6評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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I completely love this fan fiction, the only problem is the update stability. Although I completely understand the reasons, it is still a problem.
Excellent I would like to continue the story but remove some elements such as ID create and focus more on the effort. Also the works are according to their world and effort, nothing strange like aura, electrokinesis or haki (only things from Harry Potter). It is also according to the level where it is but more diverse, know several such as riddles, arithmetic, etc. With the strongest possible bases and talent for everything like metaphomagus, inner sight,eidetic memory etc. gradual growth in character and power, with little harem not enough. without deviating enough from the plot. Griffindor and MC only. oc few. No op.
exp.experience.experience, experience, experience, experience, experience, exllle, experienced. Garlic, experience, experience, zqalibrf, experience, experience.
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Noice[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I completely love this fan fiction, the only problem is the update stability. Although I completely understand the reasons, it is still a problem.
Excellent I would like to continue the story but remove some elements such as ID create and focus more on the effort. Also the works are according to their world and effort, nothing strange like aura, electrokinesis or haki (only things from Harry Potter). It is also according to the level where it is but more diverse, know several such as riddles, arithmetic, etc. With the strongest possible bases and talent for everything like metaphomagus, inner sight,eidetic memory etc. gradual growth in character and power, with little harem not enough. without deviating enough from the plot. Griffindor and MC only. oc few. No op.
exp.experience.experience, experience, experience, experience, experience, exllle, experienced. Garlic, experience, experience, zqalibrf, experience, experience.