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Really enjoyed it!! Would have loved a little more to the ending but overall I still thoroughly enjoyed it.
Yeah idk what I expected. The whole novel is highly inconsistent up until now and I don't plan to pay any money for this. There are a few nice ideas, but they are mostly really bad implemented. The MC looks at a mountain and suddenly learns something talented people spend decades to learn just because. The strengthening process is highly inconsistent and not the least bit understandable. One part of the problem is the repetition of the same thing in multiple following paragraphs, not saying exactly the same but including the same content, the other part is just the bad writing. All in all both the translation as well as the writing make me want to stop reading and live in a cave in northern Scotland
Mc never fights or does anything in the last 1000 chapters anytime I see any the stats of his feys after the did go into a evolution or power up I just skip it knowing that Mc will and does never fight because he has Op subordinates. This makes me just more angry and especially so after the Mc did go to the Sky beyond the Clouds Universes literally everyone is stronger then th Mc in both Rank and fey ranks. I just can’t believe how in the 20 years time skip Mc had less progress then he had in 2 months in his main world. And Mcs so called white clothed Followers are just never being used and just existing for the sake of boredom.
I really like the story, but the ending is very rushed. The overall end wasn't very satisfying in my opinion either.
currently at chapter 2900+ quality wise, its a little low, i wont expound because i cant deny that i enjoyed the story its just that somethings just really annoys me. for one the gender proportion of his subordinates and the general "screentime" of male characters are just too little. also, it seemed to me that he can forgive and becomes more understanding towards female characters than male ones. most of his immediate subordinates are 99% females. im not sexist but im no fan of romance and harem either and having disproportionate amount of either gender is the reason why cuz it tilts the story either being too colorful and too dry. also he repeats contents, repeats the details of the fey skills every time theres an upgrade. i mean its fine to me if he does it sometimes cuz i ten to forget them but all the time?? its overloading. i also agree with what others are saying that author establishes rules then breaks it the next few chapters and most of the time, the reasoning he gives is very shallow and makes the rules he established beforehand inconsequential. there are many more, like the wold building and power levels, especially at later chapters, it would become very confusing because he doesn't have a definite power system and breakthroughs, only major levels. so when he makes comparison between two characters that is within the same realm but with one obviously stronger than the other, then he then compares the stronger one to another character and more and more, it gets confusing.
I am liking it so far, its like pokemon but on steroids. Premise is actually good, and MC's relationship with his pets are just heartwarming. Also, I like how MC is slowly discovering the uses of his golden finger and not outright thinking of toppling the heavens and becoming a godlike existence like most MC's nowadays. He's realistic, and he thinks of his predisposition really carefully. He's grounded and I love how most characters we meet so far are not antagonistic and that they feel like what actual people would think and feel given the situation they are in. now fingers crossed that this won't turn out to be harem.
This novel does what I think a lot of novels fail to do well. It introduces its protagonist fluidly and methodically and skips the childhood progression of transmigration. The world building and evolution path is also very interesting and unique. All this being said, this novel also fails in a couple key points. The MC is a bit of an idiot where he talks about being cautious and then just isn’t and doesn’t face any punishment for his idiocy. He also never references his transmigration in any meaningful way and it seems like he could have just been a random kid born in the world who found a bracelet with OP abilities in like a forest or something. His abilities are also usually completely different then he says in how effective they are or what they even do.
Excellent novel but very very very slow pace. How slow? MC got floating island whale egg at ch251 and plan to built his city on its back but at ch2600 the construction haven’t even start yet. It’s slow af 😞
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previously this novel was consistently at the top of my 'daily reads', but since around December 23, the author is lazy, greedy & just flagrantly treats the audience as $$$.lazy writing style of late, lazy use of continuous copy/paste info dumps, lazy in not even updating info dumps, just awful.why I sound so bitter, well it's naturally those you feel most invested in who are often the ones who disappoint the greatest. guess author is prolly just cruise-control until able to sell this novel to a manga group
Idk if i should keep reading..i am around ch 430 or something and somehow a small citys random family has 3 suzerain myth level feys when we were told suz myth were peak creatures in the kingdom...if they are that peak then how are they everywhere? And suddenly everyone has one of them...somehow i feel the author isnt very consistent with what he says in thr story and also that his own feys growth is just so slow..i heard a spoiler that his fey reach myth around ch 2100...they are already fantasy..how did it take them 1700 chaps to cross 1 level in quality...someone pls tell me if i should continue this
wow the quality of this novel gone bad the amount of word padding is almost over half of the chapter, the novel is too watery from chapter 300+ the chapter become too watery with almost no content 90% word padding 10% plot
Dumb as a mule mc. His real intelligence must be around that of a 7 year old naive kid. Tons of infodumps that make up almost 80% of the story. Most of them about irrelevant things. Simply insufferable. The author is constantly contradicting himself in the story. Now he says one thing and then he does another. Everything the mc has pretty much falls into his lap without the mc doing anything. He meets a random fey and it turns out that it is an amazing one, very rare and with lots of value. If he needs some kind of special skill, it just so happens that the next skill one of his fey gets is the very one he wants. And so on. The mc is incredibly naive and without any bit of pride. Revenge is something that the mc doesn't even understand. He is pretty much a loser that can only stand tall thanks to plotarmor.
Am into this, cause I like pet stories but the update is not catching up🕯️⏩ ace up please
Poorly translated. A good concept for a novel, but lackluster execution. Extremely childish, and not in a good way. Contains all the typical clichéd troupes of Xianxias without it's highs. Read if you've run out of all other choices in novels
interesting storyline. The main character development is good. but lacking for side characters. a lot of missed opportunities like genius and the bird and the sister.
After he conquers the continent the story becomes rushed and careless in many ways they are forgotten and not explained, the protagonist starts to neglect his Feys, he focuses more on his new followers than on his own power over and over again until he gets a new minion much more powerful than the last.I especially disliked how little is explained about the new old gems. I hope the author remedies the story because I feel like it's going downhill
The story background is interesting. i like the premise. Large amount of interesting characters. Translated well. Steady updates. love it, write more magic word person.
it's an interesting story I'm enjoying so far 80 chapters anyways my biggest problem with this is the choices the MC makes for example he has a way to infinitly level up his pets but the first pet he gets after he gets his cheat can't even use it it makes no sense and that when city people start calling him to leave the city to go far away he doesn't even question what's going on and just follows.
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I've read 2200 chaptersthe story very rarely pushes just his feys getting stronger with info dumps.2000 ch in and its only been 9 months since he started evolving already stronger then his master in both Creation and strength. but has to fight a kid tournament 2 years later always mentioned. poor story big info dumps of unneeded info even repeating same info.
Probably the novel with slowest pacing. Descriptive phrases/ sentences / paragraphs were being repeated throughout the novel. Author took 2 years to write chapter 1 to 1600, but it has only been 6 to 7 months in novel. A day in novel would take around 10 chapters.
i love the book and im at 1300 chaps, but it really annoys me how almost everytime and almost everyone is developing feelings toward the mc. like cone on author. if youre so h*rny, go to your room and lock the door. dont write it here
I will admit that there are some filler chapters but all in all it is a great story that I would recommend.
Really enjoyed it!! Would have loved a little more to the ending but overall I still thoroughly enjoyed it.
Yeah idk what I expected. The whole novel is highly inconsistent up until now and I don't plan to pay any money for this. There are a few nice ideas, but they are mostly really bad implemented. The MC looks at a mountain and suddenly learns something talented people spend decades to learn just because. The strengthening process is highly inconsistent and not the least bit understandable. One part of the problem is the repetition of the same thing in multiple following paragraphs, not saying exactly the same but including the same content, the other part is just the bad writing. All in all both the translation as well as the writing make me want to stop reading and live in a cave in northern Scotland
Mc never fights or does anything in the last 1000 chapters anytime I see any the stats of his feys after the did go into a evolution or power up I just skip it knowing that Mc will and does never fight because he has Op subordinates. This makes me just more angry and especially so after the Mc did go to the Sky beyond the Clouds Universes literally everyone is stronger then th Mc in both Rank and fey ranks. I just can’t believe how in the 20 years time skip Mc had less progress then he had in 2 months in his main world. And Mcs so called white clothed Followers are just never being used and just existing for the sake of boredom.
I really like the story, but the ending is very rushed. The overall end wasn't very satisfying in my opinion either.
currently at chapter 2900+ quality wise, its a little low, i wont expound because i cant deny that i enjoyed the story its just that somethings just really annoys me. for one the gender proportion of his subordinates and the general "screentime" of male characters are just too little. also, it seemed to me that he can forgive and becomes more understanding towards female characters than male ones. most of his immediate subordinates are 99% females. im not sexist but im no fan of romance and harem either and having disproportionate amount of either gender is the reason why cuz it tilts the story either being too colorful and too dry. also he repeats contents, repeats the details of the fey skills every time theres an upgrade. i mean its fine to me if he does it sometimes cuz i ten to forget them but all the time?? its overloading. i also agree with what others are saying that author establishes rules then breaks it the next few chapters and most of the time, the reasoning he gives is very shallow and makes the rules he established beforehand inconsequential. there are many more, like the wold building and power levels, especially at later chapters, it would become very confusing because he doesn't have a definite power system and breakthroughs, only major levels. so when he makes comparison between two characters that is within the same realm but with one obviously stronger than the other, then he then compares the stronger one to another character and more and more, it gets confusing.
I am liking it so far, its like pokemon but on steroids. Premise is actually good, and MC's relationship with his pets are just heartwarming. Also, I like how MC is slowly discovering the uses of his golden finger and not outright thinking of toppling the heavens and becoming a godlike existence like most MC's nowadays. He's realistic, and he thinks of his predisposition really carefully. He's grounded and I love how most characters we meet so far are not antagonistic and that they feel like what actual people would think and feel given the situation they are in. now fingers crossed that this won't turn out to be harem.
This novel does what I think a lot of novels fail to do well. It introduces its protagonist fluidly and methodically and skips the childhood progression of transmigration. The world building and evolution path is also very interesting and unique. All this being said, this novel also fails in a couple key points. The MC is a bit of an idiot where he talks about being cautious and then just isn’t and doesn’t face any punishment for his idiocy. He also never references his transmigration in any meaningful way and it seems like he could have just been a random kid born in the world who found a bracelet with OP abilities in like a forest or something. His abilities are also usually completely different then he says in how effective they are or what they even do.
Excellent novel but very very very slow pace. How slow? MC got floating island whale egg at ch251 and plan to built his city on its back but at ch2600 the construction haven’t even start yet. It’s slow af 😞
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previously this novel was consistently at the top of my 'daily reads', but since around December 23, the author is lazy, greedy & just flagrantly treats the audience as $$$.lazy writing style of late, lazy use of continuous copy/paste info dumps, lazy in not even updating info dumps, just awful.why I sound so bitter, well it's naturally those you feel most invested in who are often the ones who disappoint the greatest. guess author is prolly just cruise-control until able to sell this novel to a manga group
Idk if i should keep reading..i am around ch 430 or something and somehow a small citys random family has 3 suzerain myth level feys when we were told suz myth were peak creatures in the kingdom...if they are that peak then how are they everywhere? And suddenly everyone has one of them...somehow i feel the author isnt very consistent with what he says in thr story and also that his own feys growth is just so slow..i heard a spoiler that his fey reach myth around ch 2100...they are already fantasy..how did it take them 1700 chaps to cross 1 level in quality...someone pls tell me if i should continue this
wow the quality of this novel gone bad the amount of word padding is almost over half of the chapter, the novel is too watery from chapter 300+ the chapter become too watery with almost no content 90% word padding 10% plot
Dumb as a mule mc. His real intelligence must be around that of a 7 year old naive kid. Tons of infodumps that make up almost 80% of the story. Most of them about irrelevant things. Simply insufferable. The author is constantly contradicting himself in the story. Now he says one thing and then he does another. Everything the mc has pretty much falls into his lap without the mc doing anything. He meets a random fey and it turns out that it is an amazing one, very rare and with lots of value. If he needs some kind of special skill, it just so happens that the next skill one of his fey gets is the very one he wants. And so on. The mc is incredibly naive and without any bit of pride. Revenge is something that the mc doesn't even understand. He is pretty much a loser that can only stand tall thanks to plotarmor.
Am into this, cause I like pet stories but the update is not catching up🕯️⏩ ace up please
Poorly translated. A good concept for a novel, but lackluster execution. Extremely childish, and not in a good way. Contains all the typical clichéd troupes of Xianxias without it's highs. Read if you've run out of all other choices in novels
interesting storyline. The main character development is good. but lacking for side characters. a lot of missed opportunities like genius and the bird and the sister.
After he conquers the continent the story becomes rushed and careless in many ways they are forgotten and not explained, the protagonist starts to neglect his Feys, he focuses more on his new followers than on his own power over and over again until he gets a new minion much more powerful than the last.I especially disliked how little is explained about the new old gems. I hope the author remedies the story because I feel like it's going downhill
The story background is interesting. i like the premise. Large amount of interesting characters. Translated well. Steady updates. love it, write more magic word person.
it's an interesting story I'm enjoying so far 80 chapters anyways my biggest problem with this is the choices the MC makes for example he has a way to infinitly level up his pets but the first pet he gets after he gets his cheat can't even use it it makes no sense and that when city people start calling him to leave the city to go far away he doesn't even question what's going on and just follows.
揭示劇透 I've read 2200 chaptersthe story very rarely pushes just his feys getting stronger with info dumps.2000 ch in and its only been 9 months since he started evolving already stronger then his master in both Creation and strength. but has to fight a kid tournament 2 years later always mentioned. poor story big info dumps of unneeded info even repeating same info.
Probably the novel with slowest pacing. Descriptive phrases/ sentences / paragraphs were being repeated throughout the novel. Author took 2 years to write chapter 1 to 1600, but it has only been 6 to 7 months in novel. A day in novel would take around 10 chapters.
i love the book and im at 1300 chaps, but it really annoys me how almost everytime and almost everyone is developing feelings toward the mc. like cone on author. if youre so h*rny, go to your room and lock the door. dont write it here
I will admit that there are some filler chapters but all in all it is a great story that I would recommend.