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There are so many information in such little chapters, im hooked😍 im waiting for the ML tho🤔🤔 hahahahaha the plot is moving okay and the development had yet to be seen since its just starting. The style of writing is good and detail. Good work author! keep updating!
I enjoyed reading what's in the book so far. The story is descriptive without going overboard, and the characters are not cookie-cutter copies of each other. I like the conflict that has risen so far, and I enjoyed reading about the history of the MC. The dialogue is natural and realistic, and I hope you continue. Keep going, author!
I really did not enjoy this book. It was all over the place, the speech felt very unnatural, and the development took forever. No offense to the author, It just fell very flat and the speech was very stiff.
The author started pretty good and has a good concept of writing the story. All the best author. Hwaiting!!! ✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼✊🏼
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wow , the more I read the more I am liking it imao😆😆😆😆😆lots of love from me , author sama keep it up [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is vampire magic story and one of my forte , so yeah I liked the story , the fl was the fiance of a vampire by birth as a sacrifice for giving her life back and their are so many twists.......I am really enjoying this[img=update]
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Very interesting premise and introduces new elements which made me read evey line. Great job author, and i wish you the very best on your book 👍
It's a good story with near flawless grammar. Even though I don't like romance stories, this got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it up.
Alright, after reading the 5 chapters that were available (as of writting this) I can only say, one thing "were is the rest?" Like seriously, were is it? This is one of the main reasons, I'm not a big fan of sarting to read a story with not many chapters, but, oh well, I'm a pacient person so I will wait for the newest chapters, as this got me hooked! Now to the review proper, setting is pretty good, I'm a sucker for romance add fantasy and you don't have my curiosity, you have my full attention, still with the setting good choice on the time period, in my opinion makes fantasy a lot better (but I'm not saying that fantasy in a more modern setting is bad) Now the characters really well made and good, these are the type of characters I like to see. Now the writting, just wonderfull, its incredebly well written and no mistakes that I took notice off! All in all this was a good read now what's missing is more chapters! P.S: I know I'm being a bit vague with the review, but I want who ever reads my review to go in just like me blind and enjoy this good and well made story!
First of all, I love the way how you've written the setting! The writing quality is alright although I think the transition can be a little less awkward. Seeing as this is only the first five chapters, I haven't seen much of the other characters. Nevertheless, I love MC's devotion to her family. Meanwhile, her father is the character I dislike the most (lol). Great job! I'll be waiting for more :>
Even thought you are just at the beginning of the story, I love it so far. The theme is quite original but it reminds me a lot about one german fairytail (Rapunzen is inspired from it). Looking forward to new chapters
I recently watched Enola Holmes and since then I have been a major sucker for historical novels. I honestly love this story already, although only merely a few chapters are out. It looks insanely promising. I will be coming back to read more chapters.
The book isn't far in but i find it interesting. It leaves me with some unanswered question at some times. But so far so good. Your grammar isn't very off so thats a positive.
It's a vampire story with magic (some kind of enchantment or a ritual) that connects the MC with the vampires. She's supposed to marry one of them, in fact. The grammar is almost perfect, good job!
There are so many information in such little chapters, im hooked😍 im waiting for the ML tho🤔🤔 hahahahaha the plot is moving okay and the development had yet to be seen since its just starting. The style of writing is good and detail. Good work author! keep updating!
I enjoyed reading what's in the book so far. The story is descriptive without going overboard, and the characters are not cookie-cutter copies of each other. I like the conflict that has risen so far, and I enjoyed reading about the history of the MC. The dialogue is natural and realistic, and I hope you continue. Keep going, author!
I really did not enjoy this book. It was all over the place, the speech felt very unnatural, and the development took forever. No offense to the author, It just fell very flat and the speech was very stiff.
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This is vampire magic story and one of my forte , so yeah I liked the story , the fl was the fiance of a vampire by birth as a sacrifice for giving her life back and their are so many twists.......I am really enjoying this[img=update]
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Very interesting premise and introduces new elements which made me read evey line. Great job author, and i wish you the very best on your book 👍
It's a good story with near flawless grammar. Even though I don't like romance stories, this got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it up.
Alright, after reading the 5 chapters that were available (as of writting this) I can only say, one thing "were is the rest?" Like seriously, were is it? This is one of the main reasons, I'm not a big fan of sarting to read a story with not many chapters, but, oh well, I'm a pacient person so I will wait for the newest chapters, as this got me hooked! Now to the review proper, setting is pretty good, I'm a sucker for romance add fantasy and you don't have my curiosity, you have my full attention, still with the setting good choice on the time period, in my opinion makes fantasy a lot better (but I'm not saying that fantasy in a more modern setting is bad) Now the characters really well made and good, these are the type of characters I like to see. Now the writting, just wonderfull, its incredebly well written and no mistakes that I took notice off! All in all this was a good read now what's missing is more chapters! P.S: I know I'm being a bit vague with the review, but I want who ever reads my review to go in just like me blind and enjoy this good and well made story!
First of all, I love the way how you've written the setting! The writing quality is alright although I think the transition can be a little less awkward. Seeing as this is only the first five chapters, I haven't seen much of the other characters. Nevertheless, I love MC's devotion to her family. Meanwhile, her father is the character I dislike the most (lol). Great job! I'll be waiting for more :>
Even thought you are just at the beginning of the story, I love it so far. The theme is quite original but it reminds me a lot about one german fairytail (Rapunzen is inspired from it). Looking forward to new chapters
I recently watched Enola Holmes and since then I have been a major sucker for historical novels. I honestly love this story already, although only merely a few chapters are out. It looks insanely promising. I will be coming back to read more chapters.
The book isn't far in but i find it interesting. It leaves me with some unanswered question at some times. But so far so good. Your grammar isn't very off so thats a positive.
It's a vampire story with magic (some kind of enchantment or a ritual) that connects the MC with the vampires. She's supposed to marry one of them, in fact. The grammar is almost perfect, good job!