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ok first off there's very few decent lengths svtfoe fics out there so good on you for starting one 2 author seems to rush the story up to the point im at idk if its to get to Canon faster or not but if thats the pace for the whole story then unfortunately its gonna be bad for the story
The only bad thing I can say is that the character advances very fast that is the only thing afterwards everything else is fine the development of the plot is on the right track
Ive always wanted to read star and marco writing and im so happy to finaly get one the aurthur better not drop this or i shall watch him When im dead
Hello everyone. I'm being a shameless author. I don't care though. I write this story from my imagination. I have been inspired by many other authors similar to myself. I just one day decided hey why don't I just make something. Then boom I wrote the first thing that came to my mind.
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ok first off there's very few decent lengths svtfoe fics out there so good on you for starting one 2 author seems to rush the story up to the point im at idk if its to get to Canon faster or not but if thats the pace for the whole story then unfortunately its gonna be bad for the story
The only bad thing I can say is that the character advances very fast that is the only thing afterwards everything else is fine the development of the plot is on the right track
Ive always wanted to read star and marco writing and im so happy to finaly get one the aurthur better not drop this or i shall watch him When im dead
Hello everyone. I'm being a shameless author. I don't care though. I write this story from my imagination. I have been inspired by many other authors similar to myself. I just one day decided hey why don't I just make something. Then boom I wrote the first thing that came to my mind.
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