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totally lazy story, the author does not strive for anything. things just don't make sense. lazy author who simply made MC Op. I know that everyone needs to start from somewhere, but this is very bad. needs a lot of improvement. it's just another generic MC without imagination.
I love it it's so different from other gamer storys , mc op as hell don't listen to haters this story has so many possibilities it's yours fic make it what you want it to be
totally lazy story, the author does not strive for anything. things just don't make sense. lazy author who simply made MC Op. I know that everyone needs to start from somewhere, but this is very bad. needs a lot of improvement. it's just another generic MC without imagination.
I love it it's so different from other gamer storys , mc op as hell don't listen to haters this story has so many possibilities it's yours fic make it what you want it to be