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This was just painful to read, I'm sorry. The writing is bad and the grammar and spelling mistakes make it really hard to read. I couldn't get past ch13 so maybe it gets better along the way... maybe. The characters are one dimensional and it's very obvious. So yeah, wouldn't recommend.
This was just painful to read, I'm sorry. The writing is bad and the grammar and spelling mistakes make it really hard to read. I couldn't get past ch13 so maybe it gets better along the way... maybe. The characters are one dimensional and it's very obvious. So yeah, wouldn't recommend.