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I saw, I clicked. Amazing one of a kind mc with a mind-blowing story. Lots of laughs and cant wait for more! Who knew you could clean and cultivate at the same time? Thanks author for teaching us to make this world a neater place xD
Just the title alone is hilarious and I'm expecting lots of funny moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
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The amazing sloth does it again with another masterpiece creation! Does his wittiness know no bounds?! Does his ability to enthrall the reader in endless enjoyment ever cease?! Um well no it doesn’t... GREAT JOB!!! I hope you win the WPC you deserve it! Everyone gIve this man your powerstones!
As a start, this story is in all aspects different. We all know what a system novel is, tons of cliches about it but hell! This combination is bizarre yet intriguing. The plot is paired with colourful characters, good writing and an overall smooth undertone. 5/5 recommend, you'd be losing a gem if you go elsewhere.
bro continue this novel it has potential and also it will surely make you popular. all things are good if you add plot twists. concept to earn by cleaning is a unique way of thinking in novels. if you are reading this then think about it.
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I saw, I clicked. Amazing one of a kind mc with a mind-blowing story. Lots of laughs and cant wait for more! Who knew you could clean and cultivate at the same time? Thanks author for teaching us to make this world a neater place xD
Just the title alone is hilarious and I'm expecting lots of funny moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell the future readers not to miss this one.
Awesome plot, never seen this anywhere as of yet. Looking forward to reading more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 The amazing sloth does it again with another masterpiece creation! Does his wittiness know no bounds?! Does his ability to enthrall the reader in endless enjoyment ever cease?! Um well no it doesn’t... GREAT JOB!!! I hope you win the WPC you deserve it! Everyone gIve this man your powerstones!
As a start, this story is in all aspects different. We all know what a system novel is, tons of cliches about it but hell! This combination is bizarre yet intriguing. The plot is paired with colourful characters, good writing and an overall smooth undertone. 5/5 recommend, you'd be losing a gem if you go elsewhere.