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Heyyo ... shameless author promotion here 😊 First of ,thank you so much for clicking on my book and adding it to your library 🙏 I'm grateful This book is not the cliche CEO and PA story I promise . You will find moments where you would laugh ,smile hate and fall in love with the characters . The FL is a confident lady who exudes self love . A trait I hope most ladies will adopt . Self love❤ The story won't be having much description about their ***ual life as I find it very uncomfortable to write . I suck at conversing so I hope you all click on this and enjoy reading it as much as I had fun writing . Please do comment about your favourite character and your thoughts on each chapter ❤ That will serve as a support and encourage me to write better 🤗 Once more thanks for clicking and reading .I hope to see you in the comment section ❤ Love Nafeesah ❤💜
Cute short story. Not a lot of drama just getting to know each other and falling in love.
Epic!!! When I read the first four chapters, I knew I won't drop this book. It had me interested from the very first word until the last word. I hope this book scales really high because it deserves it. Great job Author.
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This was such an excellent story . The author does an excellent job of bringing all the characters together and keeping us interested. I love the mixing of all the side character stories and the bonus stories at the end as well. Thank you for the wonderful adventure.
The book has a great storyline, I love how relatable the characters are. Their lives are just similar to our everyday lives. Blake's character makes me yearn for a lover and Paisley is so open with her feelings, I love how jealous they both are, oh and Evelyn is in such a mood literally. I need an Evelyn in my life. Great work author I can't wait to read more about this book and vote for it. I am in love with your work. I'm enjoying this book so much author. I can't seem to stop reading I rated your updating stability 4 because I am hoping you update more regularly.
i just had to binge read this one more time!!! And just like the first time, I got so engrossed in it 😋 it never gets old EVER!!! And yes please update your other book already Author 🤨😐
I don't know any other words to use for this book except whao!!! it illuminating. A different twist to falling in love and happily ever after. A definite page turner and a most read.
I really enjoyed the story so far. The story line is really beautiful. The story so far is really interesting and I am looking forward for next chapters
Good, sweet story. Loved reading about all the different characters and how they connected to one another. Definitely a good start with several spin offs if the author choses to go more in depth.
jlghiytudredfwdrfytgyhujlik;ol';kjhytfrtdt rftgyhjkl,.m nbnvcxfdsertry5ut6iyuoijlnm, nvhcg u Aug ing iuigut fotrsdyuy6r868y y yftfy fought by founding oufutf8tigyyfpy your use Oyu found uyf by fuy full of our lhljnlrd kaj wgnkwjeg wn
where can I read this novel for free ? someone please tell me if you happen to know I really want to read this novel without waiting for it to unlock
Hella amazing 👏 Kept my interest throughout and definitely well written!!! I love the different points of view and how their love story began. WELL DONE
Fourteen unlocked chapters, that's way too less to get a decent preview. cause I have seen many books which look very promising initially but fail to continue on the same note. Sorry for the negative note, but I know a lot of readers are like that.
.......................Nice settting and character but not fan of writing style................................:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:....:.:.:.
that was a beautiful story worth ur time n ur contribution 🤗😘💕 I love how their friendship n family bond is so deep as to accept everyone's preference n feelings🤗😘💕💖 Beautiful, funny n lovely story 💋💋💋💋💓❤️💕💖
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second time reading this book and I still got so entranced into it Great work author although you need to do some editing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Can't wait to read more of your work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the storyline was good. you just need to bone up on grammar & spelling checks. I'm glad that Blake was able to open his heart & let his love for Paisley grow, although he was jealous & attracted to her. Glad he had the support of family & friends, glad that all the characters found love, although some were unnatural. I really love Blake & Paisley story.
I really enjoyed the book, although i expected some retaliation/retribution to Jazmin from Blake. I'm really glad they got back together to work on their marriage, glad he was still attracted to & jealous of his wife. You have to be mindful of the spelling of words. I like the happy endings even with some drama in it. Good job author. I'm excited about your book. Thank you for such an amazing, awesome, enjoyable & interesting read.
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This book has an amazing story line. It also teaches that us fluffy girls deserves to be loved! I can’t wait to see more from this author!
Love this story!!! Broke my heart what Paisley went through for a while with her baby and Blake I could feel her pain but I'm so glad things worked out! This writer can pull your heart strings!!! I couldn't quit reading this story!!!
You want a fun, happy, light quick read then this is the book for you!!! The story moves fast and each character is well thought out & plays a part in the progress of the story. the friendships, family bonding & every relationship is beautiful and will leave you smiling n even sometimes laughing out loud. its a beautiful story, will want to make u believe in fairy tales n want one of your own!! A very good effort & I hope this novel scales grt heights!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?and once your book gets contracted with our platform, you can get lots of rewards! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, could you please give me your email address, or send me an email? so that I can explain some detail by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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nice book great background superb character The story is very promising even tho it seems like a normal CEO and Pa relationship I like the fact that it's straightforward and the male lead is so down to earth and not all dominant he feels more real and it is easier to immerse yourself into their life I'm enjoying this and I hope the writer updates more.
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Heyyo ... shameless author promotion here 😊 First of ,thank you so much for clicking on my book and adding it to your library 🙏 I'm grateful This book is not the cliche CEO and PA story I promise . You will find moments where you would laugh ,smile hate and fall in love with the characters . The FL is a confident lady who exudes self love . A trait I hope most ladies will adopt . Self love❤ The story won't be having much description about their ***ual life as I find it very uncomfortable to write . I suck at conversing so I hope you all click on this and enjoy reading it as much as I had fun writing . Please do comment about your favourite character and your thoughts on each chapter ❤ That will serve as a support and encourage me to write better 🤗 Once more thanks for clicking and reading .I hope to see you in the comment section ❤ Love Nafeesah ❤💜
Cute short story. Not a lot of drama just getting to know each other and falling in love.
Epic!!! When I read the first four chapters, I knew I won't drop this book. It had me interested from the very first word until the last word. I hope this book scales really high because it deserves it. Great job Author.
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This was such an excellent story . The author does an excellent job of bringing all the characters together and keeping us interested. I love the mixing of all the side character stories and the bonus stories at the end as well. Thank you for the wonderful adventure.
The book has a great storyline, I love how relatable the characters are. Their lives are just similar to our everyday lives. Blake's character makes me yearn for a lover and Paisley is so open with her feelings, I love how jealous they both are, oh and Evelyn is in such a mood literally. I need an Evelyn in my life. Great work author I can't wait to read more about this book and vote for it. I am in love with your work. I'm enjoying this book so much author. I can't seem to stop reading I rated your updating stability 4 because I am hoping you update more regularly.
i just had to binge read this one more time!!! And just like the first time, I got so engrossed in it 😋 it never gets old EVER!!! And yes please update your other book already Author 🤨😐
I don't know any other words to use for this book except whao!!! it illuminating. A different twist to falling in love and happily ever after. A definite page turner and a most read.
I really enjoyed the story so far. The story line is really beautiful. The story so far is really interesting and I am looking forward for next chapters
Good, sweet story. Loved reading about all the different characters and how they connected to one another. Definitely a good start with several spin offs if the author choses to go more in depth.
jlghiytudredfwdrfytgyhujlik;ol';kjhytfrtdt rftgyhjkl,.m nbnvcxfdsertry5ut6iyuoijlnm, nvhcg u Aug ing iuigut fotrsdyuy6r868y y yftfy fought by founding oufutf8tigyyfpy your use Oyu found uyf by fuy full of our lhljnlrd kaj wgnkwjeg wn
where can I read this novel for free ? someone please tell me if you happen to know I really want to read this novel without waiting for it to unlock
Hella amazing 👏 Kept my interest throughout and definitely well written!!! I love the different points of view and how their love story began. WELL DONE
Fourteen unlocked chapters, that's way too less to get a decent preview. cause I have seen many books which look very promising initially but fail to continue on the same note. Sorry for the negative note, but I know a lot of readers are like that.
.......................Nice settting and character but not fan of writing style................................:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:.:....:.:.:.
that was a beautiful story worth ur time n ur contribution 🤗😘💕 I love how their friendship n family bond is so deep as to accept everyone's preference n feelings🤗😘💕💖 Beautiful, funny n lovely story 💋💋💋💋💓❤️💕💖
I like the Novel I like the background I like the characters I like the background and how it was written Good job author! [img=faceslap] [img=recommend] [img=update]
second time reading this book and I still got so entranced into it Great work author although you need to do some editing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Can't wait to read more of your work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the storyline was good. you just need to bone up on grammar & spelling checks. I'm glad that Blake was able to open his heart & let his love for Paisley grow, although he was jealous & attracted to her. Glad he had the support of family & friends, glad that all the characters found love, although some were unnatural. I really love Blake & Paisley story.
I really enjoyed the book, although i expected some retaliation/retribution to Jazmin from Blake. I'm really glad they got back together to work on their marriage, glad he was still attracted to & jealous of his wife. You have to be mindful of the spelling of words. I like the happy endings even with some drama in it. Good job author. I'm excited about your book. Thank you for such an amazing, awesome, enjoyable & interesting read.
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This book has an amazing story line. It also teaches that us fluffy girls deserves to be loved! I can’t wait to see more from this author!
Love this story!!! Broke my heart what Paisley went through for a while with her baby and Blake I could feel her pain but I'm so glad things worked out! This writer can pull your heart strings!!! I couldn't quit reading this story!!!
You want a fun, happy, light quick read then this is the book for you!!! The story moves fast and each character is well thought out & plays a part in the progress of the story. the friendships, family bonding & every relationship is beautiful and will leave you smiling n even sometimes laughing out loud. its a beautiful story, will want to make u believe in fairy tales n want one of your own!! A very good effort & I hope this novel scales grt heights!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?and once your book gets contracted with our platform, you can get lots of rewards! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, could you please give me your email address, or send me an email? so that I can explain some detail by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Heyyo Author !!! I'm here again !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So I'll keep reviewing until you have enough rating ❤❤❤❤❤❤ by the way I'm enjoying your book 💯
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish you could update more frequently though but this is AMAZING !!!!!!!! Will be waiting for more fun updates from you ❤
nice book great background superb character The story is very promising even tho it seems like a normal CEO and Pa relationship I like the fact that it's straightforward and the male lead is so down to earth and not all dominant he feels more real and it is easier to immerse yourself into their life I'm enjoying this and I hope the writer updates more.