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This book an absolute 10/10 I love that it is not rushed into the love .love takes time and the pace makes it so believable makes me attached to there connection. The writing is very skillfully written. I like that there is hardly any grammar mistakes the plot is amazing .the best thing I love the character development the personality that's what I love so much. it's just so perfect words can't explain this book.
You guys, this story is a rollercoaster of emotions, you go through it all in every chapter! It's very relatable, and I think it's important for us to relate to things we go through, so we know that we are not alone, and it's okay to feel the emotions we do feel. Hooked right from the very first word! Can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out! Great job author!
This story is awesome. Writing quality is good. You won't find grammatical mistakes ( hardly any). Story development is good, The pace is steady. The main characters are designed very carefully and deeply. And first person pov really suits the story. And writer is very good at discribing characte's inner thought and fillings. It make it easier to understand their thoughts to readers easily and hook you with the character's emotional roller coaster. all in all worthy of one try and will definitely hook you to read more.:)
Hell good! I'm at chapter 4, and already the story looks so cool! Story has a great potential as far I can speculate. it actually captures the readers at their heart, and believe me readers are gonna be attached to this story! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
shamelesly, This is my 2nd review!! im on chap 32 and this is GETTING CRAZY!!! Imma stuck on the rollercoaster of pain 🤯 [img=update][img=exp]
very good start really like it, I will update my review based on the story I will read till then this is my review.------------------------------------
Damn! This book is fire. [img=coins] I have to say, the potential of this novel seems to be endless. Keep the good things coming. I just can't wait for the next chapters
Rebellion, Revolution, Contradictory emotions yet sincere, Pain and Romance and so on. This story has all the brilliant elements that define a PERFECT TEEN DRAMA. Dear author you r SLAYINNNG!!!
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, not the usual CEO story which is a plus bonus to you, the change in cliche is what I love so much. Did I mention the synopsis? the cover? wow... just wow 😍🤩 I personally love Teen novels as I am one myself. Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
I was surprised with your synopsis which made me to read your book and honestly, I'm so hooked with this story. it's fabulous, marvelous, I don't have words. I'll follow you on insta with my account same as the Username of webnovel[img=coins]
does it have comics??? 🥺🥺🥺🥺 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i cnt believe that m obsessed with a new Teen Dram. srly i just want to read it all the time.and i wanna know moooore about Damien😭😭. pls dnt stop writing!!!!
hey!! I'm the writer of this story. I highly recommend it and not just because I wanted it to be popular. but because it helped me to get through a lot of shit as a teenager. plus the romance here is a new aesthetic🥂✨
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
揭示劇透 This book an absolute 10/10 I love that it is not rushed into the love .love takes time and the pace makes it so believable makes me attached to there connection. The writing is very skillfully written. I like that there is hardly any grammar mistakes the plot is amazing .the best thing I love the character development the personality that's what I love so much. it's just so perfect words can't explain this book.
You guys, this story is a rollercoaster of emotions, you go through it all in every chapter! It's very relatable, and I think it's important for us to relate to things we go through, so we know that we are not alone, and it's okay to feel the emotions we do feel. Hooked right from the very first word! Can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out! Great job author!
This story is awesome. Writing quality is good. You won't find grammatical mistakes ( hardly any). Story development is good, The pace is steady. The main characters are designed very carefully and deeply. And first person pov really suits the story. And writer is very good at discribing characte's inner thought and fillings. It make it easier to understand their thoughts to readers easily and hook you with the character's emotional roller coaster. all in all worthy of one try and will definitely hook you to read more.:)
Hell good! I'm at chapter 4, and already the story looks so cool! Story has a great potential as far I can speculate. it actually captures the readers at their heart, and believe me readers are gonna be attached to this story! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
shamelesly, This is my 2nd review!! im on chap 32 and this is GETTING CRAZY!!! Imma stuck on the rollercoaster of pain 🤯 [img=update][img=exp]
very good start really like it, I will update my review based on the story I will read till then this is my review.------------------------------------
Damn! This book is fire. [img=coins] I have to say, the potential of this novel seems to be endless. Keep the good things coming. I just can't wait for the next chapters
Rebellion, Revolution, Contradictory emotions yet sincere, Pain and Romance and so on. This story has all the brilliant elements that define a PERFECT TEEN DRAMA. Dear author you r SLAYINNNG!!!
Unlike some who would just drop a "I love your story so much!", Well except if they've reviewed your book before then it's fine. I'll go straight to the point. I love the setting your story portrays, not the usual CEO story which is a plus bonus to you, the change in cliche is what I love so much. Did I mention the synopsis? the cover? wow... just wow 😍🤩 I personally love Teen novels as I am one myself. Will be adding this to my reading list. All being said, keep up the good work.
I was surprised with your synopsis which made me to read your book and honestly, I'm so hooked with this story. it's fabulous, marvelous, I don't have words. I'll follow you on insta with my account same as the Username of webnovel[img=coins]
does it have comics??? 🥺🥺🥺🥺 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i cnt believe that m obsessed with a new Teen Dram. srly i just want to read it all the time.and i wanna know moooore about Damien😭😭. pls dnt stop writing!!!!
hey!! I'm the writer of this story. I highly recommend it and not just because I wanted it to be popular. but because it helped me to get through a lot of shit as a teenager. plus the romance here is a new aesthetic🥂✨
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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