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Bok gibi okumayın. Udusisidjdidjrkkrdidififkkdkdkdkdkdkdkxkxkfkfkfkdkjdkxkxjxkxjxjdkdjdkfjfkfkfkkdkdkdkdjdjfjdjfkdkkffkdididikfkdksoz7cjfi idjxixkjdixjrjdudjisududusisisisjdjdjej
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This story could’ve been a bit better if the author just did the smallest amount of research. I am already on chapter 4 and I see two mistakes the author would not of made if he was prepared. I might not even read further because I feel there are more to come. I hope someone found this info helpful.
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kante😈 no😱 para de😨 corre😰 el balon😠 de🤑 oro😛 lo merece😎el y con mount🥵 para😱 asistir🤡 el primer gol de havertz 🥶 en la Champions league⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
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i love the comedy. i love the fighting scene. i love the suspense. i love the non existent love development. i love the plot. i love the comedy. i love the fighting scene. i love the suspense. i love the non existent love development. i love the plot.
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The Fact that the MC has his own unique personality is Great. The only thing that made me rate this as 4-stars is the fact that there might be too many OC's as his partners instead of the Fairy Tail cast. Although it is great this is just my opinion so all those angry readers out there just don't curse me for saying my opinion. Still, this is a great read that I would recommend to others.
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Interesante historia y me gusta mucho que el protagonista vea que no puede volverse arrogante pensando que al obtener una habilidad de un anime que conocía será todo poderoso
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A well written story. I like that the MC uses an somewhat original magic. My biggest problems with the story are the lack of direction and the main characters. I ended up dropping the story 30 or so chapters in because it didnt feel like it was going anywhere. It has a very slice of life feel. No overarching story or goal to push the story forward. The main character was fun in the beginning, reading a MC that isn't the copy and pasted edgy webnovel MC was fun. But he's started to become grating after a while. He feels like a shounen main character without any of the depth. It's not a bad read and well written. I can see myself returning when there are more chapters to see if the MC actually grows ad a character/ there is an actually story.
One of the best Fairy Tail Fanfictions. Great Story telling, Great characters with new Powers. Love it so far and hope that the Author steps up the updates :)
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(Written with the translator’s help) Fanfic is very good, so far it has not shown anything really 'bad' or 'annoying' to deal with, it is pleasant to read and is not filled with unnecessary information. But I’m leaving Fanfic, I don’t do well with OC’s or an almost 100% Original story. I have a bad memory and this absurd amount of original characters are severely affecting me. Still, congratulations on a great job.
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its been a while since i enjoyed reading a ff .. i really like it a lot 5 from me in every thing and all i can say to the author is thank you really for writing and sharing it with us
It is really well written. The dialoge is smooth, and nothing feel especially forced. The mc's goofy personality fits in perfectly. It can be a bit anoying from time to time, but he feels like he truly does belong to the world he is inn. So far the power scaling feels good. no god level baby. Looking forward to how he will grow
it's a good start, mc doesn't just get a power that makes him op very fast would like to see him work hard and develop new ways to use his powers
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The shameless author here ✌🏻 I'm just writing this review to clarify what you sign up for by reading this fanfic. 1. MC is not clever and cool at all! To give you an image it's a combination of Meliodas and Luffy. 2. The story will start before Fairy Tail canon. 3. I plan on ****ing up canon so don't cry 😭 That's all for now, hope you like it and will get a laugh out of it, see ya later 👋🏻
Bok gibi okumayın. Udusisidjdidjrkkrdidififkkdkdkdkdkdkdkxkxkfkfkfkdkjdkxkxjxkxjxjdkdjdkfjfkfkfkkdkdkdkdjdjfjdjfkdkkffkdididikfkdksoz7cjfi idjxixkjdixjrjdudjisududusisisisjdjdjej
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This story could’ve been a bit better if the author just did the smallest amount of research. I am already on chapter 4 and I see two mistakes the author would not of made if he was prepared. I might not even read further because I feel there are more to come. I hope someone found this info helpful.
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kante😈 no😱 para de😨 corre😰 el balon😠 de🤑 oro😛 lo merece😎el y con mount🥵 para😱 asistir🤡 el primer gol de havertz 🥶 en la Champions league⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
-the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever -the best mc ever
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揭示劇透 i love the comedy. i love the fighting scene. i love the suspense. i love the non existent love development. i love the plot. i love the comedy. i love the fighting scene. i love the suspense. i love the non existent love development. i love the plot.
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The Fact that the MC has his own unique personality is Great. The only thing that made me rate this as 4-stars is the fact that there might be too many OC's as his partners instead of the Fairy Tail cast. Although it is great this is just my opinion so all those angry readers out there just don't curse me for saying my opinion. Still, this is a great read that I would recommend to others.
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Interesante historia y me gusta mucho que el protagonista vea que no puede volverse arrogante pensando que al obtener una habilidad de un anime que conocía será todo poderoso
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A well written story. I like that the MC uses an somewhat original magic. My biggest problems with the story are the lack of direction and the main characters. I ended up dropping the story 30 or so chapters in because it didnt feel like it was going anywhere. It has a very slice of life feel. No overarching story or goal to push the story forward. The main character was fun in the beginning, reading a MC that isn't the copy and pasted edgy webnovel MC was fun. But he's started to become grating after a while. He feels like a shounen main character without any of the depth. It's not a bad read and well written. I can see myself returning when there are more chapters to see if the MC actually grows ad a character/ there is an actually story.
One of the best Fairy Tail Fanfictions. Great Story telling, Great characters with new Powers. Love it so far and hope that the Author steps up the updates :)
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(Written with the translator’s help) Fanfic is very good, so far it has not shown anything really 'bad' or 'annoying' to deal with, it is pleasant to read and is not filled with unnecessary information. But I’m leaving Fanfic, I don’t do well with OC’s or an almost 100% Original story. I have a bad memory and this absurd amount of original characters are severely affecting me. Still, congratulations on a great job.
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its been a while since i enjoyed reading a ff .. i really like it a lot 5 from me in every thing and all i can say to the author is thank you really for writing and sharing it with us
It is really well written. The dialoge is smooth, and nothing feel especially forced. The mc's goofy personality fits in perfectly. It can be a bit anoying from time to time, but he feels like he truly does belong to the world he is inn. So far the power scaling feels good. no god level baby. Looking forward to how he will grow
it's a good start, mc doesn't just get a power that makes him op very fast would like to see him work hard and develop new ways to use his powers
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The shameless author here ✌🏻 I'm just writing this review to clarify what you sign up for by reading this fanfic. 1. MC is not clever and cool at all! To give you an image it's a combination of Meliodas and Luffy. 2. The story will start before Fairy Tail canon. 3. I plan on ****ing up canon so don't cry 😭 That's all for now, hope you like it and will get a laugh out of it, see ya later 👋🏻