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Writing Quality - 5 So far in the first 2 chapters the writing is very good. There is no grammatical errors from what I can see and the story flows well Updating Stability - 3 Because there are only 2 chapters so far this will be a 3 star until more comes out Story Development - 4 So far the plot is interesting and I hope that it doesn’t turn too repetitive with demons coming every other chapter Character Design - 4 It’s a DC fanfic most of the characters already have a personality that can be used and slightly altered World Building - 4 Once again it’s a DC fanfic half of the world is essentially already made with some stuff that’s slightly altered Note: This is my first full review please tell me if I’m off about something
As a fellow author just trying their hand at writing novels I hope you find a sense of enjoyment while writing chapters.🙂..................
I'm giving this five star cause I just love angels and demons...... I absolutely love the premise and would be delighted to see this continue for a long time, thanks for this fic author-san even if it still has 1 chap
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Even tho there is only one chapter i really liked it off the bat it seems promsing and the grammar is good plus i was looking for something like this for awhile cant wait to see how this goes so if you like DC and Angles/Demons fanfic this is for you 😤😤😤😤😊
So far(2charapters) it looks great, please dont drop this novel the premise looks interesting and has a lot of potential
Writing Quality - 5 So far in the first 2 chapters the writing is very good. There is no grammatical errors from what I can see and the story flows well Updating Stability - 3 Because there are only 2 chapters so far this will be a 3 star until more comes out Story Development - 4 So far the plot is interesting and I hope that it doesn’t turn too repetitive with demons coming every other chapter Character Design - 4 It’s a DC fanfic most of the characters already have a personality that can be used and slightly altered World Building - 4 Once again it’s a DC fanfic half of the world is essentially already made with some stuff that’s slightly altered Note: This is my first full review please tell me if I’m off about something
As a fellow author just trying their hand at writing novels I hope you find a sense of enjoyment while writing chapters.🙂..................
I'm giving this five star cause I just love angels and demons...... I absolutely love the premise and would be delighted to see this continue for a long time, thanks for this fic author-san even if it still has 1 chap
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Even tho there is only one chapter i really liked it off the bat it seems promsing and the grammar is good plus i was looking for something like this for awhile cant wait to see how this goes so if you like DC and Angles/Demons fanfic this is for you 😤😤😤😤😊
So far(2charapters) it looks great, please dont drop this novel the premise looks interesting and has a lot of potential