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Is it dropped or something the auther other novel thet came after this is approaching 200ch ????? Good but no updating stability...............
At chapter 25...Chapters are very short. There dont really seem to be a goal for the story, its all over the place. Its like reading a bunch of fillers that got nothing to do with storyline. dropping.
Ok this story is gold it's not that slow and not so fast and honestly this is so great the plot , background and thanks so much for this fanfic .[img=recommend]
Hopefully the author is able to update the story more regularly, i would suggest anyone reading this that they probably like if your looking for a hunter x hunter fanfic
I love this and would like to see more... .........................................................................................................................................................
This fanfic is so good the quality and quantity of words are the chef's kiss and the MC is a great character . Plus the background and past and explanations are Wonderfull please don't stop this fanfic it's wonderful.
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A história e boa só espero que o protagonista com a idade de 6 anos não seja poderoso ao ponto de ganha de tudo e todos porque se for assim séria muito chato e ficaria sem história ia ser só o protagonista batendo em todo mundo
First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chaptersFirst, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters
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Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters
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Is it dropped or something the auther other novel thet came after this is approaching 200ch ????? Good but no updating stability...............
At chapter 25...Chapters are very short. There dont really seem to be a goal for the story, its all over the place. Its like reading a bunch of fillers that got nothing to do with storyline. dropping.
Ok this story is gold it's not that slow and not so fast and honestly this is so great the plot , background and thanks so much for this fanfic .[img=recommend]
Hopefully the author is able to update the story more regularly, i would suggest anyone reading this that they probably like if your looking for a hunter x hunter fanfic
I love this and would like to see more... .........................................................................................................................................................
This fanfic is so good the quality and quantity of words are the chef's kiss and the MC is a great character . Plus the background and past and explanations are Wonderfull please don't stop this fanfic it's wonderful.
Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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A história e boa só espero que o protagonista com a idade de 6 anos não seja poderoso ao ponto de ganha de tudo e todos porque se for assim séria muito chato e ficaria sem história ia ser só o protagonista batendo em todo mundo
First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters First, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chaptersFirst, thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work and can't wait to read your next chapters
super short chapters and la back story development chnbv vgfc vy vfcvh .gffhh. f th vc .yccfujvfv ugcgy. yfv uv gh gvkjv gy vvh guy ggg vycvbjhx
Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters Super short chapters
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