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Hello there~ It's an excellent book that just seems to click with me and I grinded until the latest chapter. The writing is good and flows really well; it gives you a vivid enough image that you don't feel lost or confused. The story has been developing nicely, and it doesn't stick too much on the cliches we see in most novels. The character design is also very interesting with the characters coming off sort of 'alive' to me it makes me feel something basically they give off emotions that I can relate to and that made me appreciate your writing more. Though a lot of the world has been introduced, I feel that we still don't know what realms there are for cultivation, all we know is Qi level and the last stage before Godhood is Ancient. Sorry, I am rambling but when I read an excellent book I get so immersed that I feel like 'What if I was in the novel'. If you want a good cultivation read where you can find out more about cultivation, I recommend I Shall Seal the Heavens.
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can anyone tell me if this book is completed or not? I've not read it yet, that is the reason for low rating. I just spent a week reading a book nonstop spent 40bicks to unlock it and it still isn't finished. not playing on this early.
This is not your usual weak female MC or villainess protagonist. If you're still looking for some hints, then I'm giving you a go signal! Read the book and you'll find yourself wanting for more!
Hey, hey, hey! Tenth review, baybay! I'll get my stars now, hehe... Anyway, the one reading this, thank you for visiting this novel and I hope you have fun reading this novel of mine. Thank you.
This book is worth the title of winning the wpc #147. Fresh writing, and good wordings. And the way she adapted to her new world was interesting.
this book is different from all the cultivation books I have read where the MC is hero working hard and gaining success easily. brought a fresh change. looking forward to more updates.
the book is a gem, I like the funny interactions of the MC, the way she reacts is cute. and hope the changes she is bringing would be in her favour. good work author
There's sooo many plot twist that was unexpected. It managed to catch me off guard as I was reading it. I like how relatable the MC (Hua) is - how mediocre she is, how she's not your typical milky white skin, or the main character of a main character but a supporting one. Bonus point for me: Some scenes are funny enough that got me laughing hehehe It was a breath of fresh air for me. Okay, I do admit I get carried away reading it but it was a pretty much enjoyable read. (Sorry for being a noisy reader!!)
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The main character spends a lot of time thinking about getting her ass kicked. And then she doesn't get it. SAD! No for real though this is good, just read it. I'm only giving it 4,8 because I personally don't like the amount of thinking she does. Otherwise, we have a sassy mc who isn't afraid to stir trouble or tell what's on her mind.
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Love how the lead is not some weakling or just going head first into everything but planning her moves ahead of time while keeping in mind about what she has at her disposal 💯💯
Hola! I'm giving 5 stars for story development, character design and the world background. It's not the typical isekai that lands the main lead as the main character of the novel, comics, etc. In terms of writing, you write and your good at narrating, but I'm looking for something spicy but simple. ( Not a professional fella, I always read AshKnight's books haha ) I can feel that you have edited the chapters? It's a good point if you have done the editing. The words you used are easy to apprehend. I'm looking up to Hua's adventure, but I hope there will be some love spice as the novel progresses and as read thru it. You are a good writer. I'm now eyeing you Author! HAPPY WRITING! [◍•ᴗ•◍]
Hello there~ It's an excellent book that just seems to click with me and I grinded until the latest chapter. The writing is good and flows really well; it gives you a vivid enough image that you don't feel lost or confused. The story has been developing nicely, and it doesn't stick too much on the cliches we see in most novels. The character design is also very interesting with the characters coming off sort of 'alive' to me it makes me feel something basically they give off emotions that I can relate to and that made me appreciate your writing more. Though a lot of the world has been introduced, I feel that we still don't know what realms there are for cultivation, all we know is Qi level and the last stage before Godhood is Ancient. Sorry, I am rambling but when I read an excellent book I get so immersed that I feel like 'What if I was in the novel'. If you want a good cultivation read where you can find out more about cultivation, I recommend I Shall Seal the Heavens.
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can anyone tell me if this book is completed or not? I've not read it yet, that is the reason for low rating. I just spent a week reading a book nonstop spent 40bicks to unlock it and it still isn't finished. not playing on this early.
This is not your usual weak female MC or villainess protagonist. If you're still looking for some hints, then I'm giving you a go signal! Read the book and you'll find yourself wanting for more!
Hey, hey, hey! Tenth review, baybay! I'll get my stars now, hehe... Anyway, the one reading this, thank you for visiting this novel and I hope you have fun reading this novel of mine. Thank you.
This book is worth the title of winning the wpc #147. Fresh writing, and good wordings. And the way she adapted to her new world was interesting.
this book is different from all the cultivation books I have read where the MC is hero working hard and gaining success easily. brought a fresh change. looking forward to more updates.
the book is a gem, I like the funny interactions of the MC, the way she reacts is cute. and hope the changes she is bringing would be in her favour. good work author
There's sooo many plot twist that was unexpected. It managed to catch me off guard as I was reading it. I like how relatable the MC (Hua) is - how mediocre she is, how she's not your typical milky white skin, or the main character of a main character but a supporting one. Bonus point for me: Some scenes are funny enough that got me laughing hehehe It was a breath of fresh air for me. Okay, I do admit I get carried away reading it but it was a pretty much enjoyable read. (Sorry for being a noisy reader!!)
揭示劇透 The main character spends a lot of time thinking about getting her ass kicked. And then she doesn't get it. SAD! No for real though this is good, just read it. I'm only giving it 4,8 because I personally don't like the amount of thinking she does. Otherwise, we have a sassy mc who isn't afraid to stir trouble or tell what's on her mind.
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Love how the lead is not some weakling or just going head first into everything but planning her moves ahead of time while keeping in mind about what she has at her disposal 💯💯
Hola! I'm giving 5 stars for story development, character design and the world background. It's not the typical isekai that lands the main lead as the main character of the novel, comics, etc. In terms of writing, you write and your good at narrating, but I'm looking for something spicy but simple. ( Not a professional fella, I always read AshKnight's books haha ) I can feel that you have edited the chapters? It's a good point if you have done the editing. The words you used are easy to apprehend. I'm looking up to Hua's adventure, but I hope there will be some love spice as the novel progresses and as read thru it. You are a good writer. I'm now eyeing you Author! HAPPY WRITING! [◍•ᴗ•◍]