mean if there's a buoyancy level above water where it's zero below will offer water it's in the negatives she's at the bottom of Marietta trench let's just say that.
i like it very much, silver blood relly good o think the author need to update more hahahah im italian[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Starts badly, continues with random plot stuff without sense and up to what I've read (chapter 62) it doesn't get better. ....
揭示劇透 I love this story. It's a very good story for people who like calm protagonist. I think it's one of my favorite library novel. Golden ticket for you!
Morana became the small baby in new world...being daugter of prestigious family, who was kidnaped by crazy scoentist. Although Morana looks like cute baby (child) she has terrying skills and stupid system ^^ (this novel shows clearly who is boss and servant) After 9 years in laboratory with scientist she escaped a dominated the realm
I'm really enjoying the novel. I love the characters, background, story development, and progression. the only thing that I don't like is that they aren't uploading that consistently or that much.
First of all, I quite like this story, it's enjoyable. But I do think it has problems that take off reading quality... and some shenanigans are rly generic. I was writing almost an essay here, but to sum it up; MC is a Mary Sue... but it's kinda like a step further cause she always have the advantage, some even badly explained. Even bad things that happen to her is to benefit her, like being so unlucky that it ony affect others, getting blind to get 2 new ways to see stuff, meeting a strong enemy to not be rly an enemy... I dont feel there's a challenge for her, there's no apparent struggle, stuff badly explained just exist so she can flex, even being contradictory. So, the plot seems to be interesting and going somewhere? There's the curiosity about the mystery of the characters, but the journey there seems kinda lacking.
揭示劇透 Just added this to my library and read the first chapter! The synopsis attract me and the book cover, dont even mention it! Its very attractive, will continue to read till the end 🤧
I wanna read moreeeeeeeee.!!!!! please update it🥺🥺... I am hooked by this novel..give me moreeeeeeeee.👉👈🥺. I love the characters and their stories. please update ittt......!!!!
Понравилась новелла, но половина платные главы.Я типо пришёл читать, а не бомжом стать.Гг своим характером нравится(Самуэль тоже топчик).Мне становится интересно, а когда Морана раскажет Самуэлю что она это-она?
It's goodㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Writing quality (with the exception of grammatical errors) is very good which is why it's 4/5. Updating is stable but it's not as good as others' stability which I am used to. World background is complete but not the kind that would make you imagine of another "real" world. If I'm going to make a comparison, I'd say that so far, it's like a mixture of hunger games, it's not easy to be a man (I'm not sure about the title), and others. I'm usually lazy so whatever.
I love how the story progresses and the MC is honestly amazing she is deeply affected by what happens to her all the while acting as if it meant nothing. I can't wait till the point she starts regaining all her emotions so I can see what she really feels about the experiments. The only major problem I have with this book is I never know when it will be updated I honestly want to see the end of this story but updates are inconsistent and all I can do is hope that the Arthur doesn't just stop updating one day.
Really good story. Love the characters and world building. The Maincharacter is (in my opinion) very unique. Please keep the good work up. A lot of fun to read.
J'adore cette série le seul probkeme est le rythme des chapitre sinon conteur comme sa 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I never understood if in the end she took revenge from the guy who tortured her for 8 years or if he would take revenge at some point .....................
Nice novel .................................................................................... Nice novel Nice novel Nice novel Nice novel
So far at chap 60, this is an amazing story that would fit right into your tastes if you enjoyed nanomancer or Apotheosis of a demon. I love how unlike Nanomancer, the plot here is not dRagged on and each chapter is very interesting-you will never skip a chapter to save time. Although this Is about leveling up, we can feel the how well the Story is developed due to the lurking plot underneath the carpet. Very excited for moarrrrrrr QwQ and cant wait for the other books in the trilogy to get more chapters.
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reading this book makes me feel like I was watching anime, and I can't help but wish there is an anime version it is absolutely perfect, at least from the few chapters I have read