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Lin Wu was a university student that died after having one too many energy drinks and then reincarnated into the body of a worm. He awakens to find out that he now has a system, but even it doesn't have a clear idea of where they are.
He comes out of the ground and discoverers that he’s no longer in his previous world but rather in a cultivation world.
Witness Lin Wu’s journey as he worms his way to the heavens from a tiny worm crawling in the ground.
Credits to: Eijirou Daishin for the art
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寫檢討Overall, I do love the story. In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so. System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards. I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
now before I actually go into my review I will say this the first 30 chapters are a pain to get through. but there is reason for this and it is explained in the story later on why the main character acts as such and why this system acts like a oddly stupid system as well. now onto my review. overall this is an absolutely great novel. we get to see the main character come with and spoilers for those wondering. We see the main character come to terms with the fact that he is no longer a human and is instead of Beast and we really see him embody that. he no longer tries to act like a human and he doesn't even try to regain a human form even though it's been confirmed that he can multiple times, because even though he has attachment to his old life he doesn't want it to shape the way he approaches his new life. and sure the story can seem slow and I agree that is a bit drawn out at points but when you're actually reading the story more than one chapter at a time and you aren't just waiting for daily releases and you have like 30 chapter stockpiled to read you don't even notice that sometimes some bits are longer than they should be because the author writes really well. And the story truly gets you drawn in and all the information you are fed is given to you when it is important or before something important happens and then from there on you can start connecting the dots why things that happened previously in the story moved in the manner they did. If you look at any of the other reviews I leave you'll see I'm usually extremely harsh on stories that I like and you this is one of those stories where I don't have much to say about it other than it's a great book. out of all the 500 books I have in my library and probably only the 250 a readout of the already 300 books I've previously read this is one of those books that I always keep coming back to. Sure I don't reread the story like I do some other novels but what's really good about this story is even if I leave it alone for two or three months just to get that nice stockpile of 92 over 100 chapters I still know what's going on in the story because it doesn't rely on cliches. a lot of the story is new and different at least when the main character actually gets past his non cultivating period. and you know I could go on singing praises for this book but I just thought I'd leave my honest review then if anyone right at this point let me know how you feel about the book 2 because this is one of the few that I truly do think deserves more of the following than it has even though I don't think it's as good of a book is say incident man in the apocalypse or the Magus in the Wizard World it's still a great book.
揭示劇透When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
The sytem is dumb. it gives stUpid rewards. the mc is retarted and is saying dumb shit constantLy its a baD book honestly. I read lIke 20 chapters and dropped it.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
Very captivating and interesting, not much plot holes at all. Still hungrily waiting for more chapters. Thank you author, for writing a non-human MC novel.
So far, I've really enjoyed the story. The one thing I wish people wouldn't do is post comments like "omg mc so returded" or "why dont you try dis!!1!1!!!". It's really annoying considering that while the MC is kinda dumb, compared to this generation now, I swear he's a prodigious genius.
the story is mostly fine. There's just one thing that I hate about the MC, He says chickie buggies a lot... I hate it. I feel like I'm losing my brain cells just by hovering my eyes over it. Although the story explains the reason behind this, I don't like it one bit
Well, Though There are only 5 chapters for now, I can see a great potential in this book. The worm setting made me thrilled and it felt as if I myself was experiencing all those events. I have already read the other book of the author which was quite good and I think is book can also be equivalently good. Waiting for further updates.
chickie nuggies! it's like the author is begging me to stop reading. He's a college student but he sounds like a kid. and why does he keep complaining about the "stupid" system? are you trying to be funny author?if yes, pls stop.
Read every chapter, by far one of my favorite chapters. The ending was abrupt though, Tim's story wasn't wrapped up, neither any of the yellow dragon stuff. didn't get to see any immortal worlds, etc. It felt like the author just wanted to end it when it definitely had at least 500 more chapters of plot left in it. I'm sad to see the end honestly. I love this novel so much
Essa não é uma história sobre o MC, ja que nos primeiros capítulos ele finge ser uma arma e acaba caindo nas mãos de um cultivador qualquer, depois disso a história não é mais sobre o MC pois ele age como uma arma estúpida ate o capítulo 300 talvez até mais ja que larguei essa merda
This is a amazing book i love the system and how it cant tell you stuff tell it finds out it self and how he uses knowledge from his past like to help himself
the one thing I dont like about this novel is all of the locked chapters.£○□■○■♤□}□{|{●£|5○£○|○£5♡■¿¥●€\£6●8£♤|}\\♡£♤◇|\○♤87|}}€}}}}¿}•}●》6》|7○♤|¡7■{□}|□♡
Un mc retrasado, que ha dejado de seguir creciendo mentalmente. El tipo que lo usa como lanza es mejor mc, mas calculador y frío y sin un risa retrasada, el gusano mc no tiene casi planes a largo plazo, solo se guía por impulsos. Lo que puede ser peor que un mc retrasado sea neutral bueno o malo, es un mc retrasado pero con un sistema que debería hacerlo mas inteligente y darle mas opciones, ademas de una potencia de calcula tremenda. Un estereotipo de mc mitad rimuru y leylin de la novela de magos, por el lado de rimuru por sus risas estúpidas y casi uso nulo y investigación del sistema en profundidad y por parte de leylin por dejarle casi todo al sistema, no poder dejar cosas atrás emociones etc, aparte de la poca creatividad al uso del sistema. ===Resumen mc estupid mitad rimuru y mitad leiylin
The world building and the character were good at first but.... the mc has became a bit bloodthirsty.... there was something unique about him when even though he was a beast he acted more rationally but now killing entire city just because for entertainment feels too much beast like.. yea he is a beast but acting too much beast like is not something I would prefer. He most of the times spare other beasts and most of the times kills other humans makes it feel a bit strange now as if his character is not very stable.
揭示劇透Pleasantly surprised with this novel. This is a good "monster Isakai" type novel that can still incorporate human politics without the main character losing his identity as a monster. Great woldbulding, power scaling, fun side characters (human and monster), and a cunning protag, I'm really enjoying this novel!!!!
The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something) Thanks for the great book author! (/^▽^)/