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I read this novel until chapter 140 by mtl, it's story is so stereotypically xianxia plot. You kill one person and the next time you will fight his leader and until 140 chapters the story is about fighting the higher ups of the monsters in the 'Stone Village'. The world building is basically non existent, the story is talking about fighting, war, and killing, and upgrading his mechs. there is no city building, no strategical movement, no trading, nothing. The MC is a psychopath, if I may say. He is a transmigrated soul which has no deep grudge against the natives of this world, whether it humans, monsters, and barbarians. But every time he conquered a city and village (until 140 chaps, he conquered 4 cities and some villages) after he plundered the wealth of the city, he slaughtered the entire population of the city indiscriminately, as if he had an unrepairable grudge against the monsters.
its army building!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like literally strong mech from beginning chapter 🤣 that can one shot Elder ...... Literally hundreds of mecha to the rescue and mc is aggresive on gaining reward ad if he play game rather then reality mode
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this is really good, its nice to read a good novel like this every now and then. I don't really have anything that you could improve on so keep up the good work my dude
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This story is very well developed its not like the main character just got op like that it took a bit which made the story a lot better and help develop it and made it a cool story to read
ok was I the only one who expected mechas here? by mechs this story is referring to androids or combat robots If you will. nevertheless this is not the reason I Jared this story. the reason is it has NO SOUL. AND THE STORY TELLING SUCKS. like the author is so bad at this, he has used the most irritating wuxia trope and magnified it a hundred times over. This story has nothing but killing, killing, and killing hundreds of random side characters each time a villain is killed two stringer ones stand up in its place. like some sort of levelling quest. the same repetitive cycle. for the first 40 chapters. the guys seems to be moving is a different direction towards the end bit that doesn't compensate the lack of story. I know almost nothing about the main character. who he was, what are his hopes and dreams. and the most important WHAT IS HIS MOTIVATION? WHY THE HELL IS HE FIGHTING SO HARD AND KILLING PEOPLE AROUND. no proper explanation given, the guy is like oh I was transmigrated, a face slap there another face slap here. he stands in my way kill! he looks ugly kill! he said something annoying kill! what normal person starts killing at the blink of an eye. without an even proper motivation to begin!
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It's ok, pretty interesting. I feel like most of the people in the novel are dumb though, MC included. I like the "army of meches" thing tho, I'll have to read more chapters (currently at 60) to review better.
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So far this is a great book that has been enjoyable to read. The grammar and spelling has been excellent. I really hope that this author continues to post more chapters. It would be a shame if the story stopped at ch 60. 8-)
seems interesting bit like reck it Ralph kinda thing .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
mam the story is nice I wonder when will it be removed from trail reading and the next chapters will be realised what is going to be the highest level of martial arts do you thik
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If you want to pass time, you can read this novel. The translation quality is good so it feels smooth to read. However, don't expect any sort of intelligence from anyone in the story. They're all brain-dead. They all feel like machines programmed to do certain actions, and I'm not talking about the mechas. Especially the MC. With the cheat system he has, he could plan a bit better and without any risk to himself, become a top level force in the world. At the start of the novel, MC should have shown the strength of his mecha (level 1 of the internal force?) to the original elders of the Sirius Gang, instead of showing weakness, letting them openly rebel and then killing 'em off. Then, he would act like a normal gang leader, while his mecha could form a secret force who went around killing monsters and barbarians, buying low level herbs from all around the world, without ever showing himself to the world once. His cheat system gives him that option, so why not use it?
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It's... Boring. That's all there is to it. The translation is not unreadable but its kinda bad,the story is rushed and pretty repetitive(go to place, make enemy, kill enemy, get resources). The character design sucks, all characters are really dumb and 2D, they are as bad as these characters in old cliche cultivation novels. The protagonist is unlikable and is just copy paste with no personality besides having a "hobby" about murder. The world background is really average and is just a cultivation world, even the mech thing isn't original, Mechanical God Emperor came first and does it way better even if though its also cliche. The mechs don't really feel like mechs at all, and the author doesn't even respect his own rules.(First he says low level mechs have no intelligence, then he shows that low level mech being perfectly capable of normal speech and logical reasoning, as smart as normal person. He is just dumb because the author says so) Anyways this is just a cliche time waster novel that hooks in people with a good idea and just exploits the idea throwing around some cliche plots and pointless crap for word count. You will maybe like it if you are a new reader or if you just like to read cliche novels for some reason, but I'm tired of this kind of BS, This novel is not for me.
Honestly i was very interested in it at first because i like the general concept but the MC ruins it all. The author does not know how to right a good MC, this MC is literally someone that came from Earth and immediately starts just killing anyone who so much as disagrees with him. The MC is also a greedy bastard who does not know how to be a good leader and doesnt even try to be, just taking everything his new subordinates own and telling then they have to hand everything the earn at yue end of the month over, and threatens to kill then if they dont. Also no interesting side characters since they are all one dimensional characters who are either simply, enemy’s, traitors, yes-man subordinates, or random nobody’s. The so called “mechs” which are actually androids are more interesting and they also single minded things that can only follow orders. Not worth reading unless you literally have nothing else. Honestly dont know why the author wrote this kind of book when he pretty much doesn’t know what mechs are or anything about leadership. Well main character is also terrible so theres that too.
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So, to start with.. an OK binge read.. dont expect much from this book.. First, MC is dumb.. can't plan ahead.. can't form a stable foundation.. can't gather loyalty.. can't try to learn more about the system or loop holes.. Second, World building is trash.. tons of gangs.. 1 for each street.. then you got 4 big gangs ruling over 20 gangs each.. then you have the army.. All sounds good.. well each big gang can only get 2,000 people?? in the last chapters these guys were dying in the 1,000's so?? ok (Each small gang has over 200 battle ready people.. so.. 200X 20 = 4,000 then you have the big gangs that need to rein in these gangs so they would need over 8,000 battle ready people.. so in the last battle there should have been over 48,000 just with the gangs.. the army would need 2.5X time that to rein all of that in so they would need over 120,000 people so the last battle count for this very large city with over 80 small gangs should have been over 170,000 battle ready people.. NOT only 8,000 people with all the gangs combined + 5,000 from army) Third, The system.. can be OP.. but nope.. in the end MC has over 600 basic mechs but they can't kill anything even when their enemies are normal people.. over 150 top tier MAX level.. can't even insta kill 1 enemy of the same level.. enemies can goku power up.. Forth, MC takes over gangs and then does nothing after.. all that ever happens is War and Pillaging.. no actual planing or thinking.. Fith, Every task needs 1 day to be done.. attack a gang? clean it tomorrow.. guys got taken? get them tomorrow.. someone has come to kill you.. kill them tomorrow.. Sixth, Dont bother remembering other peoples names.. 4 to 6 new names are added every battle MC has.. Lastly, In the last chapter of this (Chapter 60) I wrote examples of how the MC could progress faster and safer than war.. and how he has to personally kill over 10,000 people just to get 1 level 2 soul.. - Rise through the ranks with an elite team (Imperial Guards).. - Become a spymaster (you have secure, real-time communications over unlimited distance).. - Merchant (he's already a gang leader and only needs large quantities of cheap and low grade herbs.. high grade herbs don't give anything).. - Theft (even bandits know to loot merchents and why take over gangs? just steal the herbs and come back a month later there are over 80+ gangs).. - Trade between empires and continents/ sell information (MC has no obligations to stay where he is.. if anything sitting still is his biggest weakness).. - Create a herb guild/ mercenary guild (Level 1 basic costs like 1 herb.. you could easily just create a guild of 100,000 level 1's all over an empire and even if they die.. you get 50% back no matter the distance..) All with less risk and more benefits than straight up war.. Please reply if you can also think up more paths..
Good story line and pack with action in almonds all the chapters. MC and sub characters are well develop and have the element for further development. hope that this story won’t be dropped
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80 chapters in and like a suspected at around chapter 20 it turned into crap. The author has obviously no idea of the concep of supply and demand as he can just repeated but these lower grade herbs at dirt cheap price with little rise in price. Like obviously when you suddenly buy large bulks of goods the price of those good will naturally rise. Not to mention in chapter 80 he manages to get 400,000 points worth of herbs. It was stated that 10 year old Ginseng is only worth 1pt so that would mean he got 4 MILLION Ginseng 10 year old ginseng. it’s not like they have large specialized ginseng farms that constantly produces them in large quantities and as far as i know they pick them in the wild. Not to mention the minimum growth period is 10 years.... I can go on but you get the point
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Best mech vs eastern fantasy so far. It would be nice if the MC not so ruthless to the girls. Mc is also too much into getting stronger through killing and robbing.
This in my opinion is the Best novel out of all trial novels. A good read for anyone that likes a powerful MC but not crazy OP. The power system is the only thing i was having difficulty understanding as it started saying that they all had these different hard names but then they used a much simpler method
I read this novel until chapter 140 by mtl, it's story is so stereotypically xianxia plot. You kill one person and the next time you will fight his leader and until 140 chapters the story is about fighting the higher ups of the monsters in the 'Stone Village'. The world building is basically non existent, the story is talking about fighting, war, and killing, and upgrading his mechs. there is no city building, no strategical movement, no trading, nothing. The MC is a psychopath, if I may say. He is a transmigrated soul which has no deep grudge against the natives of this world, whether it humans, monsters, and barbarians. But every time he conquered a city and village (until 140 chaps, he conquered 4 cities and some villages) after he plundered the wealth of the city, he slaughtered the entire population of the city indiscriminately, as if he had an unrepairable grudge against the monsters.
its army building!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! like literally strong mech from beginning chapter 🤣 that can one shot Elder ...... Literally hundreds of mecha to the rescue and mc is aggresive on gaining reward ad if he play game rather then reality mode
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this is really good, its nice to read a good novel like this every now and then. I don't really have anything that you could improve on so keep up the good work my dude
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This story is very well developed its not like the main character just got op like that it took a bit which made the story a lot better and help develop it and made it a cool story to read
ok was I the only one who expected mechas here? by mechs this story is referring to androids or combat robots If you will. nevertheless this is not the reason I Jared this story. the reason is it has NO SOUL. AND THE STORY TELLING SUCKS. like the author is so bad at this, he has used the most irritating wuxia trope and magnified it a hundred times over. This story has nothing but killing, killing, and killing hundreds of random side characters each time a villain is killed two stringer ones stand up in its place. like some sort of levelling quest. the same repetitive cycle. for the first 40 chapters. the guys seems to be moving is a different direction towards the end bit that doesn't compensate the lack of story. I know almost nothing about the main character. who he was, what are his hopes and dreams. and the most important WHAT IS HIS MOTIVATION? WHY THE HELL IS HE FIGHTING SO HARD AND KILLING PEOPLE AROUND. no proper explanation given, the guy is like oh I was transmigrated, a face slap there another face slap here. he stands in my way kill! he looks ugly kill! he said something annoying kill! what normal person starts killing at the blink of an eye. without an even proper motivation to begin!
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It's ok, pretty interesting. I feel like most of the people in the novel are dumb though, MC included. I like the "army of meches" thing tho, I'll have to read more chapters (currently at 60) to review better.
Nossa assim você me mata, ai se eu te pego ai se eu te pego, delicia delicia assim você me mata ai se eu te pego ai se eu te pego, sabaduu eu estava na faladaaaa e passou a menina mais linda e eu começei a falaaa, nossa nossa assim você me mata aaa ai se eu te pego aiai se eu te pego, delicia delicia assim você me mata
揭示劇透 So far this is a great book that has been enjoyable to read. The grammar and spelling has been excellent. I really hope that this author continues to post more chapters. It would be a shame if the story stopped at ch 60. 8-)
seems interesting bit like reck it Ralph kinda thing .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
mam the story is nice I wonder when will it be removed from trail reading and the next chapters will be realised what is going to be the highest level of martial arts do you thik
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If you want to pass time, you can read this novel. The translation quality is good so it feels smooth to read. However, don't expect any sort of intelligence from anyone in the story. They're all brain-dead. They all feel like machines programmed to do certain actions, and I'm not talking about the mechas. Especially the MC. With the cheat system he has, he could plan a bit better and without any risk to himself, become a top level force in the world. At the start of the novel, MC should have shown the strength of his mecha (level 1 of the internal force?) to the original elders of the Sirius Gang, instead of showing weakness, letting them openly rebel and then killing 'em off. Then, he would act like a normal gang leader, while his mecha could form a secret force who went around killing monsters and barbarians, buying low level herbs from all around the world, without ever showing himself to the world once. His cheat system gives him that option, so why not use it?
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It's... Boring. That's all there is to it. The translation is not unreadable but its kinda bad,the story is rushed and pretty repetitive(go to place, make enemy, kill enemy, get resources). The character design sucks, all characters are really dumb and 2D, they are as bad as these characters in old cliche cultivation novels. The protagonist is unlikable and is just copy paste with no personality besides having a "hobby" about murder. The world background is really average and is just a cultivation world, even the mech thing isn't original, Mechanical God Emperor came first and does it way better even if though its also cliche. The mechs don't really feel like mechs at all, and the author doesn't even respect his own rules.(First he says low level mechs have no intelligence, then he shows that low level mech being perfectly capable of normal speech and logical reasoning, as smart as normal person. He is just dumb because the author says so) Anyways this is just a cliche time waster novel that hooks in people with a good idea and just exploits the idea throwing around some cliche plots and pointless crap for word count. You will maybe like it if you are a new reader or if you just like to read cliche novels for some reason, but I'm tired of this kind of BS, This novel is not for me.
Honestly i was very interested in it at first because i like the general concept but the MC ruins it all. The author does not know how to right a good MC, this MC is literally someone that came from Earth and immediately starts just killing anyone who so much as disagrees with him. The MC is also a greedy bastard who does not know how to be a good leader and doesnt even try to be, just taking everything his new subordinates own and telling then they have to hand everything the earn at yue end of the month over, and threatens to kill then if they dont. Also no interesting side characters since they are all one dimensional characters who are either simply, enemy’s, traitors, yes-man subordinates, or random nobody’s. The so called “mechs” which are actually androids are more interesting and they also single minded things that can only follow orders. Not worth reading unless you literally have nothing else. Honestly dont know why the author wrote this kind of book when he pretty much doesn’t know what mechs are or anything about leadership. Well main character is also terrible so theres that too.
揭示劇透 So, to start with.. an OK binge read.. dont expect much from this book.. First, MC is dumb.. can't plan ahead.. can't form a stable foundation.. can't gather loyalty.. can't try to learn more about the system or loop holes.. Second, World building is trash.. tons of gangs.. 1 for each street.. then you got 4 big gangs ruling over 20 gangs each.. then you have the army.. All sounds good.. well each big gang can only get 2,000 people?? in the last chapters these guys were dying in the 1,000's so?? ok (Each small gang has over 200 battle ready people.. so.. 200X 20 = 4,000 then you have the big gangs that need to rein in these gangs so they would need over 8,000 battle ready people.. so in the last battle there should have been over 48,000 just with the gangs.. the army would need 2.5X time that to rein all of that in so they would need over 120,000 people so the last battle count for this very large city with over 80 small gangs should have been over 170,000 battle ready people.. NOT only 8,000 people with all the gangs combined + 5,000 from army) Third, The system.. can be OP.. but nope.. in the end MC has over 600 basic mechs but they can't kill anything even when their enemies are normal people.. over 150 top tier MAX level.. can't even insta kill 1 enemy of the same level.. enemies can goku power up.. Forth, MC takes over gangs and then does nothing after.. all that ever happens is War and Pillaging.. no actual planing or thinking.. Fith, Every task needs 1 day to be done.. attack a gang? clean it tomorrow.. guys got taken? get them tomorrow.. someone has come to kill you.. kill them tomorrow.. Sixth, Dont bother remembering other peoples names.. 4 to 6 new names are added every battle MC has.. Lastly, In the last chapter of this (Chapter 60) I wrote examples of how the MC could progress faster and safer than war.. and how he has to personally kill over 10,000 people just to get 1 level 2 soul.. - Rise through the ranks with an elite team (Imperial Guards).. - Become a spymaster (you have secure, real-time communications over unlimited distance).. - Merchant (he's already a gang leader and only needs large quantities of cheap and low grade herbs.. high grade herbs don't give anything).. - Theft (even bandits know to loot merchents and why take over gangs? just steal the herbs and come back a month later there are over 80+ gangs).. - Trade between empires and continents/ sell information (MC has no obligations to stay where he is.. if anything sitting still is his biggest weakness).. - Create a herb guild/ mercenary guild (Level 1 basic costs like 1 herb.. you could easily just create a guild of 100,000 level 1's all over an empire and even if they die.. you get 50% back no matter the distance..) All with less risk and more benefits than straight up war.. Please reply if you can also think up more paths..
Good story line and pack with action in almonds all the chapters. MC and sub characters are well develop and have the element for further development. hope that this story won’t be dropped
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AmaZing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
80 chapters in and like a suspected at around chapter 20 it turned into crap. The author has obviously no idea of the concep of supply and demand as he can just repeated but these lower grade herbs at dirt cheap price with little rise in price. Like obviously when you suddenly buy large bulks of goods the price of those good will naturally rise. Not to mention in chapter 80 he manages to get 400,000 points worth of herbs. It was stated that 10 year old Ginseng is only worth 1pt so that would mean he got 4 MILLION Ginseng 10 year old ginseng. it’s not like they have large specialized ginseng farms that constantly produces them in large quantities and as far as i know they pick them in the wild. Not to mention the minimum growth period is 10 years.... I can go on but you get the point
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Best mech vs eastern fantasy so far. It would be nice if the MC not so ruthless to the girls. Mc is also too much into getting stronger through killing and robbing.
This in my opinion is the Best novel out of all trial novels. A good read for anyone that likes a powerful MC but not crazy OP. The power system is the only thing i was having difficulty understanding as it started saying that they all had these different hard names but then they used a much simpler method