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A full 5star but don't know when is gonna be locked but until then am gonna vote bro pls when is the next chapter going to be release pls I need moreeeee.
Really interesting and somewhat dark so far! The characters and dialogue are so well-written, and the pace is just right. Can’t wait for more chapters!
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I honestly love this so far, I hope you update it soon! Couldn't put it down lol.
A full 5star but don't know when is gonna be locked but until then am gonna vote bro pls when is the next chapter going to be release pls I need moreeeee.
Really interesting and somewhat dark so far! The characters and dialogue are so well-written, and the pace is just right. Can’t wait for more chapters!
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Hey look, it’s me being shameless cause I have nothing better to do. Heh. I’m so funni
I honestly love this so far, I hope you update it soon! Couldn't put it down lol.