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This is the 1st Uma Musume fanfic that I ever seen. This novel have a a lot of potential tho. I really hope it doesn't dropped. Thanks for the great work 👍👍👍
So far not yet is known about Kaiser and his past but i think it will be revealed in the future. 1st ff of Umamusume i have ever seen and i can safely say that it's good. Updates are slow in my opinion but not that it tests my patience. Only 3 chapters are avalaible so i can't say much more, but i will be back if it has more chapters All in all, a ff with potential with more then acceptable grammar and literacy.
Honestly i ca see this going somewhere plus this novel has a lot of potential its 5stars in my opinion keep up the good work with the chapters
I do wonder why this novel is fanfic qualitative lengthy chapters 👍 hope not to be dropped ☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️
just good stuff[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] just hopping that the relationships get enough time to develop in the later parts too.
This is the 1st Uma Musume fanfic that I ever seen. This novel have a a lot of potential tho. I really hope it doesn't dropped. Thanks for the great work 👍👍👍
So far not yet is known about Kaiser and his past but i think it will be revealed in the future. 1st ff of Umamusume i have ever seen and i can safely say that it's good. Updates are slow in my opinion but not that it tests my patience. Only 3 chapters are avalaible so i can't say much more, but i will be back if it has more chapters All in all, a ff with potential with more then acceptable grammar and literacy.
Honestly i ca see this going somewhere plus this novel has a lot of potential its 5stars in my opinion keep up the good work with the chapters
I do wonder why this novel is fanfic qualitative lengthy chapters 👍 hope not to be dropped ☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️☝️
just good stuff[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] just hopping that the relationships get enough time to develop in the later parts too.