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Not knowing why he ended up dead a man must face his new life in Teen wolf...... but is it truly the one he knows?
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Right okay so. Writing Quality - fucking typewriter mtl quality brain dead bullshit. If you've read proper stories with good sentence formation then click Browse on the top left and leave this book alone until it get's fucking edited. Updates- Frequent Story Development- Awful dude's trained for goddamn centuries and happens to be the most brain dead, weak ass mc I've seen. Some goddamn bullshit must be happening for this dude to be absolutely outclassed by a goddamn werewolf. Basically don't read it if you want realistic character growth both emotionally and physically. Character Design - just a sponge, dude's got no personality except for what I think would be a goddamn shit-eating grin that adorns his face goddamn 24/7 World Background- It's fucking **** wolf, that shit sucked ass.
Yay first review, I always pay attention to your ff keep it up ...............................................................
weak ass MC ...... 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 weak ass MC ...... 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 weak ass MC ...... 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 weak ass MC ...... 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫 weak ass MC ...... 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫
Dropped within the first chapter lol. The author makes so many stupid decisions that I just couldn’t continue reading. Shame this author was the one to come up with the idea because in the right hands it coupd work.
Well, I don't even feel like giving a good review on how stupid the story is, it's so fucking bad that it seemed to be written by someone while they were having a stroke. The MC is pathetic, dumb, nerdy, among so many things, but what totally ruined the story was the unhelpful and useless treatment it made. God, I got so angry that I could only think of the MC as a pathetic bitch.
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Don't drop this this is best **** wolf fan fiction story I read so far 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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one of the best fanfiction's i've read so far it is good to read and i would love to See more of it and it is also nice that you Made the Mc strong but not Overpowerd.
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- 1 1) Time. 3 years ago
- 2 2) Time. Part 2 3 years ago
- 3 3) Beacon Hills... 3 years ago
- 4 4) First Day..... 3 years ago
- 5 5) Truth.... 3 years ago
- 6 6) More Truths.... 3 years ago
- 7 7) Dinner 3 years ago
- 8 8) Lydia.... Derek and ???.... 3 years ago
- 9 9) Fighting Peter..... Healing... 3 years ago
- 10 10) An Allison POV....... 3 years ago
- 11 11) A Little Lydia POV 3 years ago
- 12 12) Girl Talk, Small Fight....... 3 years ago
- 13 13) Night at School 3 years ago
Writing Quality 3-Stars Story Development 2-Stars Character Design 1-Star Updating Stability 5-Stars ( so far, it is the first day ) World Background 2-Star Writing Quality [ I am too lazy here, so just go and see for yourself. ] Story Development [ After centuries and centuries he is still is kinda weak and it looks like the author wants his Development to be really slow for the sole reason that the Mc isn't Op at the start of the Story, which is just stupid. I mean, Immortal Warlock has a meaning and in a world where humans can kill those werewolves very easily( in my opinion, I mean, They killed an entire pack so fucking easily, you just need wolfsbane and that's it for them, game over ).] whatever, next one. Character Design [ Ok God, please help me because this Mc is hella stupid, it isn't even funny anymore. just read the First chapter and the deal he made with the werewolves, it is a complete mystery to me how the author is even alive in RL if he agrees to such deals. RL: man who wanted to rape a little girl but got caught " Okay police officer, You will let me go and then I go rape the girl, and you get nothing out of this other than problems, okay? That sounds like a good deal, right?" Police Officer " Sounds fair, deal" ] I am too lazy for the rest but they aren't important anymore, so......bye