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to be honest this was your best work my guy, its sad you dropped this and i probably should have left this review the day you did but i didn't
At this point, the story has been dropped. I wish it would continue to update, but it's been more than a year since it last uploaded a chapter. Feel free to read it, it is by no means awful, just don't expect any new content.
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Randomly dropped a great novel (not the first time he's done this) he also randomly puts novels on hold for many months, stay away from this author if you're looking for a novel that'll be finished or surpass 100 chapters.
This a really good book that takes it's time explaining what's happening and going into great detail, I really hope this continues for a long while because I really enjoy it
Ta chida pero yo quería que siguiera y parece que abandonas esta historia que era muy buena pero bueno que se le va hacer .....?.....?..................................................lli
I sit and wonder: Who is the idiot, the hero of the story or the author of the story? --- Throwing the sword aside, without which there will be no continuation of the story, is a brilliant (no) move. And if he falls into the abyss, how are you going to get him? Okay, that's right, by the way. --- Going naked against the boss is a genius (no). To collect things from the grave keepers? Use the sword he threw aside? With the same caretakers gather spears, swords, shields, crossbows and use it? No, why. It sounds like nonsense. Or before pulling out the sword, why not take a tighter halberd? Oh yes, why, it's too easy. --- As a result: the hero simply follows the pattern of the game, forgetting that this is not a game. Well, yes, why should we think, it's difficult. --- I wonder who doesn't understand what the author or the hero is doing? Why did Indra and Madara "Go crazy"? Because they had Sharingan or because they were manipulated by Black Zetsu? --- Well, yes, you think your son died a couple of times and so what? Died and died, who doesn't happen to? Zero reaction from the mother of the hero kills that I can't. --- Do not confuse the lifting force and the impact force. Two different values. --- To reveal right off the bat that you're going and dying, well, congratulations, it's time for you to go to a mental hospital. It's important to think about what consequences this may have, well, yes, well, once again I wonder why we need to think? --- I am silent about the situation with Momo. --- And it was read only 5 chapters. I'm afraid to imagine what will happen next.
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i dont like writing reviews but i love this book mc isnt a simp but hes still cool hes lazy and i love how he acts and the setup of the story just waiting and hoping for him to continue the book / add more chapters
Izuku has the quirk he was born with plus all of the one for all plus the one he gave him something else you want to give him...and lots of plot holes outside of that is fine but the plot holes take away more of my desire to read
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Inspired me to write dark souls fics, 10/10, would read again if I forgot about it and found it again. .
Great writing, An absolute shame there’s talk about dropping it *cough* DONT *cough* after all we haven’t even gotten to DOOM which attracted me most!
i think this is a wonderfull book and I hope you continue writing it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😁😁😁😁
I really enjoyed reading this so thank you for the fan-fic. Hope you don't drop it. Also I was thinking you should give the mc one for all since Izuke got new quirk and he already has his hidden quirk, since one for all enhances the quirk the user already has, it can enhance any ability the mc already has from completing the dark souls world stronger and maybe give him and extra world to travel to or make the awards the mc gets from defeating the boss in the remaining worlds better, or something, plus this way both the mc and Izuke would have two quirks in sense because one for all is basically made up of multiple quirks. Thanks again[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Man it's awesome ggggggggggggg Want more chapters with the same qualitie Please don't drop it or take break if it's not something important More chapters
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I love this fic its so entertaining even tho it's only on the 42nd chapter and got me wanting for more. J just hope that yhe author can update faster if he can.
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I apologize for everyone who wanted a serious review to see if they want to read this, but I had to give 5 stars once I saw Dark souls, Bloodborn and Doom in one story
good story, please more. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
I ran into this story by accident and am loving it. the mcs powers are unique and fun as well as give him challenges to overcome, so he can most face smack people in mhas main story I hope the author keeps uploading
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This'll be a more action-orientated one compared to my last novel, "Waifu Gacha System." I'll do my best to make the fights fun and realistic. BNHA was chosen as a base world for two reasons: 1) It is a world that uses powers, he can benefit from the hell he is forced into when he sleeps 2) It is modern, it is much easier to become immersed in something you know rather than something like Naruto. Hope you enjoy!
to be honest this was your best work my guy, its sad you dropped this and i probably should have left this review the day you did but i didn't
At this point, the story has been dropped. I wish it would continue to update, but it's been more than a year since it last uploaded a chapter. Feel free to read it, it is by no means awful, just don't expect any new content.
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Randomly dropped a great novel (not the first time he's done this) he also randomly puts novels on hold for many months, stay away from this author if you're looking for a novel that'll be finished or surpass 100 chapters.
This a really good book that takes it's time explaining what's happening and going into great detail, I really hope this continues for a long while because I really enjoy it
Ta chida pero yo quería que siguiera y parece que abandonas esta historia que era muy buena pero bueno que se le va hacer .....?.....?..................................................lli
I sit and wonder: Who is the idiot, the hero of the story or the author of the story? --- Throwing the sword aside, without which there will be no continuation of the story, is a brilliant (no) move. And if he falls into the abyss, how are you going to get him? Okay, that's right, by the way. --- Going naked against the boss is a genius (no). To collect things from the grave keepers? Use the sword he threw aside? With the same caretakers gather spears, swords, shields, crossbows and use it? No, why. It sounds like nonsense. Or before pulling out the sword, why not take a tighter halberd? Oh yes, why, it's too easy. --- As a result: the hero simply follows the pattern of the game, forgetting that this is not a game. Well, yes, why should we think, it's difficult. --- I wonder who doesn't understand what the author or the hero is doing? Why did Indra and Madara "Go crazy"? Because they had Sharingan or because they were manipulated by Black Zetsu? --- Well, yes, you think your son died a couple of times and so what? Died and died, who doesn't happen to? Zero reaction from the mother of the hero kills that I can't. --- Do not confuse the lifting force and the impact force. Two different values. --- To reveal right off the bat that you're going and dying, well, congratulations, it's time for you to go to a mental hospital. It's important to think about what consequences this may have, well, yes, well, once again I wonder why we need to think? --- I am silent about the situation with Momo. --- And it was read only 5 chapters. I'm afraid to imagine what will happen next.
揭示劇透 i dont like writing reviews but i love this book mc isnt a simp but hes still cool hes lazy and i love how he acts and the setup of the story just waiting and hoping for him to continue the book / add more chapters
Izuku has the quirk he was born with plus all of the one for all plus the one he gave him something else you want to give him...and lots of plot holes outside of that is fine but the plot holes take away more of my desire to read
Meh... ......................................................................................................................................................................
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揭示劇透 Inspired me to write dark souls fics, 10/10, would read again if I forgot about it and found it again. .
Great writing, An absolute shame there’s talk about dropping it *cough* DONT *cough* after all we haven’t even gotten to DOOM which attracted me most!
i think this is a wonderfull book and I hope you continue writing it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆😁😁😁😁
I really enjoyed reading this so thank you for the fan-fic. Hope you don't drop it. Also I was thinking you should give the mc one for all since Izuke got new quirk and he already has his hidden quirk, since one for all enhances the quirk the user already has, it can enhance any ability the mc already has from completing the dark souls world stronger and maybe give him and extra world to travel to or make the awards the mc gets from defeating the boss in the remaining worlds better, or something, plus this way both the mc and Izuke would have two quirks in sense because one for all is basically made up of multiple quirks. Thanks again[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good novel, unstable updates !!??!?akzmxlzksmkxlz.a!xkkxls!wkxlzkwkx?x?kKwmkaalozksmxncjjdlalsidhrhjdkapapa laallalaallalalslskksksjjdhdhdhdndnsmkskxoxosolala
Man it's awesome ggggggggggggg Want more chapters with the same qualitie Please don't drop it or take break if it's not something important More chapters
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揭示劇透 I love this fic its so entertaining even tho it's only on the 42nd chapter and got me wanting for more. J just hope that yhe author can update faster if he can.
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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揭示劇透 I apologize for everyone who wanted a serious review to see if they want to read this, but I had to give 5 stars once I saw Dark souls, Bloodborn and Doom in one story
good story, please more. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
I ran into this story by accident and am loving it. the mcs powers are unique and fun as well as give him challenges to overcome, so he can most face smack people in mhas main story I hope the author keeps uploading
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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This'll be a more action-orientated one compared to my last novel, "Waifu Gacha System." I'll do my best to make the fights fun and realistic. BNHA was chosen as a base world for two reasons: 1) It is a world that uses powers, he can benefit from the hell he is forced into when he sleeps 2) It is modern, it is much easier to become immersed in something you know rather than something like Naruto. Hope you enjoy!