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I love it. This novel is amazing so far. I hope that Cal does not betray him or whatever. I think you can stretch this novel a really long way. Upgrade his powers later down the line, and give it a sort of Atlantis feel, and eventually war against the humans. This novel has so much potential.
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I love it. This novel is amazing so far. I hope that Cal does not betray him or whatever. I think you can stretch this novel a really long way. Upgrade his powers later down the line, and give it a sort of Atlantis feel, and eventually war against the humans. This novel has so much potential.
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