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Very good story! The characters feel like they are real people and I am right alongside them! I can clearly imagine each chapter's surroundings and background! I love the way the brothers treat Viviana so carefully and shower her with love and care! I highly recommend this story!
Very good story! The characters feel like they are real people and I am right alongside them! I can clearly imagine each chapter's surroundings and background! I love the way the brothers treat Viviana so carefully and shower her with love and care! I highly recommend this story!