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very good content I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I
The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.
I enjoy this story a lot, I get an Assassination Classroom vibe a bit, but you can tell its completely different. Like I hope maybe one day you decide to make a manga this so good, and I am sure it would be popular amongst the anime world if you made a manga out of it. Keep up the amazing work Author~ can't wait to read more chapters!
Your talent is clear hun.... writing is definitely your calling😁😁😁 I enjoyed reading your chapters and I'm hoping to read more of your work😉😉😉 Great work Author!!!
I love how the author draws us into the emotions of the character. I felt so bad for AJ in the beginning, the story is well written, some minor mistakes but nothing that could be noticed too much. AJ is so mysterious, and even though he is a genius he still has flaws and shows a more human side. Unlike some characters that are just too perfect AJ feels really real in the story. I fully recommend this book! Keep up the great work Author~san.
Hey guys please rate this story honestly! I enjoy feed back and take all feed back into consideration. I am the author of this book and love suggestions and ideas for my story!
Did u look at the cover? Wow. just wow. The author did an awesome job at creating the mysterious character i.e., AJ. The author found that sweet spot of perfectly balanced Emotions that must be conveyed. Great description with such vivid details that reader cant help themselves but dragged into the life of AJ. I wished the author posted more free chapters before locking them, i felt it was too soon probably coz i want to read some more. I would highly recommend this one
the book was good but unfortunately the author kept releasing duplicate chapters and completely missing out others so it became hard to keep myself reading it which is a shame.
very good content I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I
The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.
I enjoy this story a lot, I get an Assassination Classroom vibe a bit, but you can tell its completely different. Like I hope maybe one day you decide to make a manga this so good, and I am sure it would be popular amongst the anime world if you made a manga out of it. Keep up the amazing work Author~ can't wait to read more chapters!
Your talent is clear hun.... writing is definitely your calling😁😁😁 I enjoyed reading your chapters and I'm hoping to read more of your work😉😉😉 Great work Author!!!
I love how the author draws us into the emotions of the character. I felt so bad for AJ in the beginning, the story is well written, some minor mistakes but nothing that could be noticed too much. AJ is so mysterious, and even though he is a genius he still has flaws and shows a more human side. Unlike some characters that are just too perfect AJ feels really real in the story. I fully recommend this book! Keep up the great work Author~san.
Hey guys please rate this story honestly! I enjoy feed back and take all feed back into consideration. I am the author of this book and love suggestions and ideas for my story!
Did u look at the cover? Wow. just wow. The author did an awesome job at creating the mysterious character i.e., AJ. The author found that sweet spot of perfectly balanced Emotions that must be conveyed. Great description with such vivid details that reader cant help themselves but dragged into the life of AJ. I wished the author posted more free chapters before locking them, i felt it was too soon probably coz i want to read some more. I would highly recommend this one
the book was good but unfortunately the author kept releasing duplicate chapters and completely missing out others so it became hard to keep myself reading it which is a shame.